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Reviewer: NancylovesMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2013 08:13 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 20: Man Proposes, Woman disposes ♥

Loved this update Mike and Nita are made for each other! I can't wait to see them go through the tough times... go on :) Are you freggin' kidding me? This is NOT A BORING CHAPTER!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Nancy! It REALLY means so much to me! They are not so far, trust me! ;) Aw, how sweet of you! Thanks pyt! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2013 08:41 am Title: ♥ Chapter 20: Man Proposes, Woman disposes ♥

oh this is nice! but how could Nita get mad at him for beating up stevie? I mean personally speaking, I mean she shopuld be all over him for doing that! ;) anyway... This chapter was good. :) pretty nice one n NOT AT ALL BORING! do u have a facebook? I would love to connect wt u. :) <3 <3 <3



Author's Response:

Hey Vinaya!! :) LMAO! I know she's crazy! But Michael does know how to behave right? lol Thanks so much hun! Wow really, Thanks again! Love ya girl :D I had once... deleted it five months before. I HATE FB trust me lol! But I do have an account now... Not in my real name though. I have created it to connect with MJ Fiction. Here's the link: 

http://www.facebook.com/mady.love.148?ref=tn_tnmn

And here is my email ID: cassiecassidy@rocketmail.com Anytime!

I would LOVE to connect with you as well chicka. :) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Michaeallova Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2013 04:49 am Title: ♥ Chapter 20: Man Proposes, Woman disposes ♥

Amazing update! I loved the photoshopped pic in the wall! It looks so real... especially the love in their eyes. As of the chapter, it was great as always! I loved how he's so protective of her, calling her and omer as his personal property! Genuine love of Michael. I can easily picture him like that!

Reviewer: Michaeallova Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2013 04:47 am Title: ♥ Chapter 20: Man Proposes, Woman disposes ♥

Amazing update! I loved the photoshopped pic in the wall! It looks so real... especially the love in the eyes. As of the chapter, it was great as always! I loved how he's so protective of her, calling her and omer as his personal property! Genuine love of Michael. I can easily picture him like that!



Author's Response:

Wow Thanks Michaeallova :) Haha Thanks again! Aw... yes, I wish I will have a boyfriend like Mike one day! lol! Thanks again pyt! I really appreciate your heart warming comment! :D Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: skipper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2013 07:42 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 20: Man Proposes, Woman disposes ♥

Noooooo...why did you stop here?LOved the update as always and cant wait for more :)

Author's Response:

LOL Thanks for your wonderful review girl :) Next update will be asap! Thanks for your patience. Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2013 07:20 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 20: Man Proposes, Woman disposes ♥

WOW, just WOW!!!! Another great one. I love how Michael is being so protective of her, I can so see him being that way in real life. But I am a little confused about the ending??? Is Michael getting kidnapped, or is it a suprise for Nita??? Right now I don't know if I should be excited or scared??? Keep them coming girl!!!! Btw how do you make those photos with Nita and Michael?? It looks so real.

Author's Response:

Hi Chicka :) Thanks so much hun... you light my mood always! Hehe I'm sorry I have been confusing guys so much lately. You will soon know why though ;) Hehe you should be both excited and scared lol! Aw, the photos... Thanks girl. Photoshop is wonderful. You can't say how grateful I am to that software... :D More photoshop pics will be in next chapter ;) Thanks again hun for your lovely review! A big hug for ya! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2013 07:02 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 20: Man Proposes, Woman disposes ♥

I do wish Nita would loosen up a little bit! She's so pretty and has the sexiest man in the world. I want her to loosen up. And oh lord.. Did you mention Thirstiana aka Tatiana? Ugh. I really hope Nita will be a bit more aggressive this time so we don't have a repeat of the shit with Diana. And Michael better be on his best behaviors and cut the flirtatious stuff out. If Nita was half as flirty as him, his jealous ass would not be able to deal. Imma need for Nita to start givin Michael some of his medicine and see how he reacts to that. 



Author's Response:

LOL I want her to loose up as well Kat but she's... crazy like me lol! Hehe Thristiana? Nick name huh? Like it. Yes of course its Tatiana. I can't wait to write about her, you know what I mean ;) You are right! Let's wait and see what Mike's flirty ass get in this time lol! LOL Do you really think Michael Jackson could stop flirting hehe?? You are right, god knows what he would do if Nita flirt with some guy! You will see soon though XD Thanks for your 'honest' review chicka, as always :) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Michaeallova Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2013 11:11 am Title: ♥ Chapter 19: Good Day Sunshine ♥

   Loved this update. I wish Mike is my boyfriend lol! I can easily imagine him being such a tender, caring and passionate lover. I'm sure he was. And you write absolutely just like that. Do you have a boyfriend? I mean that's how you get to explain Michael in a better way? With your bf's inspiration? I'm just curious. If your bf is like the Michael in this story then you are some Lucky ass :P  You make them look like these were people you could find everyday but with emotions that are so clearly etched that they are three-dimensional, touching you in unexpected ways, and throwing open a way of life that's a novel and fascinating to readers. And keep fascinating ;)



Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks so much girl :) NO... Unfortunately... No I don't have a boyfriend in the first place :p LOL That's propably because of wide imagination of a normal girl who expects how her boyfriend shoul be, that's all ;) Aw, That's very sweet of you! :D Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Buttonie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 10:49 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 19: Good Day Sunshine ♥

Happy Newyear to you too girl. My fav. author!! I loved this chapter, as always! And the words they said make me remind Romeo & Juliet! Please update ASAAPP!!



Author's Response:

Hey :) Thanks girly! I really appreciate it! LOL! I love Romeo and Juliet! Update will be soon... Stay tuned ;) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: BrokenBottleTop Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 10:44 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 19: Good Day Sunshine ♥

Very touching I enjoyed the chapter though sometimes I can't help but envy her lol I'm glad they are together :0



Author's Response:

Hey girl :) Thanks so much!! LOL! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 08:32 am Title: ♥ Chapter 19: Good Day Sunshine ♥

Amazing update LOVE IT!!



Author's Response:

THANKS, Cwooten :) Appreciate it!! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 08:31 am Title: ♥ Chapter 19: Good Day Sunshine ♥

Amazing update LOVE IT!!

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 01:29 am Title: ♥ Chapter 19: Good Day Sunshine ♥

“That baby raising is not as easy as baby making!” 

LMAO! This update was priceless! I just love how you capture their feelings and emotions and make us to feel it as well!! Happy New Year to u too! Update asaP! I can;t wait to see mike having his wicked ways to fade away her anger! lol!



Author's Response:

LMAO! Ikr? WOW That's a brightening review!! Thanks for lighting up my mood!! hehe ;) We'll see!! Thanks so much! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Ann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 01:13 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

Ive just started to read ur story & I'm already captivated!! Greatest start ever! You write like a professional... Its been REALLY long since I red any kind of plot like this! Cant wait to read the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Hi there, Ann :) Welcome to Mike and Nita's world! I'm glad you have chose to read my story and stopped to comment on it. I really appreciate it! LMK what your thinking on your way! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Mittu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 12:59 am Title: ♥ Chapter 19: Good Day Sunshine ♥

Snap Mike had beat him up! I'm sure! Update asap!



Author's Response:

LOL You will see in the next chapter ;) Thanks! Lots of love <3 xx

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