Date: Oct 14, 2013 07:01 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 25: BAD II - And There It Is! ♥
OMG ...loved it.I cant wait to read more. Hope you update soon.You stopped at the best part :) Please don't make us wait long
Author's Response:
Hey ida, missed ya! :) Thank you so much hun ;) It really means a lot to me! LOL Sorry for the cliffhanger but I'll be updating soon :D Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2013 06:52 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 25: BAD II - And There It Is! ♥
Nita Is So Sweet. && Michael Better Get In Tunee Or He Might Not Have No Girlfriend. Bhudd Anyway These Last Two Chapters Have Been Incredible,(Even With The Drama && Tension Rising). :)
Author's Response:
Hey Sky!! :D LMAO You're right! Really no girl can stand him :P Wow thanks so damn much hun, it means a ton to me, trust me! :) I'm working on the update, it'll be up soon hehe ;) Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Oct 14, 2013 01:58 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 25: BAD II - And There It Is! ♥
I love it, plz update soon!
Author's Response:
Hiya Allison ;) Thanks so much hun :D Update is on the way haha. Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2013 11:46 am Title: ♥ Chapter 25: BAD II - And There It Is! ♥
Are you pointing out his battle with Discoid Lupus?... Good job. Can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response:
Hi Miya :) Hm, I got the smartest readers in MJ Fiction ;) But I'm not going to say anything, just wait and see :P Thanks a lot hun, it means to much to me! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Oct 14, 2013 07:38 am Title: ♥ Chapter 25: BAD II - And There It Is! ♥
Really good update!!!!!! so intense, and real!
I love this girl, she's so real! Michael is lucky to have her.
Hope they 're gonna fix their pbs
Author's Response:
HEY nellan!!! :D Missed ya' girl! Thank you so much hun! Wow, I'm so glad ya' think so. Haha, with Michael and Nita you know how it is lol ;) Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Oct 13, 2013 02:03 am Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
Hey sweetie
The onlt thing I can say in this situation is that you know deep in your heart that you created this story through the love you have for Michael. Anyone who copies your work has no imagination of their own, and feels no shame in taking the credit for someone else's hard graft.
I know it's hard, I'm lucky in the aspect no-one's ever bothered to steal my story, but listen to me and believe me when I say you HAVE talent and it would be criminal to let second-raiders beat you down.
Keep writing sugar...you do it well xx
Author's Response:
HI Tiger :) Wow girl... THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! Those words like little golden sprinkles.... Exactly. I agree with you! Sometimes I just don't understand how you could be a Michael Jackson's fan and a cheater LOL! But I have got over it now. Your words made me :D. This is the only thing that keeps me going, you know, the readers. Your review made my day! Aw hun, Thanks again, I REALLY appreciate all your L.O.V.E! I can feel it. ;) A hug. Have a wonderful day!! Love you! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2013 06:37 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
OH MY GOD LET THE SECRET OUT PLZZZZZZ... I like the portrayal of michael in this story though. You know, not like he's a freak or something, just more normal like he was in real life.
Author's Response:
Hey Buttonie! :) LOL You might have to wait for that. Just one more day ;) Thank you girl. LMAO Seriously I think he's more normal behind the curtains you know. Listen to Glenda tapes and all those other things, he was taped without his knowing- he sound like a very very normal person. ;) Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2013 09:46 am Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
I can't wait for this secret to be revealed. Nita on to Michael and he had better not break her heart or Omer's.
Sorry to hear about people stealing your story. It's sad really that a person would do it and wrong. I can understand if they used it as an inspiration but to out right take it and say its their own is just wrong.
