Date: Mar 28, 2011 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 47
Damn how could anybody do that to a child. That broke my heart.
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2011 01:44 am Title: Chapter 46
yay!! they are falling in love...but speak up people tell eachother is more than sex..
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2011 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 46
Michael and Valerie. I dunno.
Valerie is right not to commit any emotion to her relationship with Michael. And I think Michael's just getting caught up in the moment.
If Grace has a chance, I think she needs to get her grown woman on, and win Michael back. I mean...Michael's whipped. For sure. But while Val is in denial about her feelings for Michael, I think Grace might just have a chance to get her foot in the door before it closes.
But is Michael even worth the fight with his nasty, cheating a$$?
I mean girl you know I love me some Michael, but your Michael is a dog. And I don't see him changing no time soon.
He's just crying crocodile tears. And I wouldn't even trust his tail if I was Val. She better not get weak and show some love cuz as soon as she does, Michael will move on to someone else.
Now, that's just my opinion girl. So keep it coming.
Author's Response:
aaaww, so so rigoros with mj!!! you don't trust him, huh??? but look at his horny butt... no other gurls FOR WEEKS!!! has a ring to it! XD
once again... i know i'm repeating myself! LOL thank you so much for your detailed comments! i love you, gurl! xoxoxo
p. s. HEY! you did it! comment no. 200!!!! extra huge mjhugs for ya!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2011 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 46
Awwwwwwwwwww...come on!!! someone needs to speak up!!!
BTW I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE your story i am soo addicted to it...I am addicted to your story like Michael is addicted to sex in this story imagine that!! hahah.. You are a great writer and know how to keep on on the edge each time.. you even find me yelling at the compu!!
Author's Response:
oh god... you embarass me!!! thank you so much for you lovely comment! and let me know: what do you yell while reading??? LOL
Date: Mar 24, 2011 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 46
Awww that was messed up.
Date: Mar 24, 2011 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 46
Awwww... Val needs to stop doing that shit! The man is obviously in love with her and she keeps shutting it down. She knows she feels the same way. Take a. damn chance girl! She doesn't have anything to lose. Neither of them do.
Author's Response:
thank you gurl! love your comment as always! huge mj-hugs for sticking with me! ... maybe val just don't know about her chance... ?!?!
Date: Mar 24, 2011 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 46
Oh God,they love each other so much and yet,it's so hard to put it in words....they show their love in every way possible but they cannot talk about it.I hope this will change soon.This story is amazing,I cannot have enough of it!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for commenting! i'm really feel blessed you like my story! and i know you guys want to hear them say the 3 magic words... i guess it will take them some time though. ;-) nuff said! LOL
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2011 05:05 am Title: Chapter 44
Loved the update girl.
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2011 05:00 am Title: Chapter 45
I don't know if I feel sorry for Grace or not. She's acting kinda stupid. Like, if she wants him back, she needs to do more than act jealous. I mean, it seems like Michael's happy with things the way they are with Val and the baby. So I don't know why Grace is putting herself through all this pain tagging along with MJ, the kids, and his current lover. Michael clearly doesn't want Grace any more. She needs to either fight for her damn man or get over him already. And not be crying like some little b!tch.
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2011 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 45
lmao this was too funny lmao "Daddy’s gonna spoil your horny ass till you scream.” lmfao this was hella funny
Date: Mar 21, 2011 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 44
awww this is sooo sweet and loving :)
Date: Mar 21, 2011 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 44
The kids are warming up to her now?? Aw snap. I'm soo Team Val and Mike. I can't wait til she calls him Michael.
Date: Mar 21, 2011 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 45
Mike and Valerie are so cute. Grace is such a damn hater. Ugh. I'm so happy Mike takes care of Val and that he talked her into staying with him. I'm really liking them together. Can't wait to see them have some alone time. Grace needs to beat it!
Date: Mar 21, 2011 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 45
ahh..2 updates i feel like its my birthday!! i love that you kind of developed a special relationship with the bodyguards and the girls. Bill likes Grace and Garcia seems to like Val. Ooo Grace lol you thought you were irreplacable huh.....oh well.
Date: Mar 21, 2011 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1
With much pleasure :D
Don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter :P Hehehehe! Yeah, I know...I'm greedy :D