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Reviewer: Buttonie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 05:39 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

Poor Nita...

Poor Mike as well...

i love them both and wants the best for them! nita needs to tell the truth right away! why didn't she say love you too? Man but Michael must have been crushed though he kind of deserve it, its still... not fair?

Anyway I'm happy that nita atleast admit! gal u r one of the best writers i have ever come across... if someone starts reading ur story they crave to write a story themself with your story's inspiration trust me! Your writing is very inspiring! Brilliant job! As always please update asap :) I can barely wait here!



Author's Response:

Hey girl :) How are you? Long time no see huh? Anyway I'm glad you reviewed! Mmm I understand but they needs to realize it! Realize their love for each other and the thing that they can't live without each other! Nita needs time to think doesnt she? Love, relationship, commitment is a BIG step and it needs to be decided carefully! GOSH Thanks very much! I'm glad you did! Thanks again hun! Your words make me wanna fly hehe ;) Update is under work but it'll be up shortly! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Thradluvr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 04:48 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

Oh Man! I'm speechless! Mike proposed his love! I didn't expect it there though Nita shouldn't tell him to get out because he suspected her! Anyone in his shoes would have done the same thing he done oh yeah i apologize to nita as well cause i also thought she's cheating on him but this chapter proves that Nita is a saint indeed!



Author's Response:

Hi girl :) How are you? Yes he did! *Hooray* Ikr? but no girl Mike deserves to be kicked out though she didn't kicked him out did she? she politely asked him to leave her alone lol! Yeah but suspecting a person without hearing their part and judging them is awful! Put yourself in Nita's shoes and look... you'll see :p Hehe all apologies will be accepted by Nita I hope. Thanks for your lovely review hun! Stay tuned! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Michaeallova Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 04:42 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

Gracious Chapter girl seriously! I just loved evry moment of it! Its amazing how you don't rush things or feelings of the characters and how acurately you tell with words. I can see a freaking movie right before my eyes when I read your chapters! I'll be far away from world that's one thing and I'll be completely in Michael and Nita's world! So brilliant! Nita needs to say I love you too soon! I can't wait to see them together as lovers! Nita's the PERFECT girl for Michael in every way and he better not miss her!



Author's Response:

Hey girl :) Wow there you are again! Glad u decided to stop by and drop a review! THANKS SO MUCH hun! I really really appreciate it! Words really can't be enough to express how grateful I am to have readers like you guys! Nita needs to get her ass straight and admit the goddamn thing to him but she's a coward and... stubborn! SMH! As if there isn't already a stubborn to torment lol! I know I know but you got to wait and see it ;) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 02:48 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

I'd like to say that your story is really excellent! One of the best I've ever read.
I apologize for not often leave comments ... I've been very tired because my job and the festivities of the Christmas season has taken my time. But actually I'm feeling discouraged to leave comments in the stories. I know it's wrong but after what happened to me and an author of another forum I became less confident and I cannot leave comments I used to make ... I just need some time.
But I want you to know that I appreciate your work! You are marvelously talented! The new writers can use your story as an example of how to write a good fanfiction.

Thank you for sharing your story with us!I love it!

CONGRATS!

Dri

Author's Response:

Hey Dri :) Girl how are you? Hun I hope you are fine now! Aw MAN, THANKS SO EFFIN' MUCH! Girl you made me blush! *Staring @ u accusingly* LOL! Aw, there is no reason to apologize... I know, I understand! xD Oh yeah I'm all in christmas mood now though I'm not a Christian hehe ;) Oh hun don't ever feel like that! Just cause some immature dellusional ass wounded your feelings once doesn't mean we all are like that. Especially me, I would expect honest, truthful reviews from my readers! If its boring then tell that rightaway. If my writing isn't good then tell it in my face! That's what I really appreciate to hear! I love critics because they can make u better *.* Though you didn't even critic her actually did you? SMDH! Anyway Let bygones be bygones! Forget those people girl! Dont let them get you! You are such a sweetheart you know that? *mwah!* Your most welcome! And Thanks again luv! That means a lot! Your review made my day! Hope to hear more from you. Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 12:07 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

oh by the way i have just added u as my favorite author bcoz u r my FAVORITE!!!



