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Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2012 07:36 am Title: The truth pt. II

Wow... I really like this story! It's not easy to captivate me with Fanfic literature, so GREAT job! Plz continue! :D



Author's Response:

Aaah you're not easily captured but you like this one? Wow, I appreciate that. Thank you :'D

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2012 01:01 pm Title: Damn.

great story, girl!!

I just discovered it, so please, keep going!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, and I definitely will :) Thanks for reading !

Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2012 06:08 am Title: This was the moment.

Please continue awesome story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonPassionateWriter Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2012 03:04 am Title: This was the moment.

I love the pictures u posted. It's beautiful and clear. Eva mendez is so pretty. I wonder if Michael and eva kiss again. Hopefully it will be the right moment this time and hopfully they stay together forever. Continue :D i can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I love Eva Mendez's look. She's beautiful. Hm, maybe they will, you'll just have to see :') I'll make sure to update whenever I can.

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonPassionateWriter Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2012 02:45 am Title: Just one call.

Yay she is going back and having dinner with him. I can't wait to see what happens

Author's Response:

Yes she is. How do you think it'll go? Stay tuned :)

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonPassionateWriter Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2012 02:21 am Title: Regret and Remorse.

I hope they fine the time to love each other and trust each other. I don't want them to fall apart leading to unbearable pain and disadvantageous misunderstanding. Everyone needs companionship and love. I guess it takes time to heal.

Author's Response:

You're absolutely right. Everything takes time. Stayed tuned though. Hopefully you'll like the outcome. Mind you, there will be many trials they'll have to surpass if they do find time to love each other. Thank you for reviewing ! ^_^

Reviewer: BabyGirl25135 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2012 05:43 pm Title: Regret and Remorse.

NNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!! YYYYYYYYY!!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol. I understand your frustrations ! Stay tuned, it gets better :D

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2012 02:35 am Title: Nightmare.

Oh no is the nightmare coming true? :0 i hope not. I hope evelyn can find michael.

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Date: Jul 25, 2012 02:28 am Title: The kiss.

Woo hoo they kissed finally. Michael im telling ur mother what u did ha! XD just joking hee-hee

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2012 02:20 am Title: The truth.

Thats alot to take in of what he did to her and it outrages me that he killed his kid and hate her for it.

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2012 02:11 am Title: Why?

We love u more. Does eva have a painful past? I wonder if she does. Michael is sweet and caring to do that for her.

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Date: Jul 25, 2012 02:05 am Title: Bound to get wet.

Its funny they ran in the rain and fell rolling on top of each other.

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Date: Jul 25, 2012 01:58 am Title: Breakfast.

Michael is such an flirt and beautiful gentleman.

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Date: Jul 25, 2012 01:48 am Title: What a morning.

They cute anf funny. Michael is a peeping tom. Shame on u michael go tap it see what she does XD don't mind me im crazy O.O xD

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2012 01:39 am Title: Where am I?

Aww how cute. i love kids they are adorable. Eva and michael would make a cute couple if they ever get together

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