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Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2011 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 3

This story is beautiful. It describes the emotion so passionately ^_^

Reviewer: HIS Darling Dear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2011 12:16 am Title: Chapter 14

Poor Michael. . .

this story was really addicting I love it. I felt everything. Please continue!

Reviewer: MJacksonsgirl4 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2011 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oh God.. Now I feel like crying :'(

Reviewer: Andrea Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2010 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Hehehehe...Mike's sister is called Andrea, like meeee :D

I just started to read this one and it sounds exciting Hailey. Great job again :D

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2010 12:01 am Title: Chapter 10

Poor Michael. =(

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2010 01:37 am Title: Chapter 9

Good to know that there is atleast one kind soul here... I just hope her helping him out won't cause anymore harm to him.

Update soon! I'm liking this a lot.

Reviewer: Hay Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2010 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

this story is really creative its not like any of the other stories! i love it!

i cant wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I tried to make it different, although I'm warning you, there's not going to be much sex.XD I want this story to be more about healing the pain, and getting through it all.

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2010 01:16 am Title: Chapter 7

No don't stop there! Is that the girl he wasn't supposed to talk to in the beginning?

Update soon!



Author's Response:

Heehee, I guess we'll find out...:) And I'm already typing the next chapter, hopefully it'll be up by tonight.

Reviewer: tiaclari Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2010 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whoa! incredible story!

My eyes are literally WIDE open while reading!

Reviewer: MJSmile Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2010 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 6

Wow, this a really good story...sad but good please continue :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's kind of angsty, but the concept popped into my head, and I just had to use it. :) I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: MelJay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2010 03:15 am Title: Chapter 6

hey! I live in Virginia lol. but anyways, great story. its so sad.

Author's Response:

you do? Haha, that's funny! I mainly used it, because I wasn't exactly sure what other staes were part of colonial America.^^;

Reviewer: mjsgirl13 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2010 12:12 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow this story is so heartbreaking. I was reading it on themjifc and absolutely enjoyed it. Keep going!!

Author's Response:

Heehee, you were? I'm glad that you're enjoying it:)

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2010 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

Wow.. these 6 chapters were intense as heck.

Please update soon! I'm really liking this.



Author's Response:

Thanks, and I was hoping they were! I'm glad that you like it:)

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