[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2012 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 61: Abused
I understand how Madonna feels bad but still... I don't like her. Whatever happened it was probably her fault. Poor Michael and Adam!! It sucks that the flight is so long, but they'll get there soon :)
Author's Response:
Hehe nobody really likes her right now :P
Date: Oct 04, 2012 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 61: Abused
*sniff* I hope things turn out for the best :'(
Wow.... Vancouver? Sounds like an awesome place in Canada especially when the Jacksons did their victory tour concert there ;) lol
Sorry that you have so much on your plate :( life's not fair and we have to make the best of it. Two guys fighting over a peach? Please -_-' lol!! Awkward..... Hope you are having a great time on your vacation and thanks for loving s.b.l so much! :) more will be in by tomorrow night; mom has appointments early in the morning and I hope I'll survive them :)
Author's Response:
It's great! The shopping is really good XD lmao! Did I tell you that my friend's mom helped out with the Jacksons' show during the victory tour? She got to meet them... ALL of them! :DDDDDDDDDDD Sooooooooooooooo lucky!
Haha it;s good though, it keeps me busy. At least I'm not bored :P Lmao, I know, it's so stupid.
I wanted to contact you about the offer you gave me on your last review but for some reason the 'contact' button isn't working so I'll just tell you now...
My answer is going to have to be a no thanks. I love SBL so much, but I really prefer just reading it and wondering what's going to happen instead of making stuff happen. Plus, I don't want to commit to something that I might not be able to keep pulling through with. To add, you're doing a fantastic job on it by yourself :) I love your work. If you ever want help with just one particular chapter though I'll gladly help you out. Just let me know, but I'll have to pass on co-writing.
<3
Date: Sep 28, 2012 01:28 am Title: Chapter 60: 6 Hours, 40 Minutes
I'm like Michael and Adam, I'm so in a hurry to know what happened to the kids and if they're alright.
I don't like what Michaael thought about his kids' life, their family life.He's pretty right but I think that they already shared very good moments as a family.They can be this family he thought about, taking breakfast and stuff, if they want.No matter how famous Adam and Michael are.
Author's Response:
:P I'm gunna try and build up the suspense on the next few chapters. Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: Sep 27, 2012 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: American Music Awards
Sure you can contact me next month and I totally understand hope you have a great time :) Mam and warm regards to you and your family ;) :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Okay, Imma contact you by e-mail tonight! XD
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 60: 6 Hours, 40 Minutes
Oh my God!! I want to know whar happened to the kids!! I hope the flight goes well, although I have a feeling that it won't...
Aw! :( sorry about the face plant! On the bright side, at least you made people laugh!
Author's Response:
That'll all be coming up in the next few chapters! I won't be able to update anythng for awhile though, not until October :P So you'll hafta wait a little bit.
Lmao! Well, I did make people laugh... especially my friend :P it actually didn't hurt as bad as I made it out to be, I was just trying to be more dramatic for the sake of the story. it still hurt though, don't get me wrong!
Date: Sep 27, 2012 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 60: 6 Hours, 40 Minutes
DEAR GOD!!! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING MEEEEE!!!!! Sorry hehehe I just hope the kids are okay :'( please continue!!
Ouch... I'm so sorry that had to happen to you Miss :( that's must have hurt real bad :( Awww.....
Hey, I was just doing some thinking and I was wondering, since we are very good to each-other, and commenting on one another's stories, how would you like to be my co-author for S.B.L? If not, I understand no need to rush and I know you are very busy but I updated chapters 57 and p2 of it if you would like to read them take care and God bless your good soul :)
Author's Response:
Haha :D But at least you're intrigues right? I'll continue as soon as possible, but I won't be able to update anythign until October :/
The face plant itself wasn't that bad, it was just super embarrassing. Lmao! especially since the guy I liked was there. I looked like such a dork :P
Aweh... damn, I have to think about it. I love SBL so the idea of co-writting would be awesome! On the other hand, I also love just reading it instead of writing it but on the third hand, I friggin love mpreg and I'd totally love to write that... Damn... But on the fourth hand, I already have so many other stories that I'm working on and I don't want to commit to something that I won't be able to stick to, especially since I'll be leaving the country soon and I won't know when I'd be able to contact you and stuff.
Can I contact you in early October? After this weekend? I just need to think it through for a minute. I would like to have given you an answer now, but I don't have one and I didn't want to not reply and have you think that I was ignoring you or something. I want you to know that I'm totally considering it because I really love that story and I really love mpreg... OMJ the decision is making me go crazy!
Okay, how about I contact you later then? I need to think about it :D I did read the new updates by the way!
(BTW I won't be able to contact you until October because I'm going away this weekend lmao, just in case you were wondering)
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2012 07:24 am Title: Chapter 59: Forget Everything
Yay! I'm happy that Michael was able to comfort Adam! :) But now I'm worried about the call from Madonna... hospital? What kind of accident? Something tells me she did it on purpose, but I don't know.Update when you can! :)
Author's Response:
XD well, was there any doubt that Michael wouldn't be able to? Michael just seems like such a comforting person, it only seemed fitting to make him comfort Adam.
The answers to the questions about the accident will be answered in the next chapter :)
Thanks for the review!
Date: Sep 23, 2012 02:31 am Title: Chapter 59: Forget Everything
This chapter was beautiful.I feel sad for Adam but what Michael said to him was really beautiful. And damned, I really hope that the kids will be alright.
More stress for Adam who didn't need that.
