Date: Sep 27, 2013 07:22 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
awww sweetie! I just wish you updated more frequently... You still are my favourite!
Author's Response:
HEY Vinaya! I missed ya!!! Aw, Thanks hun! I was feeling a bit low :( But I promise that I'll update asap here after. Much love <3 xx
Date: Sep 27, 2013 06:13 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 23: Sugar And Spice ♥
I LOVE how michael so true in here and so lonely at his heart.He need to tell Nita the secret whatever it is.
And i love the way he's portrayed and do not by any chance think about discontinuing this story or something like that because this story has been my energy tonic and my personal comforter whenever i needed one!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Buttonie!! Hmm. We'll see ;) No, of course not. I'm not thinking about discontinuing at all. Aw, that's so sweet. Thanks girl. Much love <3 xx
Date: Sep 27, 2013 06:10 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 22: A Fool For You ♥
I agree this chapter was really long and by the time I finished reading I was too tired to review lol, so I didnt leave a review but defnitely not Boring!!!!!!Good Job!
Author's Response:
LOL Ikr? But thanks for taking your time and reviewing lol! Thanks so much. Much love <3 xx
Date: Sep 27, 2013 06:08 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
OMG Girl what have u been thinking?! Ofcourse the story is awesome! And i bet we are all reading. u r one of the best writers in this site and your story inspired me so much I'm really thinking abt continuing my own.
Author's Response:
THANKS!! Love ya girl! Oh wow I hope you would continue your story. Much love <3 xx
Date: Sep 27, 2013 06:01 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
I love this story, please continue.. its going great, I just cant wait for the drama to begin
:)
Author's Response:
Hi Teenah! Thanks so much hun. Really. The drama is about to begin ;) Stay tuned! Much love <3 xx
Date: Sep 27, 2013 05:54 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
Girl NOTHING is wrong...we love the story and cant wait to read more.Dont think the bad ,maybe people are busy with life .Trust me the story is great and we cant wait for next update already . HUGS :)
Author's Response:
HEY Ida! Wow girl missed u! LOL Probably the best explanation; 'maybe people are busy with life' TRUE! Thanks so much for taking your time and comforting me, hun! It really means a lot. I'm working on the update, will be up soon. *Hugs back tightly* Much love <3 xx
Date: Sep 27, 2013 12:44 am Title: ♥ Chapter 23: Sugar And Spice ♥
mmm I wonder wat's his secret is. Wonderful update btw. continue <3
Author's Response:
Hey Mittu! Thanks girl :) Hmmm... you'll know ;) Much love <3 xx
Date: Sep 26, 2013 06:45 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 23: Sugar And Spice ♥
Loved this chapter. But what is it that Michael is hiding from nita? sleeping pills, pain killers... what is it?
Author's Response:
Hey girl thanks :) I really appreciate that. Mmm, keep guessing hehe! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 26, 2013 05:28 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 23: Sugar And Spice ♥
OH MY GOSH GURL, YOU ARE UNSTOPPABLE!!!!!!!!!!! When I saw you updated again I was like :O then YAY! XD Let me just say you totally deserve a review for this. This chapter was like really sad, hot, and intense all at the same time in my opinion. Like some major shit has hit the fan here XD But my heart totally broke for Michael when Nita had broke the news to him about New York. I can see his point of view, then being a female I can totally see Nita's point of view. I do have mixed emotions about here going to New York fearing somebody will harm her or little Omer; but if she uses that knee to the safety deposit box trick she will be fine ;) But between you and me, I feel Michael will surprise her in New York with the shooting of BAD......maybe huh? ;) and I still am sticking with the story of Michael taking sleeping pills, and that is what he has tell her. But I am still put off by his resistance of marriage. Why? I mean, I know he is married to his work, but come on man, put a ring on her! Unless......oh my gosh another thought, unless he did have that vasectomy and he's afraid how she will react. But I highly doubt that. Anyway, another great chapter as usual! Thanks for the update, this really made my night, because i'm having my wisdom teeth taken out tomorrow and now this will take my mind off of it, so a big fat THANK YOU to you. Also, I was wondering something, and I know your probably incredible busy being Miss. Doctor and all ;) But would you mind taking a look at my stories and possibly telling