Author's Response:
Hi VickiJ!! :) Next chapter, stay tuned till then lol! Right... but what's going to happen? Who is going to break who's heart? ;) Thanks so much hun!! It means SO much to me. Exactly girl, that's what I'm saying!! Getting inspired is one thing but copying the whole thing is ridiculous and heart-breaking. Mostly because they think that no one can do anything about it. But we have decided to take actions if there's enough evidences you know. Thanks for all comfort love, I really mean it. I needed it :D Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2013 03:14 am Title: ♥ Chapter 23: Sugar And Spice ♥
Ommmqqqee Nobody In His Team Listens To Him. They All Need To Be Fired.Bhudd On Another Note Michael Seem Soooo In Love With Her Its So Cute:)<3 . Low Key His Brothers Kinda Seem Like Man Whores. Bhudd AnyWay Im Glad That Yhew Updated. It Was Incredible As Usual. You're Not Doing Anything Wrong.
Author's Response:
Hey Sky!! :) How r ya' girl? Missed you :P LMAO I agree. He need to hold sway over them :D Thanks so much hun, it means so much to me; pausing a minute and saying some nice words you know. HAHA Man whores?! I gotta use that one, sounds perfect for them lol ;) OH babe Thank YHEW!!! XD Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Oct 05, 2013 02:22 am Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
Keep updatin, this is one of my favorites!
Author's Response:
Hey Allison! :) How r ya' girl? Aw, thanks sweetheart. I'm working on the update. Will be up soon ;) Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Sep 30, 2013 08:06 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 23: Sugar And Spice ♥
OOOH Michael going to travel and surprise nita, god i cant wait update!
Author's Response:
Haha yep ;) I'm working on the update but it will be up soon :) Thank you for the review, girl. Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 30, 2013 10:28 am Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
I love your story. I think its amazing. I can't wait to read more, you should definitely continue it.I constantly check the site everyday to see have you updated , I telling you i just can't get enough of it. :-)
Author's Response:
Hi there, Britney :) Gosh, Thank you hun! It means SO much to me, trust me!!! Aw, that's so sweet. I'm trying to keep up with the updates but school work always get in the way you know its annoying but I'll be updating regularly for a while, because I'm kind of in holidays now lol! Thanks again pyt. Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2013 12:27 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
I just found this story, and I love it. Every writer goes through the lack of reviews thing. But, please know that this story is well-written, interesting, and just awesome!
I can tell you put a lot of hard work into this story. THANK YOU! Please update. This story cannot end soon; it's too good for that. You are a wonderful writer.
Author's Response:
Wow Lele... Thank you so much!! Really! It lifted my spirits up... :) Oh its nowhere near ending lol! Thanks again, hun! I can't tell you how much I appreciate your words... :D And so nice to meet you ;) Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2013 10:58 am Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
Hi gurl, I was feeling a bit better and I wanted to tell you that you have nothing to worry about with your story. I truly think your story is the best on this site and that you should feel very proud for creating such a mind blowing story. But I totally get where you are coming from, sometimes as writers we feel what is the word? Unappreciated I suppose. But don't loose hope on this, just remember you will always have me as a fan :) Honestly don't worry, everybody on here understands that people are busy. :) Hey girl :) Thanks for stepping up and saying such words... and being always there for me, I really mean it!!! Yeah, I guess almost all writers in MJ Fiction have problems with this. Aw, honey, I'm so lucky to have you ! Much love <3 xx
Author's Response:
Date: Sep 27, 2013 10:21 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥
Your story is fabulous and written better than most stories on this website. Your plot is clear sticking to the main story line of the characters and no grammar or spelling errors. Plus you know your Michael Jackson history very well which a lot of people on this site don't know. Honestly I think your not getting reviews because people aren't on here as much as they were earlier this year. It's been slow since May or June and this website hasn't recovered from the loss of readers or writers yet. So don't sweat it cause I don't think it's nothing you've done. I hope I was helpful to you and I look forward to the next chapter.
HI Vicky :) Your review made me both smile and laugh... Thanks for the comfort, really I mean it! Hmm. I didn't know that. Well you know you always need reassurance, no matter what you're doing I guess, lol. THANKS a lot hun! I'm working on the next chapter and there are going to be so many twists. :D Much love <3 xx
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