Author's Response:

AW Girl love you! Thanks! That really means SO much! <3 xx

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 12:06 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

Great! Great chapter i loved every line of it! ur writting is so capturing girl! i cant believe mike jus  said that! omg they are in love i can't wait to see nita proposing to him and mike make love to her! i have been ventilating here all these days because they are not even touchign each other for one whole months smh plzz update



Author's Response:

Hey girl :) Wow Thanks so much chicka! I really mean it! LOL ikr? Mike haven't actually said it, he blurted out! Hehe I can't wait to see that either hun don't worry it all will happen soon! Real soon! Next update is under work but it'll be up shortly! :D Thanks again pyt! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 11:03 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

Lol! No the world won't end XD Do u think? Can't wait for another update. Are you kidding!!!! You writing is so good?!!!

Author's Response:

Hehe! *slaps forehead* I'm crazy! Oh no, I'm actually insane! I didn't believe it too girl but my friends made me watch this documentry today and it just creeped me out! LOL! *Blushes* Girl you are so sweet! Thanks so much! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 09:53 am Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

Hey Girl!!!! OMG is all I can say! Really I don't know what to say. Well first off im sorry Nita for judging her, and you most of all XD Michael knew this was going to happen with this man. Men are scrum im sorry except Michael hes special. Nita is very lucky to have a friend like Nita in her life. I know I have a close friend like that too and they can help you see or realzie anything. Why can't Nita realize she loves Michael? She needs to get off her high horse pick up her big girl panties and tell Michael she loves him!!!!! Uh I just don't understand her?!?!?! Michael cares for her so much but she just won't see it. If it was me I would welcome him with both arms. How did Michael take it when Nita told him to get out. Was he crushed? He probably was cushed like he was with Diana. This whole situation is just so sad. Another great chapter under your belt. I wanted to tell you, your writing style is so wonderful. You go very indepth with your writing you go through each emotion and movement of the chacter, which truly makes a great story. Because you feel like your there experincing the story. I love stories that makes you feel that way. Great job on this story. XD A plus plus!!!!

Author's Response:

Hey hun :) LOL! I'm sure Nita accepts all our apologies :p Except Michael's hehe, just kidding! Yeah girl you are right! Most men are douchebags when it comes to patience and serenity at a situation like that! Yes Friends are very important in one's life. LOL My bestfriend's name is Jenny that's why I used her name hehe Oh yeah she will does that soon I guess. Hehe Ikr? I would welcome him with open arms as well :D Too bad she isn't his greatest fan! Of course, Michael should have been crushed, you will see ALL of that next chapter though *Mischeivous girn* So much drama in the next chapter! You guys better be up for it lol! AW, Sweet!!! THANKS SO MUCH mywaymj83 Love you so much girl! Your words are very energetic and enduring!! That's what my goal is... and I'm glad u guys are feeling the story because you see I'm not a good writer at all :P Anyway, Thanks again love <3 I REALLY appreciate it! Update will be very soon ;) Btw, girl do you think world's gonna end in 21st? XD Lots of love <3 xx 

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 09:05 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

Oh damn! she sholdnt have asked him to get out. I am waiting to read the way Michael will spoil her... ;) I knew Nita wouldnt cheat on him. Men and their Ego! try updating sooner. :)

P.S: U certainly are my fav right now. :) luv ya! <3



Author's Response:

Hi Vinaya :) LOL! Don't worry I have already started working on the update but stopped in the middle when I saw a program about world ending on 21st! Oh dear lord! Why does that got to be 21st! I'm turning 18 this 24th :/ Wow! Thanks so much luv :D Love u more! Thanks for your lovely review! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 09:05 am Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

Love it girl!!!! It's time to celebrate their love!!!! 30 days!!!! God!!!!

great update girl, very intense and real!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Nellan :) HEHE Yeah right! Hooray! For heaven's sake they have at least said it out now! *sighs* Thanks so much for your graceful review Chicka ;) Love you girl! Next update will be real soon, stay tuned lol! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 09:01 am Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

I had a feeling she either was assaulted or maybe made out with him then changed her mind. Poor Nita. I soooo wish she woulda slapped the activator from Michael's head for speaking to her that way! She should've thrown that shit with Diana's haggard ass right back in his face! The nerve!!!! He really pissed me off without even lettin her explain. Smh. I can't say I'm angry that she threw his ass out either. Michael was 1000% wrong. I'm glad they've both admitted their feelings but I'm still very angry at Michael and I don't think she should give into him just yet until he truly apologizes to her. Nita is way too damn nice with the men in her life, she has no true backbone. She should've pressed charges against that creep Steve and she should've cussed Michael's skinny ass out. 