me what I could do better? Because I really trust and respect your advice as a writer. But if you can't I completely understand. GREAT JOB!!!!!! Another A for you :) HEY Chicka! There you are :) LOL. Thanks hun! Haha I love how you predict things. But you are going to wait and watch. I'll try to update today or tomorrow :P Hmm... we'll see ;) Oh god, wisdom teeth?! Take care of yourself girl. My experience was a nightmare but I hope yours will be okay :D Hehe I'm nowhere near being a doctor, lol, I'm just a first year and a horrible student :P Oh sure hun, I swear when I get time, I'll definitely read it and leave reiviews ;) Thanks so much love, for always being there. I really appreciate that. The drama's about to unfold, stay tuned ;) Lots of love <3 xx
Author's Response:
Date: Sep 26, 2013 03:48 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 23: Sugar And Spice ♥
Why do you keep saying that Michael was brought up in a "strict catholic family" when Jehovah Witness is Christian based belief religion? It just that I've notice this is the second time that its been mentioned in the story.
My guess is that he will be going on tour next year and its going to last for two years so he want to spend as much time Nita as possible.
Author's Response:
Oh sorry I thought he became a Jehovah Witness a lot later in his life, but I you're right, he was raised as one :P And I have mentioned this is second time?! Hey, thanks for pointing that out girl, I'll edit it. :D And Thanks for the review. It means so much to me :) Hmm. Close enough, Vicky, but we'll see ;) Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 23, 2013 07:27 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 22: A Fool For You ♥
Absolutely LOVED dis chap chicka! update soon let the drama begin ;)
Author's Response:
Hey girl :) Sorry for the late reply :P You know why! Thanks Chicka. Ikr? I'm so over this romance I wanna get into drama as well ;) Stay tuned! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 23, 2013 11:55 am Title: ♥ Chapter 22: A Fool For You ♥
HEY I just signed up in here and just wanted to let you know that i ve been reading this story for a long time and its probably the best story about michael around this era... i signed up just to tell you this. the way you describe is just so different. i have read stories that describe him just like how he would be in an interview or something, never deep like you do. Like this other man behind the spotlight who's manners and actions differ you know. good job, please do continue. this is the best story since a very long time. I remember loving a story so much when this website started like some couple of years back. And after the story was completed i couldn't really find a story with that magic, well this story got this magic, so keep it ;)
Author's Response:
WOW! SERIOUSLY?! You signed up for me? Gosh, thats really something else. Thank you girl. And welcome to MJ Fiction, BlackFedora, cool penname by the way. Oh, my, my Thanks so much. It means TONS to me. Seriously I should really thank my readers. I have been the most horrible writer in this website with delayed chapters, confusions but they are still bearing with me lol. Yeah, its another thing. I don't think Michael was this naive shy man behind the cameras seriously from the stories we read from people who were close to him, he was very normal and very flirtier by nature. Even Lisa Marie blabbered enough, just google it. So what I'm trying to say is, Michael was evidently a very normal man, behind the cameras. I heard he rehearse for interviews, so yeah my intention was to bring out his other side in stories and I'm glad my readers like it. :) Thank you sweetheart. I swear, I'm blushing. You, my readers are keeping the magic on ;) Have a nice day! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 23, 2013 11:45 am Title: ♥ Chapter 22: A Fool For You ♥
Hey there you are finally! :P
You should really disappearing you know. It leave us, readers in a panic that you might discontinue this amazing story..your chapter made my day! Ty girl. And I learned so much about Michael in this one, I love how you use real things in this story. Especially the photos you provide. I didn't know the clown man was Michael, damn Michael when did you wanted to be a clown? But its just so sweet... :P
Author's Response:
HAHA Sorry Mittu! School gets in the way... but now I'm free. And I'm going to update correctly this time, I promise you. Oh hun, Thanks so much. I really appreciate that! Lots of love >3 xx
Date: Sep 23, 2013 11:20 am Title: ♥ Chapter 22: A Fool For You ♥
I loved this chapter... mike and nita are always a joy :)) Udate asap! I love this story and it just gets better and better with each chapter!
