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Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2013 09:57 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

When Nita asked who was Janet, I was like

YOU DON'T KNOW WHO JANET JACKSON IS? Goodbye! And then I realized that Control came out in 1986 lol

That was a cute chapter girl :) I'm glas you're back! And Niya had been so annoying! I know she has the rigtht to be mad at Michael for flirting with girls but the ice-cream stuff lol! The only thing I can think of is... A pregnancy?

Tour? Does he mean the BAD Tour? OMG, I can already smell the drama and I am thinking of thirsty ass Tatiana!



Author's Response:

HEY ANNIE!!! Girl how are you?! I missed you! LOL Ikr? Yes, Control released later and created that big 'Thriller-fame' in Jackson fam again ;) Thank so much babe, I have been out lately... studies have definitely got in my way!! Its annoying right? Hehe yes, Nita's so possessive! LOL Pregnancy?! Girl, you got me thinking whether I have been incredibly confusing my readers LOL! Well you'll see ;) Thats all I can say. :P Yeah I can't wait for Tatiana to get in the scene as well!!! Thanks again for wonderful review hun. Lots of love <3 xx



Author's Response:

HEY ANNIE!!! Girl how are you?! I missed you! LOL Ikr? Yes, Control released later and created that big 'Thriller-fame' in Jackson fam again ;) Thank so much babe, I have been out lately... studies have definitely got in my way!! Its annoying right? Hehe yes, Nita's so possessive! LOL Pregnancy?! Girl, you got me thinking whether I have been incredibly confusing my readers LOL! Well you'll see ;) Thats all I can say. :P Yeah I can't wait for Tatiana to get in the scene as well!!! Thanks again for wonderful review hun. Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Buttonie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2013 06:00 am Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

hey there you!!!!!! decided to finally update the story huh? this chapter was nicely done. unlike some other stories where you cant find a single chapter without sex, drama or other crazy shit this was some kind of refreshner...i love this couple. they are made for each other! plllzzz updatee asap...



Author's Response:

Hey Buttonie! :) How are ya' girl? Missed u! Thank you so much sweetheart! It REALLY means a lot to me. Especially at this time! Update's on the way, don't worry hun!! :D Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Buttonie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2013 05:59 am Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

hey there you!!!!!! decided to finally update the story huh? this chapter was nicely done. unlike some other stories where you cant find a single chapter without sex, drama or other crazy shit this was some kind of refreshner...i love this couple. they are made for each other! plllzzz updatee asap...

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2013 07:45 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

HEY GURL!!!!!!!!! Your back, I'm so happy!!!!! Like when I saw you updated, I think my mouth hit the floor then back up again. XD Ok first off WOW, WOW, and WOW with this chapter! And like Oh God, how good is this chapter?!?!? I love how Michael and Nita interact between each other, it is so funny XD Although if I was Nita I would tell Michael to knock that flirting crap off you know? But I guess its ok if its JUST for funny. You had wrote a sentence that Michael had said that I can so relate too.


Michael let out a breath. "Because I'm shy, basically. But… I do the stupidest random shit when I get comfortable with someone."

Like, I cannot begin to explain how true this statement is for me. I know this is weird to say, but I'm weird period XD Anyway, I have to ask this which I know everybody is thinking, Is there going to be a sexy love scene? Pretty please with sugar on top!!!! If you do I will bless you in my prayers XD Also where do you do these photos of Michael and Nita? Do you do them? Or does someone else do them for you, because let me tell you, I have seen TONS of photo shop pictures and these do not hold a candle to them. AMAZING WORK! I love seeing their relationship progress and go forward. These chapters is such a treat you have no idea. Also, I did not know about that Jolie woman. Like wow, I did not know Michael did that, he was one smart cookie wasn't he. Anyho, i'll stop foaming at the mouth now XD I cannot wait for an update. Keep up the good work!!!!!! See you on the next chapter gurl, I'm hoping i'll be raving on how well you'll love scenes are XD See you!!!!! FYI this was a higher rating I would give you 10++++++++++++++++++ ;)

Author's Response:

HEY YOU!!! mywaymj83!! Girl I MISSED you and ur wonderful reviews!! LOL! I have to apologize to everyone of my readers because its just too much! I ve been such a lazy butt hehe!! THANK YOU love :) Hehe Ikr? I can relate myself to that sentence as well :P I get that u r a shy person as well... but have a problem with controlling your tongue when u get to know a person! Because thats exactly me :L Definitely there's going to be a love scene, of course, who are we talking about here, hello Michael Jackson?! lol Awww... A very special Thanks for the comment about my photoshopping skills. Of course I do them. No one else do something like that for ya'. When I started to photoshop for the first time, I sucked obviously. But it just got better. Thanks to the hundreads of tutorials I watched ;) You will see chicka XD Thanks again Pyt. Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2013 12:15 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

Hayyy! I miss you, i miss this story like, hell. One of the best stories in mjfiction, finally.


Uhm...talking about Nita and Michael, they are so damn cute. Like. Seriously the cutest ever. Its a good thing for authors to write such a chapter like this. Without the tense, the pressure, the cling-o-rama and shits, ya feel me?

Just goofy and stuff, you know.

And talking about Jolie Levin, is that serious, about the agreement?


Thats kinda ridiculous though. Cause damnit if i were his assistant or maybe one of his employees...



i would get fired instantly.

Author's Response:

Hi Citra :) How are you? Oh babe, I did miss u too. But hey the story is back and so am I. lol. Aw, Thanks hon!!! Yeah girl I feel ya and I completely understand what you are talking about. I want them to be more like regular couples. Because unlike some people, I guess Michael's more of a normal man off the camera... especially when he's with his girlfriend this is how I guess he would have been. Unlike, all the way he had been described in media and all the silly stunts he sometimes pulled I guess he was more normal and romantic behind the spotlight. I seriously don't think Michael was whispering in his soft voice and behaving like the weirdest-person-known-to-mankind around his girlfriend. And most of the things I used in this chapter are real facts; like the way he nicknamed women and often habitual flirting (yeah we know a lot about that one) lol He's one ass man!! HAHAHA You made me laugh at that one! Yeah I guess we all would have been fired on the very first day!!! :D Yeah girl its a serious agreement. Jolie Levin said about it in an interview. I wish I could find it in net again... He's one very cautious man when it comes to women, we know that. Thank you and Thank you for your lovely review hun! I really appreciate it! :P Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 08:40 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

Uh-oh and sorry for the typos! Iphone is crazy!!!



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LOL Happens <3

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 08:39 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

OMGGG SHE UPDATEDDD!! *dancing* I been misssinggggg this story and u of course! I'm more on in MJJEternal these days and I see you didn't update there and then I casually visit mj f and click most recent your story pops up and I was like O.O! Wonderful, wonderful chapter! Not crappy!! You are an awesome writer! Mike needs to control his ass! he got the most beautiful in the world and he shouldn't go around flirting with other girls just make her mad and jealous!! and its absolutely right info about Michael making his employees to sign a contract that they would never have a relationship with them! Completely makes sense! I remember reading somewhere too! Good job ;) Just don't leave us hanging update asap you lazy bum! LOL. Love you. Its been really long since talking to u...come to chatroom in MJJE when u sign in there!



Author's Response:

HEHE Sorry girl... its been crazy!!! Aw hun I missed you too!! Ah, I have kinda lost interest in MJJE. The website have one horrible problem. It shuts down often! And I got tired of it. Alright, when I sign in there, I'll invite u from the chatroom okay? Thanks love... means a lot to me! Trust me! :P Yeah, yeah he's one great ass!! Yeah could u remember where u red it ? Because I ve trying to find it in net but I can't :( I red it like two months ago... and my reaction was same as yours. If this guy make his female employees sign a contract for to not have personal feelings for him can you imagine how more confidentiality contracts his employees have to sign? He's a shrewd businessman indeed! Hehe don't worry update is on the way ;) Love you more hun! <3 xx



Author's Response:

