Date: Mar 31, 2024 07:37 am Title: His Name
I hate both ! Poor Michael
Date: Mar 31, 2024 07:16 am Title: My Mistake
It's not badly written, but I really struggle with racism and people like that. Sorry. :/
Date: Mar 31, 2024 07:12 am Title: Milk
I hate racism. Bruh.
Date: Sep 11, 2018 01:12 am Title: His house
I just read your story and I just wanted to say I absolutely loved it so far. I don’t know if you are going to continue it or not but I am hooked. I want to know what happens between Michael and Tiffany. It seems to me that Michael got bit by the love bug. So good!
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2017 10:47 pm Title: Milk
wish you were still updating ): i love the story
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2016 08:33 pm Title: His house
Where are you girl? I miss the hell out of you and this story
[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2016 02:32 pm Title: His house
Really enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapter :) Looks like music is their shared passion. Hopefully Tiffany can keep Michael and John away from each other.
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2016 05:30 am Title: His house
What the hell is going on this story is too much but l love it keep it coming girl
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 01:09 pm Title: His house
I was a little iffy at the first reading it because you arranged it in the first chapter but now reading more into the story. I have to say you're doing a decent job so far! I cracked up when Janet found out what he used in her shampoo oh mj such a prankster smh. I'll pop up more and spread my comment sparkles on your story. Also if your interested in a banner I'll love to do one for you if you want.
Author's Response:
Lol thank you i love a good critique. I want to make this story as good as possible. I'm gettinng better along the way i think. Adding more detail chapeter by chapter. The next story im going to write is going to be top notch lol. I hold this story dear to me though. If you have any more critiquing you can tell me. I love them. and thank you! I love reading reviews on how people view the story.
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 10:50 am Title: His house
I'm glad Tiffany and Michael are friends now. Hopefully, they can be more soon. I don't think Michael should be upset that Tiffany made him hide from John. She was only trying to protect him. I think she needs to tell Michael who John's father is. I wonder what Tiffany's dad has been doing this while time. Amazing chapter!!! Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
I will continue soon! I love reading your comments! <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2016 11:00 am Title: His Name
Yes Tiffany. She's finally coming around. John needs to die. Point blank. I hope Michael and Tiffany have a nice long talk and kiss. Thank God for Tiffany's dad. Please continue soon!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2016 11:44 am Title: The Drive-In
Tiffany needs to stop that mess. What kind of person does that? And having a friend who's father is the grand wizard for the KKK? Screw that. I'm glad she said they were just friends. Daisy seems annoying as hell. Lmao I can't believe Michael pissed in Janet's soap! That's hilarious! I need someone to think about me the way Michael does Tiffany. I really hope Tiffany isn't a complete bitch to him, though. He's too sweet for that. I know Michael won't give up on her. This is amazing! Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
Haha.. Thank you soo much! Tiffany is stupid ahaha lmao
Date: Aug 08, 2016 02:27 pm Title: My Mistake
Lol I thought you would never finish. Glad to see you back.
Author's Response:
😃😃😃😃
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2016 01:44 pm Title: My Mistake
Oh my God I remember this story!!! I was so in love with it!!! I'm so happy that you updated!!! Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
You'll be my motivation. 😃😊
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2012 08:41 am Title: Milk
i knew you would write a story like this lol. its good though keep writing it. AND DON'T DELETE IT!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah i always wanted to! You tell me if its realistic ok? Considering your circumstances HAHA!