[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2011 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 33
WOW ohh my She finally told him that she slept with Michal omg i wonder what happends now, this next chapter is shocking cuz Shane is a great guy and only loved and cared for here and to betray him like that was unfair for him...
Author's Response:
Oooooooooh, I'm so happy that you feel this way! I really want to try and make people feel for Shane, instead of just being like, "Maybe now he'll break up with her so she can freely bang the living daylights out of Michael!" Because I love all my characters, and I want my readers to feel the same:)
So your review made my day!<3
[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2010 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 32
This is a great story girl. Hope Michael and Hailey finally get together. I feel bad for Shane though cuz he seems like a good guy. But oh well, it's all about what Michael wants in my book. So, keep it coming girl.
Date: Nov 19, 2010 06:50 pm Title: Prolouge
good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2010 12:32 am Title: Chapter 29: You've Done Enough
Well a DAMN girl..Awww poor Michael and again poor her too.. =/
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2010 12:29 am Title: Chapter 28: Impulse
Ohhh SHIT Bang Bang, Wow great time to put this part into the story..
I Love Her and Michael's love story I mean they still Love each other very very much and we can see that..True She was very hurt because Michael left her the way he did, BUT it wasnt his fault..Still it hurt no matter what..Whats said is that her now fiance was there for her when she needed him the most and well she feel in love with him and he loves her..That is a great man so its really sad that his going to get hurt because he REALLY doesnt deserve it.. =/
(That part makes me a lil sad)
Anyways back to this chapter WOOT WOOT Mike and her finally give into each other..Yeaaa thats true they didnt use protection o_O
Date: Nov 07, 2010 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 28: Impulse
Are they even using protection? What if she gets pregnant?? Hmm...
Author's Response: :) I was wondering if anyone would catch that. Congrats!:)
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2010 01:41 am Title: Chapter 27: CAUTION! DO NOT ENTER!
Oh wow =/ sad chapter!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2010 12:01 am Title: Chapter 26: Digging Deeper
he doesnt have feeling for her and she is no one in his life only someone who got pregnant by him cuz he was DRUNK..he doesnt have to explain anything to her..And wow how could he betray like that by giving excuses to no one really.. I really Love your story!! Its very very Good!! Great Job!!