Date: Dec 19, 2013 12:35 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Patiently waiting for an update I loveeee this story. It was the first one I read on this site & from then on I was hooked lol
Author's Response:
Hi VADYID :) !! Thanks so much sweetheart, it really means a LOT to me... wow! Really? That just made my day :D Thanks again pyt, really!! I'll update asap! It's almost finished. Lots of love your way <3 xx
Date: Dec 17, 2013 06:26 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
I hope you feel better. I also hope freaking Michael realizes what he's done and fixes it. I love this story and I hope you continue very soon!!! :D
Author's Response:
Hi there, Isabella!! :) I am really feeling a lot better, Thank you dear! LOL I hope he do too, but there has to be a reason right? And its going to be a shocker... so wait and watch!! :P The update is almost ready and I might update it today if I finish it :) Thanks so much hun. Lots of love your way <3 xx
Date: Dec 06, 2013 12:55 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥
Hey sugar, I'm back online at long last with the help of my kids' computer :) Hope you're on the mend, I hate hospitals and I always feel you can convalesce better at home in your own surroundings. Take your time and heal, and I look forward to seeing you back here :)
Hugs xxx
Author's Response:
HEY Tiger!!!! :D :D I'm SO glad for you!!! LOL You're absolutely right!!! Being in hospital always gives a feeling like you're getting more sicker instead of getting better! THANK YOU so much love!! I'm missing you all guys... :/ But I can assure you, I'll be back here very soon... Still working on the update. Have a nice day!!! :)
Hugs and Kisses <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2013 07:41 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 27: Take Me Far, Far Away... ♥
Oh my GOD!!!!!!!! Where do I begin? First of all, I am so so so sooooooo sorry for not reviewing on the previous chapters, you know how life and school is. But oh my gosh like it is so much to take in!!!!! I cannot believe how much Michael is being so cold and distant towards Nita. I know he is hurting and in pain but come on man give the woman a little bit of slack would you?!?! My heart literally breaks for the two of them literally. I really want to commend you on how you are describing and portraying Michael with his Vitiligo. That is a really touchy subject to write about, but you write it flawlessly, but I would not expect anything less from you. ;) I honestly have no doubt in my mind that Michael did not go through this period of sadness and anger at one point in his life. You just make everything so believable and not to unbelievable you know? Also, will this story have a sad ending to it? Cause right now I am not seeing it lol! I honestly am just speechless right now about your writing. I know that you are a medical student but my god you rattle off all these words and procedures and I'm like what!!!!!! I am in total awe of you at this moment, because not only are you making an amazing story but a story that you can learn things about. I am taking a health course for school as an extra credit and some of the words you use really help me understand more of what I am learning in health so a big fat THANK YOU! :) Oh and then.....and THEN! We get to the end of this chapter! Ok can I just say right now that I seriously want to slap the you know what out of Michael at this moment. Any benefit of the doubt I gave Michael in the previous chapters GONE! Haha! Gurl, you need to help me restore my faith in Michael again. ;) I cannot wait to see how he gets himself out of this pickle. Oh and I also sent you an email regarding my story, I don't know if you got it? My email has been acting weird lately so can you maybe tell me if you got it so I know its working? I just cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! Oh and I hope you get feeling much much MUCH better!!!! See you in the next chapter ;) Your loyal fan!
Author's Response:
Hey girl, mywaymj83 :) Oh that's alright... sure I missed you but I know what school's like lol! It's not your fault in the first place so you don't have to apologize :P HAHA didn't have someone to scold Michael lately and this has been a rollercoaster experience to finally get my precious readers who love Michael to pieces to finally scold him!! And I have to tell you its a pretty good feeling! ALL my readers are on Nita's side now :P I'm so glad you feel bad for both of them, really! Aw, Thank you, hon!!! Girl you are so sweet... seriously every time you review, I feel like I'm on a high hehe! Ah.. don't you think it's little too soon to talk about the ending girlfriend? :P Haha I'm a medical student but I also told you that I am a very very horrible one lol! Sometimes I don't understand lots of medical terms either haha! WOW That's really something that stays in my heart... thank you girl, really, I mean it!! Wow, at least I'm glad you're a good student, unlike me :D Yeah, the end really got you huh? I could picture your face lol! I can feel ya and I definitely know what you want to slap out of Michael ;) Oh, I will try my best, but I dont think my readers are gonna forgive Michael too soon... :P Oh yeah got the mail hun and I mailed you back :) Hope you got it! So sorry for the late reaply well you know me ;) Oh I'm working on the chapter but I will update it as soon as possible... I am feeling very better now, thanks to you!! :D Oh yeah, see you in the next chapter as well chika ;) I LOVE YOU!!!! <3 xoxo
Date: Nov 22, 2013 06:17 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥
Oh no!!!! I am so sorry hun! :( I will pray you get feeling better soon. Get better girl I mean it!!!! :) sending big hugs your way, hospitals are not fun.
Author's Response:
HEY GIRL, mywaymj83 wow You are BACK!!!! I missed you!!!!! Thank you! Aw That's so sweet love, I'm feeling much better now :P Thanks for the warm hugs *hugging you back tightly* HAHA definitely not fun when you're the patient LOL! It's like everybody have something to order to you in hospital IMAO!! But I'm glad its finally over!! Take care, love you <3 xoxo
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2013 06:15 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥
Oh honey i hope you will completely recover soon!!!
