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Reviewer: MychaelaJaleesa Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2012 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm digging this :) *continues reading*



Author's Response: Thanks doll. New update is posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2012 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 56- reception part 2

Awww i really loved this chapter. I really liked it when you put 2 of my many favorite Michael Jackson songs into this chapter. I started to cry when Michael was dancing with Jocelyn and You Are My Life was playing that was so adoriable. And when Michae was singing Heaven Can Wait to Brie i was listing to the song when i reading this chapter and i started to cry a little bit. And now the fun begins if you know what i mean ;-) lol. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: I love those songs. Of course, it's hard to pick an absolute favorite of his. And yes I do know what you mean by fun. Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2012 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 55-reception part 1

Aww this was such a beautiful chapter. I was crying when Michael and Gabby was dancing. I started to cry more when Gabby was dancing with her dad. And i cryed even more when Michael danced with his mother. And when Michael wiped away his mother's tears that was touching. *sniff* The songs you used really matched the mood of each dance. Im still crying a little lol. But the cake looks good and the tables and tthe cake cutters are beautiful i love how their are lights the tables. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: I am so glad you like the story. The next update is posted and I actually cried while writing that one. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: Jrmspfingston Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2012 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 55-reception part 1

awe sweet can't wait for the next update



Author's Response: Update posted. thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2012 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 54- wedding day

Awwwww. Im so happy *sniff*. The vows were so beautiful *sniff* and im glad that Michael and Gabriella are now husban and wife. The picture of Brie's dress it was so pritty and everything else was just beautiful and may i say Michael looks good in a white tux ;-). I just wish i could have a ring like Brie has lol. The song you used really matched the moment and mood. I could really imagine the whole wedding and i felt like i was their watching the whole thing. Whenever you can get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: It took me a while to find all those pictures. I wish I could have a ring like Bries' too. Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2012 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 53- wedding plans part 3

Aww Brie's daddy is in her life again and im so happy. And im glad Michael forgave Shawn. And im so excited the wedding is almost hear. Im happy that everything is going smoothly so far. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: I know. She is a big daddys' girl. Like me. Update posted. I am sooo excited for this next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2012 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 52-wedding plans part 2

OMG i cant wait to see the dresses and the tuxs and Jocelyn's dress i know all of them are going to look great. Im prepairing myself for the wedding because i know im going to cry happy tears. And i guess Gabby doesnt play when other women hang around Michael especially when they are the it girl lol. Lets just hope Tatiana doesnt try to do something that she will regret with Michael and she has to deal with the force of Gabby lol. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: I can't wait for you all to see the dresses and tuxs' and the cake. No she doesn't play when other people get a little too cozy with her man. Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2012 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 51- wedding plans part 1

I cant wait to see the dress Brie is going to wear and the tux Michael is going to wear. And i Love the flowers they are prietty. And the cake sounds yummy :) I have a sugestion for what Jocelyn should wear she should wear the same color dress Brie is going to wear but it could be a different color like a sunflower yellow or a light yellow but not to light but its up to you ;). Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: I like your idea, but I am going to change it a bit, you'll see. I like it. I'll update again soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2012 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 50

Aww i still cant believe Michael and Brie is going to get married. Im so happy for them. It sucks that Michael has to go on his HIStory Tour for T months and miss Jocelyn's firsts but i know that Gabby will record every moment. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: I know it'll be hard, but I am confident they will make it through. Update posted. There are pictures at the end of each chapter up to wedding of some things they planned in each chapter. You won't get to see Michael in his tux or the dress that Brie will be in or the bridesmaids dresses or the rings or the ceremony flowers or the cake until the actual wedding chapter. Sorry. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2012 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 49

Awww this chapter was so cuite i like how Michael is caring. It was really funny when Gabby and Michael was talking dirty infront of his mom i busted out laughing and my mom was again looking at me crazy o.0 lol. Im glad you understood what i was trying to say in the last comment i posted. Sometimes when i write a review it never makes any sense from what i was trying to say in my mind. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: I know. I loved that part. I understood completely I just had to have some fun. LOL. Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2012 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 48

Aww this was so touching. Im happy Michael has Brie even though she is really stubborn and im glad Brie has Michael. Im just hoping when Brie leaves the hospital nothing else bad happends and im hoping Adam's next target is one of Michael's family memebers or worse. And i understand why Brie wants to go home i dont like hospitals either. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: Yes she is verrrryyyyy stubborn, I guess that's why they are perfect for each other. Ummm, you're hoping Adams' next target is one of Michaels' family members or worse? LOL. I get it. I understand what you meant. It's cool I just had to say something. LOL Anyway, stay tuned. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2012 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 47

Awww Gabby's ok. Im crying tears of joy. Wow Michael was getting ready to attack Adam and i think he had every right to attack him. I just hope this time around Adam stays in jail because if he goes back he would be charged with attemped murder based on my legal knowladge that i have but i may be wrong. But Thank God Gabby is ok and hopefuly she will be able to go home. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: I think that because he was aiming for Michael and she jumped in the way that he would get charged with assault with a deadly weapon. Either way he will be out of the picture for a while. Or for good. We'll see. mwahahaha. Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2012 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 46

OMG that was so romatic UNTILL Adam came and ruind everything. I hope Gabby didnt die i nearly brokedown and my heart litterly dropped after i read that she got shot. Girl congratulations on getting 100 reviews and hears to another 100 reviews. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: I know. That was very scary. You'll have to read the update to find out. Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2012 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 45

:D I Cant wait to see Gabbys reaction. Im really happy she has someone very special in her life. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2012 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 44

I thought i heard wedding bells lol. Im Glad Michael is going to ask Gabby tto marry him. I cant wait to see her reaction. Well Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: Update posted. Would have been sooner, but, my internet was being stupid. Thanks for reading and reviewing doll. Lots of love.

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