HEHE Sorry girl... its been crazy!!! Aw hun I missed you too!! Ah, I have kinda lost interest in MJJE. The website have one horrible problem. It shuts down often! And I got tired of it. Alright, when I sign in there, I'll invite u from the chatroom okay? Thanks love... means a lot to me! Trust me! :P Yeah, yeah he's one great ass!! Yeah could u remember where u red it ? Because I ve trying to find it in net but I can't :( I red it like two months ago... and my reaction was same as yours. If this guy make his female employees sign a contract for to not have personal feelings for him can you imagine how more confidentiality contracts his employees have to sign? He's a shrewd businessman indeed! Hehe don't worry update is on the way ;) Love you more hun! <3 xx

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 07:43 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

I can c y a contract like that wud b necessary! But hands down Bubbles was my favorite part!

Author's Response:

Hi Allison :) Missed u girl, hw r u?! Hehe Ikr? Bubbles LOL! I enjoyed writing that part as well :P Thanks for your lovely review love. Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: skipper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 07:20 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

OMG an update.I loved every part of it. Wow I cant wait to read about their night together. I hope you update soon ,please I cant wait to read more. Love this story :)

Author's Response:

HEY ida :) How are u? Missed u! Thanks so much hun! LOL Update will be soon promise :) I  really appreciate your support!!! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Mittu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 05:05 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

Geeee finally its bakc! mike and nita are back. i missed this story so much! This wasnt a crappy chapter at all.. update soon. Mike is one ass man! he needs to stop pulling this childish pranks with nita! Lovely chapter i enjoyed it!!



Author's Response:

Hey Mittu!! Missed u girl, hw are you? Yep, they are!!! :) Aw, Thanks hun! Hehe ABSOLUTELY right!! WE'll see what he's upto! :P Stay tuned! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 03:12 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

Good to see this back I missed it!


GO GO GO

Author's Response:

Hi there, Rate! Thanks so much sweetie :) Lots of love <3xx

Reviewer: NancylovesMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 01:43 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

MY GOD GIRL U R BACK! I missed  this story lyk crazy! Mike and Nita are back and this chapter just made my day :))) I want to talk to u about something. I ve been thinking about restarting a story me and chritina (missmj2011) ve once started and deleted. let me know if u r interested in co-writing...<3 Nancy



Author's Response:

Hey Nancy!!! Hw are you girl? LOL I missed you guys like crazy! I'm very very glad to be back as well... Thank you so much sweetie :) Oh I'll have to think about it. You know my hands are full and I don't have enough time to update my own story yeah but anyway we'll see ;) Mail me with a short description about the story. Lots of love <3xx

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 01:29 am Title: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

So glad to see this back. Mike and Nita are a mess. He needs to stop doing that childish stuff to her before it backfires on him. We know how jealous and possessive he is, so if Nita gives him a taste of his own medicine and starts flirting with handsome men, he won't be able to handle it. Knock it off Michael. You will NOT like it when it's done to you. Nita is a gorgeous girl so any man would love to flirt and do anything else with her. Other than that, a cute chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.. I'm sure I can guess it'll have to do with some love making though. Lol 



Author's Response:

Hey KAT!!! God MISSED u so damn much girl! hw r u? Yes and I'm glad to be back ;) LOL Thats Michael... Haha. Thank you sweet heart :) It really means something to me!!!! Especially at this time :D Hehe surely there will be love making lol.. Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2013 04:06 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

This story is updated! The story is updated! *runs across the mountain*

Author's Response:

Omegod Omegod Omegod!! I'm soooo sorry sweetie!!! I'm the worst author ever :( I'm taking time, just to make it perfect. Hope u'll read it soon :D Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2013 06:56 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 20: Man Proposes, Woman disposes ♥

Man, I'm Like Really At Remembering To Review, My Bad. Bhudd Anyway I Like That Nita Didn't Just Agree To Move In With Michael. && What Did She See??? Who Is They Supposed To Be Meeting??



Author's Response:

Hey Sky :) God, I miss you guys!!! Oh well, sorry for my late reply though I know you won't mind lol. Aw, thanks for stopping by to leave your warm review hun, I appreciate it! Oh god I'm so sorry but I have to update soon I know. Sorry for keeping u guys waiting. Lots of love <3 xx

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