Author's Response:

Kat! :) LMAO! Hehe u r still not believing Nita? Your review always amuses me in a way Kat. You always want Mike's ass to be slapped or ignored! That's something unique! You have never been in his side! Right that's really wrong! Talking like that before he could even hear her part!!! Dont you think Nita did a right thing about kicking his ass out?! Don't worry though she realized she's in love with him, she's not really going to jump all over him when he sees her next time. He said cruel words! And words can't be taken back. He definitely needs to apologize to her genuinely! You are right, she's a coward! She doesn't know how to avoid men or how to reject their offers right in their face! :P Thanks for your, as always, wonderful review Kat! :) Love you! Update will be soon. I hope I'll update before 21st though lol! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 08:53 am Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

I feel relieved that she didn't cheat on Michael! Shame on me I thought she cheated on him! But at the same time I feel so bad for Nita. That bastard try to rapt her! I can't believe it, I-I-I-I'm hyperventilating


Michael needs to whoops his ass


OMG noooo, Nita forgive Michael he didn't know! And yes he is a douche for believing what he saw but I believed it too ! NOOOOOOO


He said it, he adit his feelings!

(I waited for this moment to used this very special gif haha)


Oh god, I thought she wanted him to admit his feelings but seems like she is as scared as him when it comes to feeling. My whole brain is crying! Are they going to be together or what?
I almost forget about Jenny! LMAO, all she noticed is the fact that they didn't had sex for 30 days! I need Jen to shake some sense into Nita! Thank god, she admitted her feeling!


Forgive me Nita (hehe) I love me some Katerina Graham. Did you know she was the one singing on Will.I. am's "I got it from my mama"



Author's Response:

Hey ANNIE!!! Aw, That's okay babe you see, actually that's how everybody will think when they see a scenery like that! HEHE Mike's ass needs to be whooped as well lol! Aw, how sweet of you... you are asking Nita to forgive Michael for him! LOL! You have been waiting to use this gif? Haha! Girl I do it sometimes too. I in fact have lots of gifs of Mike and Nita to be used in the right place *.* Oh yeah Nita is scared too. Because probably she thinks all men in this planet are morons lol! Which is a half truth! Men can be so self-centered and egostical sometimes *rolleyes* HAHA Well think it from her place... that's what we'll ask our friend first. 'You guys aren't having sex!?' LOL! Yeah she did! And Thank god *sighs* Oh wow girl I LOVE kat too! Oh yeah I do. She's awesome! Thanks for your enlightening review Ann XD And I LOVED the gifs! Love ya girl! Lots of love <3 xx

GIF

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 06:53 am Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

Hell Naw . .I Was Thinkinq Bout This Nd Then Yhew Update . . Uhmmm. . I Gave Nita No Credit . && I Should Have . Sorry . Bhudd Im Just Soo Happy She Finally Admit To Lovinq Michael .



Author's Response:

LOL! That's a good thing *_* Woah why not girl? Nita well deserve a credit for hanging around his crazy ass dont ya think chicka? :D Hehe I'm happy too *Sighs* Thanks for reading and reviewing hun, I appreciate it! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 06:33 am Title: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

Omqeee I Just Cant Go . . Im Not Gone Juqde Nita Cuz That Would Be Wronq Bhudd Damn She Makinq My Life Hard Lolsxz.



Author's Response:

Hey Sky :) LOL! Ikr? Next chapter must have cooled you down hehe ;) Thanks for reviewing hun! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: NancylovesMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2012 01:26 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 15: Close, but no Closer ♥

Update Please???

GIF



Author's Response:

Oh Hun I'm so sorry for the late update! But I just updated successfully lol! Lots of love <3 xx PS LOVE the gif!

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