Author's Response:
Aw Thanks Ann :) I'm really feeling good now... Take care, love you <3 xoxo
Date: Nov 19, 2013 05:02 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥
Hope you feel better :)
Author's Response:
Hey Ida :) Thank you so much hon... :D I'm feeling pretty good now... Take Care, Love you <3 xoxo
Date: Nov 19, 2013 04:10 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥
I'm glad to hear that you are recovering well from your accident and feel better now. Take care of yourself and I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey Vicki !! :) Thank you so much hon :D Yeah I'm feeling better now and I'm working on the chapter, should be up soon ;) Thanks for your understanding love... :) Take Care, Love you <3 xoxo
Date: Nov 19, 2013 03:11 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥
Aweee I Hope You Be Okay( =
Author's Response:
Hey Sky!!! :) Thank you so much hon... I am okay now :D Take Care, Love you <3 xoxo
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2013 01:11 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥
Wow! What a warrior you are! Glad you're feeling better!
Author's Response:
HI Miya :) Thanks so much girl!!! Aw, thank you hon! Take Care, Love you <3 xoxo
Date: Nov 19, 2013 11:33 am Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥
oh sweetie! Its totally understandable! (this time ;) ) take care of yourself! and please be a very good patient! Get well soon...
lots of love, hugs n kisses!
Author's Response:
Hi Vinaya :) THANK YOU hon!! Thanks so much for the understanding, you know. Haha I'm a horrible patient lol! But Thanks again love... :D Aw, kiss you and hug you back tight! *Sighs* Take Care, Love you <3 xoxo
Date: Nov 19, 2013 11:08 am Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥
Hope you're doing well, girl. take your time. it'"s always the worth to wait.
Love your story and can't wait the next part.
The last one was so intense and emotional....
Please, take care
Nellan
Author's Response:
Hey Nellan :) THANK YOU hon!!! Yeah I'm doing pretty well... :) Yeah I'm trying to best to make it worth the wait, hope you like it :P I'm glad you liked the last chapter. Aw, Thank you love... <3 Take care, love you! <3 xoxo
Date: Nov 12, 2013 05:28 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥
Hi! oh my god I absolutly love your story, you're a great author :)
Author's Response:
Hi Jen :) Welcome here! ;) THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! Wow it means SO much to me... *.* So pleased to meet you girl <3 Lots of love your way <3 xx
Date: Nov 03, 2013 02:44 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 27: Take Me Far, Far Away... ♥
Oh my God what has he done to her..? His anger and self-punishment has overflowed and he's taking it out on her...she doesn't deserve this, she needs the sensitive Michael back, the one who cares for her and adores her. Oh shit...what a mess...
Author's Response:
Hey Tiger!! :) I know... so sad :/ You are right and the sensitive Michael is on his way back don't worry ;) He just closes off to her just like he does to everyone... but Michael should know better! He can't ignore his heart *.* Thanks so much for stopping and leaving your review hun! Really I MEAN it!!! :D Lots of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2013 10:27 am Title: ♥ Chapter 27: Take Me Far, Far Away... ♥
O.O That was my reaction when I finished reading this chapter! Holy Shit this is not a STORY not a FICTION it's a freggin DOCUMENTARY OR BIOGRAPHY!!!!!! I feel it right here! Jeez!
I could feel for Michael but he needs to man up and LET HER IN GODDAMIT! How long he's going to cower like a coward?! He needs to OPEN UP!!!
“So wh—who’s Joseph?” She asked again. She was curious.
This time the answer was swift. “The man who tormented my childhood"
Nita couldn’t help the perplexity wrinkling her brows. “What do you mean? Why didn’t you tell your father?"
"Joseph is my father.” He said nonchalantly and turned back to her.
BANG!
“You did say I was adjusting my features like every other people said.” Came the vile reminder.
“Because I didn’t know about you anything more than other people knew. I thought I did. But no. I still don’t know you!”
WOW!
"Why?" he sneered, his words mocking. "Because I'm unhappy? I don't know what even makes you think I'm unhappy?"
Nita let out a sad smile, her eyes turning glossy. "How pathetic it will be Michael... if you don't know it yourself..." She paused, sniffing. "Do you know what I first noticed about you?" She asked blankly.
And that question made something change in his demeanor as his eyes looked straight into hers, almost eagerly. "No. What did you first notice about me?" Your dots. Your nose. Your clothes. He was expecting all these familiar answers. But what came through her lips was nothing he ever thought.
Nita pushed the lump down her throat and bit out, "The pain in your eyes." She took her coat and dashed out of the room before he could even realize what she said.
10/10!!!
And I loved the Yatza flashback! Yatzabamizi is so cute unlike her name LOL You asked who she's reminding.... well the moment I laid my eyes on her, she KINDA reminded me of Blanket. Is that what you were expecting? :PP Her mother is EXOTIC! Now I know why mike had that THANG for East-Indians LMAO!!!
BUT I SURE AS HELL WOULD NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS ACCEPT WHAT HE DID FOR MY POOR NITA! THE BOY NEEDS SPANKING RIGHT NOW!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL I can imagine that face Ellah! WOOO THANKS! That's exactly what I've been working on! :P I thought Michael needs a biography about his personal life! Exactly he needs to let her in to see his pain... she's not going to magically know it all. He needs to let her see. And trust her enough for that. LOL! That scene just popped in my head when I was reading a story lol!
I know she's the one for him. I hope he does as well... I'm not going to divulge anything more than this! *mouth zipped* you girls literally drag out the words in my head you know lol! I need to save it all for the next chapter :P
Haha, its an African origin name! Wow Blanket? Hmm... we'll see ;) LOL I know!
Hmm... Right. He could never get forgiveness but we'll see... :D Haha spanking?! LOL! I'm really laughing! Thanks for your wonderful review, Ellah, as always, life up my sprits! Lots of love your way <3 xx