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Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2012 02:35 am Title: Chapter 56: The Sequel

I can't believe that their families were fighting while they were in vacations!It's crazy to see that they can't try to act like responsible adults.

I really wonder how this dinner will turn out and what Adam has in his mind. He really wants all those troubles to end and I wonder what he will be able to do for stopping them.

Love the idea of your clay penis in art class lol...I'm sure I would have laugh so much lol



Author's Response:

The dinner will be... ahem... interesting... ;)

Haha the class laughed a lot too! The teacher on the other hand... well... that's a different story... ;)

Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate it so mcuh!

Reviewer: staciethehedghog Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2012 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 56: The Sequel

Great chapter as usual!! Keep it up :) oh... I hope the kids will be okay especially little Mia. Uh-oh.... It's the match of the century!!! If I was Michael or Adam by any chance, I would get a gun and shoot it into the air as many times just to get them to shut the fuck up and get to know one another I hope they settle the mess once and for all!!!

Karate huh? I never taken it but it sounds like fun! Lol! If I were you, I would punch the shit out of him and wouldn't give a rats ass and a muthafuckin' fuck!! Whether he lives or die and end up being in Hell!! Just give me 5 minutes with his God Foresaken ASS!!!! Hehe sorry about my little rant I'm so embarrassed for getting off and cursing like that (even though I do it in secret) love ya!!

Author's Response:

Haha! That would make for an interesting chapter wouldn't it? Lmao!

It's so much fun! Especially when you can beat up most of the guys (like me). Lmao! I would have loved to have punched him out at the moment! Haha and don't worry about your little rant! They make me smile!  Haha, I curse to myself all the time too, you're not alone with that one ;)

Reviewer: MichaeliciousMJfan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2012 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 56: The Sequel

Dang, it sucks that their families are still fighting. They should just stop and get over their issues. And girl, you should do another sex scene, you write good slash sex. I wanna see what you've got in store... lol did you seriously make that in art? A clay penis?! I need someone like you in my class, it would make school funnier! Update soon

Author's Response:

I'm planning on doing another sex scene, just waiting for the right moment :) And lmao yes. Haha trust me, you wouldn't want someone like me in my class...

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2012 08:46 am Title: Chapter 55: Handing Them Over

Like the other readers, I'm not really convinced about Madonna's offer.I think there's something bad behind this.I really hope the kids will be alright and nothing wrong will happen to them.

In another way, I'm happy that Michael and Adam will be able to be intimate again.They were missing their wild moments as I was too lol.

 



Author's Response:

:D I'm happy too, because I've been dying to write an intimate scene with the two of them again but I couldn't find the right place to put it. Hopefully I'll be able to squeeze one in soon; probably will. I already have a plan for where I want to put one, I just have to wait for that part to come around... ;)

Reviewer: MichaeliciousMJfan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2012 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 55: Handing Them Over

Eung.... I have a bad feeling about this. At the same time, they make a point. They are 15 so they should be able to figure out when Madonna's doing something conniving and then they can just get the hell outta there! I'm worried that Mia might get into some trouble with Madonna though since she's so young... :/ And yes I have heard the song by Psy lol! It's kinda weird... and seriously? a fire? hope it doesn't get too bad! I feel sorry for the people who lost their house! It's sad really. :(



Author's Response:

Haha! Good! I'm not the only one who thinks it's weird! lmao!

It's 50% contained now, which is pretty good I guess, so I'm not super worried. Yes, it is sad that someone out there has lost their homes. Probably all because some guy dropped his cigarette... >:(

Reviewer: staciethehedghog Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2012 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 55: Handing Them Over

Aw man... I was afraid it might happen wahhh!!!! I just hope the children will be okay FUCK YOU MADONNA WHY!? WHY!???? please continue Miss it's good :)

I am so sorry about what had happened :( it must have been very scary too I am praying right now for the fire not to come to your house though :)

Author's Response:

Lmao! I love your reviews...

Yeah, it sucks but it happens, what can you do? It wasn't that scary for me since it isn't that close to my house, it's just that people are panicking over it so they're thinking up the worst possible scenarios. But I really, really doubt that it'll get to my house since there was a fire around my house awhile ago so most of it's all burnt anyway so if it does come it won't have anything to feed off of, so all of the burnt stuff in my area really acts like a barrier so I think I'll be fine. :) And thank you!

Keep up the good work with SBL girl! You know I love it! :D

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2012 11:22 am Title: Chapter 54: No Freedom

I don't blame the kids for being angry at Michael and Adam. They wanted to try show business and beginning with Madonna can be really something.

But I understand Adam and Michael.How can they trust Madonna after all she did? I think the kids exagerated a little when they said they had no freedom.

I feel bad for your student exchange student.This teacher is an a-hole.Hope it will get better for her soon.



Author's Response:

I know! I feel so bad for her! But she says that it doesn't really bother her because whenever the teacher gets mad at her she doesn't understand so it doesn't really hurt her! lmao! She's got a great sense of humour!

I don't know if you're still into Adam Lambert but I found this video that I thought you might enjoy if you haven't already seen it. MJ's even in it! Well... his song...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgzTViVFUwA

MJ bit: 3:00 - 3:25

Funny Bit: 4:55 - 7:05

Okay, it may not be that funny, but I lmao-ed!

I decided to tell you the good bits because it's like 11 mins long and it's just him performing (which is worth watching in my opinion because it's pretty damn good but at the same time not everyone has 11mins on their hands to watch Adam perform songs just to look for a funny bit that might not even be that funny)

ANYWAY, I just thought I'd share that with you... haha!