I really like how you write girl :-)
Oh boys! lol.How immature they can be lol. I was like your friend at school.All the guys that could have a crush on me were ugly lol.And of course, I had crushes on the great ones...You're never approached by the kind of men you want lol.
And as I understood, you're canadian? It's my dream to visit your country and maybe to live there one day :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) And you already know how I feel about your writing... LOVE IT!
Oh God... the guys here are horribly immature. Lmao! I don't understand why life does that to us girls. Why do we always get stalked by the ugly ones and have to fantasize about the hot ones? lmao!
Yes! :D Oh really? It's really nice here! I'm sure you'd like it! There are some really beautiful places here; I'm not gunna lie.
I know you're French, so I assume you're from France, and lemme tell you I can't wait to go there and see it all! France seems like such a pretty place! :D
Date: Sep 22, 2012 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 59: Forget Everything
Awww poor Adam :( the stress is really getting to him. I'm thankful that Michael is there to make him feel all better though :)
Oh no!!! I wonder what has happened to the children; hopefully they'll be okay :( please update!!!!
hehehe boys they all always get you every time. Lucky I am not where you are or else I would whoop their ass and wouldn't give a damn about it if they ever tried to have their way with me or even touch me in an innappropriate manner.
Author's Response:
XD Michael is great. That's always how I imagined Michael, reallly comforting.
Haha most of the time the guys are all talk and no touch, so it isn't that bad. ;)
Date: Sep 19, 2012 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 58: Michael's Turn
I'm happy that the families finally decided to act as grown ups and will try to get along well.
But now I'm really worried about Adam.He seemed so hurt and far from everything that's happening. I hope Michael will find a way to bring the old Adam back.
Author's Response:
I honestly love how in all of your review you don't just say 'good job' but you respond to the story! I look forward to your reviews because of that! Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2012 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 58: Michael's Turn
Yay! I'm glad that the families made up in the end, but I don't think that that's the end of it... I feel bad for Michael. I understand how he feels. I had a friend who was going through a lot and wasn't saying anything and it was just a mess!! I relate to you about the laughing in class thing! Happens all the time! Oh cool about the concert! Have fun! (I can tell you're extremely happy since that Josh guy is one of your celebrity crushes)
Author's Response:
We'll see if anythign happens with the family in the futur...
Yeah, it can be tough when you meet someone like that. Most of the time they don't want to open up. I know because I hate discussing my problems with people because I feel that they don't care about my problems, or it's just another thing that they ahve to worry about. I'd prefer not to get everyone involved with my issues so I just don't really say anything, although I've never been so... isolated... like Adams feeling. Now I've realised to just tell people if you have a problem, and it's a million times better I must admit! Hopefully Adam will be able to realise it too ;)
Yay! I'm not the only one! Lmao!
I'm gunna have so much fun. I'm so excited. I can't wait to touch Josh. I will touch him. I'm so determined it's not even funny. Apparently, while he sings 'Fallout' he jumps down off of the stage and let's the fans carress him! >:)I know what I'll be carressing...
Kidding! :P I'm not that creepy
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2012 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 58: Michael's Turn
Yay!! It's about time the families made up but I feel like what Mike felt he's proud that he apologized but still Leary about what had truly happened and won't forget about it either.
ARGH!!! THE PAPPARAZZI BETTER FUCK THE HELL OFF!!! SOMEBODY NEEDS TO GET A PISTOL AND SHOOT IT INTO THE AIR!!! Trust me it will work ;) lol!!
Poor Adam all the stress is really getting to him :( let's hope Mike will bring him back to his original self. Great chapter Miss please continue and big thanks for S.B.L :) love ya!!
Author's Response:
Lmao! You're still totally hooked on the gun thing! Haha! Something tells me that that wouldn't be taken lightly if they just walked out into public and started shooting a gun! Haha! Entertaining, not gunna lie, but major consequences would follow! Lmao!
Ah, you don't have to thank me for liking SBL! If anything I should be thanking you for writing it so well and keeping the readers engaged! You're doing a great job with that story! :) Love ya girl! <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2012 08:16 am Title: Chapter 57: The Best We Can Do
This is just like in Romeo and Juliet where the families hate each-other Adam is Romeo and Mike is Juliet lol!!!
Wow.... 4 buses? My sister lives in an apartment which is like I think 10 minutes from where we live? And she has to take 2 buses to get to our house to visit whenever she's on her off days from work. Since she doesn't have a car (and can't drive -_-') anyway, great chappie :) hope you update soon :)
Author's Response:
Haha! Nice comparison! I like it! ;)
Yeah, it sucks. 2 buses for a ten minute drive? Ugh, I'd probably just walk! Okay, probably not, but still. That's unfortunate.
Thank you for the constant reviews! I appreciate it so much!
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2012 07:23 am Title: Chapter 57: The Best We Can Do
Wow. They really hate each othe. The only good thing about this chapter was the end when it said that the words were sinking in... it gives me hope for the upcoming chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Hehe, hope is good, but sometimes misleading ;)
Date: Sep 16, 2012 01:47 am Title: Chapter 57: The Best We Can Do
Their families are really stupid and immature. I really hoped that what Michael and Adam said to them will make them change their minds.
You're right sweety, write a sex scene.I really feel you're craving for one lol. I will read your new story "Chokehold" :-)
Author's Response:
Lmao! I totally am craving for one! I feel so dirty admitting it but it's so true! Haha! Thank you! I hope you like it! :D