[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2012 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 10: Damn Tours
Wow... Madonna is a bitch. And i knew she'd be trouble! I fucking knew it!! And poor Adam and Michael :( i hope they'll be okay when Michael is on tour! Love this story! Gunna keep reading! And lol awkward moment with the teacher! Who would tell a teacher that? Haha! And by the way, i love how you have those pictures in the chapter notes by the way! They're fun to look at! And another thing, i quite like the picture! I don't find it offensive! After all, like you said, it's fiction.
Author's Response: Lol ikr? Its a weird thing to tell a teacher and thank you! Glad you like the pictures! I'm glad that you don't find that one offensive because I mean really, it's only fiction.
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2012 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 9: She's Too Much
I sense that Madonna is going to be trouble in the futur...
You know, you photo editing isnt that bad! Abd lol at what you did to your sister! Sounds like something I would do!
Author's Response: Haha you don't have to lie about my photo editing skills just to make me happy ;)
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2012 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 8: Runnin'
Michael's family need to step off! They shouldn't care whether or not he's gay! Like jeez...
I liked how you added the video! U haven't seen other authors take advantage of that feature before! Speaking of features...
hehe Mike Jr ... Glam Bulge... XD
Btw Runnin is a good song. The whole album is good though!
Author's Response: Personally I don't think that anyone should ever care about someone's sexual orientation. And ya, I don't know why other authors don't do it! I think it's pretty cool! But on the other hand what videos can you really put into an MJ fanfiction?
OMJ I fucking LOVE Adam's new album! I'm listening to Nirvana right now! XD
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2012 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 7: Disguises
"Adam had a tender something else too." Oh God...
Damn, when Adam's pissed off he's really pissed off! But he shouldn't have acted like that. Michael was dating Madonna to help their relationship! The rumour is probably going to come back now... shit..
Author's Response: Lol! I totally forgot that I wrote that! Haha! Thanks for reviewing! :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2012 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 6: Chez Edilio's
Oh shit, you've got Madonna in the picture now! I smell trouble... and damn she must really want to get in Michael's pants!! She's trying so hard! I hope Adam doesn't get too upset with Michael, after all he was only doing it to get the attention away from the rumour! LOVE this story! I'm definity going to keep reading! :D
Author's Response: Oh believe me! Madonna is going to be trouble throughout the whole story! SO glad you like this! :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2012 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 5: The Park
I think that editing Black Or White to make it sound like a duet or something would be really cool! You should definitely try it! I haven't got any tips for you though, sorry! It's sad that they can't even go for a walk in the park without getting mobbed. And that it why I don't want to be famous! Lol at Firecrotch! Is it because of the erm... red hairs that can relate to fire down in the crotch area?
Author's Response: I'm going to euther try tonight or tomorrow probably. See what I can do...
And ya, it would be tough being famous because you'd have zero alone time!! I wouldn't be able to handle it!
Hah! You're spot on with the Firecrotch thing! Lol!
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2012 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 4: Rumours
Lol! I like the comment about the reporter at the end! Haha, it made me laugh!
That picture IS nice! I love it!
Author's Response: Haha! Glad you liked it! And ya, she did a fantastic job on that picture didn't she? I love it to. :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2012 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 3: Are You Two Gay?
Oooh no. I hope their secret doesn't get out! And Michael should really listen to Adam. He shouldn't be ashamed to be who he is! :)
Author's Response: Agreed. NO ONE should ever be ashamed of who they are. EVER.
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2012 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dressing Room Love
Haha oh god... in the dressing room! And oh my god when Joseph was making those comments about the couch? I was like: oh shit. Haha great chapter girl! :) by the way, you write some pretty good slash if I do say so myself
Author's Response: Haha thank you! Glad you liked it! :) and my slash isn't all that great, Andrew has really good slash! If you wanna read really good slash, read his!
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2012 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 10: Damn Tours
I actually love the picture. xD.
Author's Response: Phew! Thank goodness! I was afraid that a lot of people would be really ofended by it! Glad you like it though, I like it too and she did a great job editing it! :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2012 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: American Music Awards
Interesting, I'm excited to keep reading! Seems good! :) I like Adam Lambert myself, so I'm pretty intrigued by the idea.
Author's Response: :) Thank you! I hope you keep reading and enjoy it! :)
Date: Jun 22, 2012 08:39 am Title: Chapter 14: I Just Can't Stop Loving You
I like the fact that Michael and Adam decided to reveal their story in their way...And they chose an amazing and romantic way to do it :)
I hope that their mutual families will accept their relationship...Madonna didn't break them really but I hope their families won't be the ones who will separate them...
Author's Response: :) I thought it was a cute way to do it too. Their families are going to get more involved later...
Date: Jun 18, 2012 08:18 am Title: Chapter 13: Game Over
Madonna is just a bitch!! I'm sorry but it's true...I'm so afraid of what will be their future as a couple if everything was reavealed...
I totally understand you about the sexual chapters, it happened to me sometimes...My readers improved when I post an adult chapter lol. On another website where I post my stories, I have comment from people who don't do it usually but only do it on the adult chapters...It's really weird...
Author's Response: Haha! Ikr! It's been like that on all of my stories! It's so weird...
Date: Jun 17, 2012 01:36 am Title: Chapter 12: Rock Bottom
Madonna is really pissing me off...Why can't she leave them alone?!!
And poor Michael, I feel really sad for him. I'm happy Adam will go to see him but I hope that it won't bring more suspicions...
I'm happy you like my story Forbidden Love, don't hesitate to review when you read it :)
I love Andrew's stories and I'm gonna read this new one, right now!
Author's Response: Haha! Just writing about her and the stuff she's doing in this story pisses me off! :D The next chapter I read, I'm going to leave a review! Yay! And yea, Andrew writes Fan to the Tas to the Tic writing! :)
Date: Jun 15, 2012 09:37 am Title: Chapter 11: Just Ignore It
Ok this chapter was pretty intense cause I really thought that the journalists would find out...How can they look in Michael's phone like this?
And Frank, god I want to slapp him lol...I really want to see how Michael will react to this article...
Author's Response: Haha I know right? If someone searched through my phone I'd be pissed off. Thanks for the review btw I'm really enjoying Forbidden Love!