Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2015 03:24 pm Title: *Chapter One* December 6, 1995

I would like you to continue writing this story.

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2012 06:21 pm Title: *Chapter Three* Breathless

girl im really intrigued with this one. this story deserve more attention and reviews if you ask me!! update soon!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2012 02:54 pm Title: *Chapter Three* Breathless

^_^ Awwwh!!! I actually flipped out when I saw the dedication at the start of the chapter! ^_^ Ahhhhhh, you're not only an incredible writer; you're incredibly sweet!! :3

But omg; back to the story ;) - 

(I actually had to add it to my favourites because its just THAT awesome, omg!)

This flashback was moving; the Jacksons teased each other about their features but I think it affected Michael the most in the deepest ways... :( You could really feel it; the part where he is looking out of the window while they're teasing. 

This line really got me-

"   He wasn't mad at his brothers but at himself. "

Ahhhh. It pained me!

 

But ahaha omg; the part with Olive's dog, lolol! 

Michael and Olive had that instant connection... oo0oo0h cannot wait to read more from this omg! ( by the way, I write 'omg' all the time so... I hope it doesnt annoy you because I will be 'omg'ing a lot lmfao.)

This deserves wayy more reviews! I cant get enough of it. :P

Much LOVE! , <3

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2012 05:20 am Title: *Chapter One* December 6, 1995

Wow, you captured so much emotion in this one chapter... How you illustrated Lisa's and Michael's relationship did depict some true life events, right? Like Lisa's quote about furniture and bearing his children... :S So heartbreaking.

You have an incredible talent, such a way with words! I love it :P

Cant wait to read the next chapter! , <3

Author's Response:

Gosh! Girl what are you? Angel?! Thanks soooo damn much!!! Yeah, I tried to use their own conversation along with some true events... :P Hehe yeah! yep its heart breaking if its what really happened, right?! *sighs* Wow! Thanks again pyt! Your lovely review made my day!!! Lots of love <3 <3 <3

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2012 07:54 am Title: *Chapter One* December 6, 1995

Great chappie :P Possesive husband mike is too sexy to handle lol!!! please continue <3

Author's Response:

Hehe Thanks! :P Ikr?! lol! he soon would have to play the role of lover, hope you will like that too <3

Reviewer: MJSexyAsHell Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2012 09:13 pm Title: *Chapter One* December 6, 1995

This is the type of story that just draws me in.
YOU GO GIRL!!! :D

Author's Response:

Thank you girl :) Wow, and you're my first reviewer! hehe :P