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Reviewer: BrokenBottleTop Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2012 03:20 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

I just LOOVVVED this chapter!!! My best christmas gift! Happy birthday have a blast ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks girl :) Oh I indeed had a blast! Thanks so much!! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2012 02:28 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

I'M SPEECHLESS!!!THIS AMAZING!!

What a wonderful Christmas's gift you gave me!

It brought me tears in my eyes,girl!

You deserve a standing ovation!EXCELLENT!

THANK YOU VERY MUCH!The entire chapter is...excellent!I loved it!

Merry Christmas!!:)

Author's Response:

Hi Dri :) THANKS SO DAMN MUCH hun :) Your words always lighten me up! I'm glad u enjoyed it girl!! Merry Christmas to you too :D Dri, Thanks for standing by my at the tough times girl, I love you very much!! You r one true friend!! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Michaeallova Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2012 01:59 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

And oh, I forgot to say, I love your photoshopping skill as well! The pic on this chapter is really so sweet!



Author's Response:

Thanks girl... :) xx

Reviewer: Michaeallova Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2012 01:53 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

WOW They proposed!!! This will be my favorite chapter trust me! And drunken Michael is adorable and sooooo funny! I had laughed, laughed and laughed with every thing he said. Sounds like you have more talent in comedy than romance! You have a wonderful sense of humor and good creativity! And DAMN! The final part was just soooo emotional! I'm jealous of Nita! Thanks for this beautiful update. Oh And Happy Birthday little girl I never thought you're just seventeen! You write like a prominent author :)



Author's Response:

Hey!! GOSH, Thanks that means  so much to me Michaeallova :) LOL yeah I write non-fan fics too... in fact, I first started writing non-fan fics and landed in MJ F. Though I still some non ff's seriously going on :) And yes, I'm an author that like comedies ;) Love you girl, <3 xx

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2012 09:11 am Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

wsh u a very happy bday!!!! may god bless u wth all the happiness in the world! <3 <3 <3



Author's Response:

Hey Vinaya :) Thanks so much hun! Love you girl :) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2012 07:42 am Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

Omg happy birthday girl! This chapter was absolutely epic! I loved it!!! Finally these two knuckleheads are together! Somebody cue Etta James' At Last. Lmao. But seriously, I LOVE this. This chapter was funny, sweet, romantic, just everything. I'm all glad for Nita and Michael. I really hope he loves and treats her right. They make an amazing couple. And I died at Michael being drunk! Lmao omg! Pure comedy. But yay for Nita and Mike! Finally happily and totally in love, and together. And merry Christmas! 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :) Thanks so much hun! LOL! Right! Merry Christmas to ya' too girl :) And Thanks for your wonderful review! Love you girl :) Lots of love <3 xx I'm sorry I'm just pissed off at somethings lately *_*

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2012 03:04 am Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

Merry christmas girl!!! ANd Thank you sooooooo much for this new update during holidays season!!!

Girl was a beautiful chapter! Finally she's not in denial anymore!!!

Love their interaction and the love they share, deep, passionate and sooo real!!!

THANK YOU, THANK YOU!

 



Author's Response:

Hey nellan :) Hehe You are most welcome! Oh yeah finally lol! Thanks so much hun! I really appreciate it!! Love you girl! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Mittu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2012 11:17 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

You can have no idea how loud this chapter had me loling!!! SeriouslY! Drunken Mike is HI-FREGGIN'-LARIOUS!!!! 'So will you guys marry me?' LMAO! Though at the end it was very emotional! So true! I'm SO glad that Nita finally admitted her love to him...I have been waiting this chapter forever lol! WD

AND wish you many more happy returns of the day :)



Author's Response:

Hey Mittu :) Hehe LOL! Oh yeah you are not the only one! :P Thanks so much sweetheart! I really mean it!! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2012 11:11 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

Mannn never in my life i had red such a chapter! once again you proved you are one of the best authors! You captured emotions, humor and feelings all in a single chapter! that s awesome i loooooved this chapter!!! best update eva!!!!!! OH HAPPPPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Wow you turned 18!!! That's awesome!



Author's Response:

HEHE Thanks so much girl :) Yeah 18!! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2012 08:21 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

Awww, gurlie happy birthday. This chapter was just BEAUTIFUL! Drunk Michael is HILARIOUS!!! Mayne ev'ry thang he said had me TRIPPIN. Hunni this whole chapter had me LAUGHIN!!!

Author's Response:

Aw, Thanks hun!! You are sweetheart Alli :) Heheh lol! I'm glad it did lol! Love you girl !! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2012 07:23 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

This video is just so funny! GOD, Michael saying je ne sais quoi is the cutest thing EVER! You just made my day, well my night since it's way toooo late in France x)
"Tell me. If there another woman? I'd like to know. If there another woman? Tell me, tell me"
"Well..."
"Don't tell me!"
"GET A HOLD ON YOURSELF WOMAN"
Priceless :)

This video makes me want to listen to some Diana Ross now! I'm going to spend the entire night playing Muscles !