Reviewer: MichaeliciousMJfan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2012 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 54: No Freedom

Hmmm... I have a bad feeling about Madonna. But then again, don't we all? I understand the kids point of view but they should also understand their parents point of view! Madonna has done so much wrong in the past I don't know how they'll be able to trust her with their kids! Aww! Your poor exchange student! What an a-hole of a teacher! Wow! That's horrible! I'd be so pissed off! Hopefully things will get easier for her, it's only the first week. Great story! :) I look forward to the next update! :D



Author's Response:

Haha! You're right about the bad feeling! Nobody's exactly 'thrilled' to see her back ;)

Haha I agree with the a-hole comment!

Thank you! I think I'll get an update in this weekend! I'm trying to chill out with my updates, I'm worried that people think I have no life because all I do is update update update lmao!

Reviewer: staciethehedghog Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2012 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 54: No Freedom

Uh-Oh I smell trouble.... Ugh... I HATE Madonna always want to have things her way and if she don't get it, acts like a spoiled rotten ***** kids, change tour mind you don't know what your up against!!! Please follow on the right path!!! Please!!! Lord have Merci!!!!!!

Aw... I'm sorry to hear about tour exchange student :( I have friends who are Mexican, and the woman's mother speaks fluent spanish but a little English so... It's hard on her too but hopefully, things will turn out better for her five her my warm regards and thanks for like S.B.L let's see what's wrong with Randy soon please continue!!! :)

Author's Response:

Haha your sense of smell isn't fooling you...

Ugh, I was so mad when I heard that that happened to her. Like, it's not like she wasn't listening she just didn't understand! Liek, I'm tryign to learn Finnish, and so far it's okay but not great. If I had to go to school in Finland, where they only spoke Finnish I would probably be just like her. I'd try my best to understand (obviously) but that doesn't mean that will understand.

I think once he realises that she's French he'll start to chill out... hopefully. If he doesn't then whatever, I'll just keep giving him dirty looks in the hall, either way is good with me!

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2012 11:33 am Title: Chapter 53: Stalker Maybe?

Damned but Madonna, leave Michael and Adam alone. She wants to fix things but I really doubt it's sincere.With all the things she did in the past, I can't believe her.

Now she wants to take the kids and get their talents.She will want to be the ones who reveal Glambert's kids talents and use them...She's not doing that for being nice, I'm sure of it!



Author's Response:

Haha! You make a point, she hasn't given them any reason AT ALL to believe what she's saying is true! Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: MichaeliciousMJfan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2012 06:51 am Title: Chapter 53: Stalker Maybe?

I'm happy that Madonna wants to fix things but I don't think she's doing a good job haha! She wants to take the kids? Probably just to use their talent to her benefit! I have a feeling that there's going to be a big argument in the next update... HA nice job with the fire! I'd be scared to live with you too ;)

Author's Response:

Haha! The only thing she's done a good job of in this whole story is being a complete pain in the neck! Lmao! Maybe... maybe not, we'll see. It's Madonna we never know what she's gunna do ;)

Lmao! The fire... I'm so stupid! In my defense, it doesn't look like tinfoil! It looks like paper! But then again you shouldn't but paper in the microwave either right? Haha! A lot of people are scared to live with me...

Reviewer: staciethehedghog Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2012 05:42 am Title: Chapter 53: Stalker Maybe?

Oh Lord have mercy Jesus. She won't let go huh? Damn... And I thought they were done with her ass lol!! WHAT!? She want's to take the kids with her!? Oh HELL TO THE NO! Let's see what happens next great chappie girl :) and thanks so much for liking S.B.L :)

Author's Response:

Haha! Next chapter will be... not tonight, maybe tomorrow, maybe the night after. School's starting to I'm just like losing my shit right now trying to get myself prepared! Lmao!

Dude, thank you for writing it



Author's Response:

Haha! Next chapter will be... not tonight, maybe tomorrow, maybe the night after. School's starting to I'm just like losing my shit right now trying to get myself prepared! Lmao!

Dude, thank you for writing it

Reviewer: sassy-chick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2012 07:03 am Title: Chapter 1: American Music Awards

i love your story it is so vivid and i love it



Author's Response: Oh my gosh! Yay! Thank you! Glad you love it! I appreciate the review!! :D

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2012 09:13 am Title: Chapter 52: Starstruck

I'm sorry to say that again, but Mia is perfect.She's so gorgeous for not being mention lol.

I don't like the fact that Michael feel they're less intimate and they're less close since the kids are here.Being parents can be hard for the couple life and the intimacy.

And what Madonna is doing here again? Each time, I see her name in this story, I'm scared lol...She will ruined everything again...



Author's Response: Haha! Don't be sorry! Lmao! I'm actually basing Mia off of a lot of my little cousins because they seriously say the weirdest stuff! Lmao! Lmao SHES BACK! haha but I've got plans for her, and they're completely different from last time...

Reviewer: MichaeliciousMJfan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2012 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 52: Starstruck

Lol! Oh my gosh MIA!! The thing about punishing Adam and administering spankings had me laughing so hard! XD NOOOOOOO! NOT HER AGAIN! DANGG!!!!

Author's Response:

Ha! Mia... she's so dirty and she doesn't even know it ;)

Oh yeah, it's her again, but this time around she'll be a little different, you'll see...

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