Date: Aug 01, 2011 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
This story is beautiful. It describes the emotion so passionately ^_^
Date: Mar 24, 2011 12:16 am Title: Chapter 14
Poor Michael. . .
this story was really addicting I love it. I felt everything. Please continue!
Date: Feb 24, 2011 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh God.. Now I feel like crying :'(
Date: Nov 19, 2010 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Hehehehe...Mike's sister is called Andrea, like meeee :D
I just started to read this one and it sounds exciting Hailey. Great job again :D
Date: Oct 23, 2010 01:37 am Title: Chapter 9
Good to know that there is atleast one kind soul here... I just hope her helping him out won't cause anymore harm to him.
Update soon! I'm liking this a lot.
Date: Oct 20, 2010 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
this story is really creative its not like any of the other stories! i love it!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I tried to make it different, although I'm warning you, there's not going to be much sex.XD I want this story to be more about healing the pain, and getting through it all.
Date: Oct 19, 2010 01:16 am Title: Chapter 7
No don't stop there! Is that the girl he wasn't supposed to talk to in the beginning?
Update soon!
Author's Response:
Heehee, I guess we'll find out...:) And I'm already typing the next chapter, hopefully it'll be up by tonight.
Date: Oct 18, 2010 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa! incredible story!
My eyes are literally WIDE open while reading!
Date: Oct 17, 2010 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow, this a really good story...sad but good please continue :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's kind of angsty, but the concept popped into my head, and I just had to use it. :) I'm glad you like it.
Date: Oct 17, 2010 03:15 am Title: Chapter 6
hey! I live in Virginia lol. but anyways, great story. its so sad.
Author's Response:
you do? Haha, that's funny! I mainly used it, because I wasn't exactly sure what other staes were part of colonial America.^^;
Date: Oct 17, 2010 12:12 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow this story is so heartbreaking. I was reading it on themjifc and absolutely enjoyed it. Keep going!!
Author's Response:
Heehee, you were? I'm glad that you're enjoying it:)
Date: Oct 16, 2010 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow.. these 6 chapters were intense as heck.
Please update soon! I'm really liking this.
Author's Response:
Thanks, and I was hoping they were! I'm glad that you like it:)