Author's Response:

LOL Ikr? Mike is too cute when he said that! That's my favorite part too lol! A kid barely thirteen doing a comedy sketch like that without laughing is definitely something else! I just wish he had acted more... you know more films! It would have been amazing!! <3 xx

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2012 06:35 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

BTW I decided to turn Kiss of Life to a story. I have some much ideas for this story and I hate to dissapoint my readers ;)

Once again, HAPPY BDAY! I remember the day I turned 18, I always promised myself to do something big but because i'm lazy and unable to plan something I simply spend that day with my closest friend and it was AMAZING! I hope you will do something amazing because you only have 18 once (Lawd, I almost said YOLO)



Author's Response:

Wow girl That's amazing! I'm glad you did :) I REALLY want to check it out but my crazy schedule very hectic!! GAH! Though I'll definitely drop my opinion when I read :D

Aw, Thanks so much sweetheart! LOL Ikr? I'm not much different from you girl! Especially the being-lazy part! ;) Yeah I'm going to hang out with my girlfriends as well. I really wish I could see you guys and talk, you know and hang out lol! It'll be amazing! Yeah right! 18! Wow! I'm 18 lol! There is only one purposeful thing I do, which is volunteering in a school of special children on sundays! I first met these kids when I was in med camp now I had started to love them more and I'm just so involved with them that I share my every moment of happiness, joy with them! Thanks again Annie! I hope you have joyful christmas! :) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2012 06:30 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 18: Truly, Madly, Deeply ♥

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOUUUU! Celebrating a birthday during the Xmas holiday must be amazing! Much looooove ;)

Speak your mind Bill, you are so damn right! He can't expect Nita to forgive him that easily! a ILY isn't enough to win Nita! He should now by now. And getting drunk isn't the right way to solve his problem either! He is claiming he is not drunk what how do you call it when your stutter and ask someone to talk to you? YOU ARE DRUNK!

LMAO @ the bartender ex who screamed her own name!!!! HILARIOUS
MOUHAHAHA! I would love to hear Michael saying je-ne-sais-quoi, actually i love it when  american or english say it! It's just the cutest thing ever!
French fries?? Ok, Mike you are drunk as hell

See? Drunk!
I lovee some drunk Michael though ;) He is so desperate that he wants t hear two strangers telling they love him. Poor Mikey :(
Sexy bitches???? LMAO! I can't


God bless Bill! Smartass! I see you what Bill did there. Hope it's working

The conversation about Appolonia 6 is familiar...

MOUHAHA I love it! Michael trying to put on her shirt!

GOD, she finally said it


This chapter was funny, steamy and emotional at the smae time. I loved it and I can't wait to know what the future will bring to them ;) Happy Bday and Merry Christmas!



Author's Response:

HEY Annie :) THANKS SO MUCH Sweetheart! I'm enjoying my time indeed :) 

Yeah right! Bill knocked some sense into Mike's head! LOL! ikr? Mike getting drunk is hilarious!! Oh He had actually said it girl! In a comedy sketch, wait I'll upload the video. It was hilarious! LMAO! He needs to hear 'ILY' So badly *_* Apollonia 6 convo familiar? I'm amazed at your memory girl! You must have red it right here in this story! Do you remember when I changed the plot in the middle? That's where I used this convo. I found it amusing so I used it here :) HAHA! Thanks so damn much for your wonderful review Annie, I love you hun! MERRY Christmas to you!!! Lots of love <3 xx

 

This is the video :D @2:43

Reviewer: NancylovesMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2012 11:04 am Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

Michael said he loves her! god he admitted it!!! FINALLY!!! Too bad just now I got time to read the update Awesome update girl please update!!! Great JOB! And the lieutenant part was very well-written I had laugh all the while LMAO :DDD Keep up the good work Love Nancy!



Author's Response:

Hi Nancy!! :) Yes he did LOL! That's fine girl! I'm glad as long as you guys are still reading and reviewing lol! Heheh IKR? ;) I intended to make that part funny and I'm glad it outcame in that way! :P Thanks so much Nancy I really appreciate it! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: mikespyt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2012 01:31 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

Amazing! Can't wait to read more. Thanks for bringing my interest back into MJ fanfiction.



Author's Response:

Wow! New reader! Hi mikespyt :) Welcome girl! Why, Thank you precious! :D I'm glad I did. Great penname btw, though it took me a moment to realize that it's actually Mike's PYT lol! Good creativity girl xD Thanks for reading! Hope to hear more from you PYT! Lots of love <3 xx 

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