Love,
Nancy.
Author's Response:
Hey Nancy :) Hope all is well with you! Thanks so much girl. I'm working on it. Stay tuned ;) Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 23, 2013 10:50 am Title: ♥ Chapter 22: A Fool For You ♥
HI GURL!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh my gosh, I am like so excited you updated!!!!!!!!!! You have no clue how happy this has made me!!! I have been dealing with some personal stuff lately and this chapter truly just made me relax and not think, kinda like Michael feels. Right now I have many things to say about this long and delicious chapter of yours ;) Well first of all I just want to congratulate you on the length of the chapter because I can honestly say that within the two years I have been on this site, I have never seen a chapter this long ever, so you get the A+ for today ;) Second, you writing and story is so out of this world that it truly is indescribable! Your use of adjectives and description of every single thing is phenomenal! I also loved the passion filled scenes.....they are always my favorite, especially your because you write them so beautiful and desirable that it doesn't make you feel like your reading porn or anything XD Anyway, I thought this chapter was one of your absolute bests, just every single thing. I love how Michael is portrayed how he is so sweet, shy, egotistic, and demanding at times. Plus I love how Nita challenges him, that is always such a hoot to read. But I also love Nita that she has so much common sense for her age. Nita is one of my favorite heroines because she is not dippy, not a gold digger, has common sense, head strong, and just overall a great person. I wanted to ask you, how did you know all those medical terms? Are you a medical student yourself and is that how you drew Nita as a Medical student? Also, those pictures you have is just astounding! How you ever do that I will never know. And that drawing of Nita, is so gorgeous, I can see why Michael likes her so much ;) XD But how did you ever have that drawing and put Michaels name to it?!?!? Like I have been sitting here literally and racking my brain over it :) But I am starting to get concerned for Michael. First of all when Nita didn't have any contraception and it seemed liked he looked nervous, then he doesn't want to marry Nita any time soon, then him being so tired. I personally feel that he was not using any of his sleeping pills during this trip and without them I think that's why he was so tired, but....we shall see. I cannot wait to see what your brilliant mind comes up with next. I honestly do not mind waiting for your story to update because when you do update it is exceptional writing and that makes it all worth the wait. Any reader who reads this story can honestly tell you definitely put time and effort into this story. A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ For you today ;) Thank you for the wonderful update, your loyal fan always mywaymj83
Author's Response:
OH. MY. GOD. That's all I could find to say.... :) Girl you made my day! Wow... Thank you, thank you and thank you so much love. :D Mwah! Yeah, I have been dealing lots of personal 'dramas' lately as well. You can tell me why I take this loooong to update :P Haha LOL I know. I couldn't edit the chapter lol. Wow thats a lot of appreciation... I tell you this is my the best review I have ever had :P Of course, I'm a medical student :D, I really should update my bio :P Just recently finished a exam, that's why I can't get these crazy medical terms out of my mind lol! Yeah, I designed Nita more from me, that's what we are good at aren't we, explaining our ownself? hehe. Haha, the picture and Michael's autograph...? its supposed to be a business secret but... Photoshop is wonderful *.* Mhmmm you are a very keen reader girl, every time, every review of yours doesn't even miss the tiniest detail of the chapter. I love you, mywaymj83. But you will see ;) Get ready for drama chicka... I can't wait to write the next chapter :P:P See now thats why I still continue doing this even in the middle of all the dramas going on in my life... despite the things you go through and the time and effort you put into it, when a reader come up and say something like that, every hard memories just disappear and only happiness remains. Thanks again, love <3 Have a great day! Lots of love <3 xx