[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2011 02:34 am Title: Chapter 50
Ok first I love this story, you do a wonderful job! second I like him & val together I don't blame her for wanting to run away she sees the real michael & sometimes I feel like she knows him better then he knows himself & deep down Val knows that a relationship with him would never work because although Michael cares about Val & doesnt want her to go he is a very selfish person & It just won't work with Val if he doesn't change himself for the better, I think she has grown so much as a person for the better & Michael doesn't give her enough credit. Third I DO NOT like Grace for him I think shes great for his children but not for Michael I think they should stay friends I can't see them being in a successful relationship because she doesn't understand or accept Michael they way she should Although I don't blame her for it shes just not the right person for him. & last Plz update soon love your writing! (sorry I left such a long review but had to give my opinion haha L.O.V.E.)
Author's Response:
thank you so much for you lovely comment! it is more than welcome! i love reading all these reviews and feel very blessed when people like you take their time and make it long! XD thank you so much!!! xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Apr 11, 2011 01:29 am Title: Chapter 50
Oh Jeesh, this was so intense...poor Valerie, poor Mike...what will it become of them?
Author's Response:
all i can say is... it will be a long way...
once again "thank you" for reviewing! i'm really glad you keep hangin' with me! l.o.v.e. & xoxoxo
Date: Apr 10, 2011 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 50
These two need to get it together! I can totally understand Mike's frustration's though. Val could at least try to be a mother to this child, she won't even do that! She could be the mother to this baby that she never had! It frustrates me too, but Mike also needs to watch his temper. I hope they make up and fix this.
Author's Response:
thank you for still keepin' up with the story though i'm frustrating you, LOL! i guess you have to be patient with Val & Mike... ;-)
love you! xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2011 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 50
O_____________________O WOW never would i have expected this to happen!! EVER!! Damn this is amazing!!
@What do you yell while reading???
Ohh i yell many many things hahah xD
Some i cant say and other depends what is going on..With this chapter i was OMG OMG WOOOW!! And i got teary eyes when this was happening also this story messes with my emotions hehehe ;D
You are a great writer and I LOVE this story!!
Author's Response:
i can't believe to get someone teary with this story! i really feel blessed and humbled you responding to my story like that!!!! thank you so so much! love ya!
Date: Apr 10, 2011 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 50
Dang they're so scared of their feelings their hurting eachother and they don't even realize it.
Author's Response:
yeah... that's the major problem and they don't know how to fix this! thank you for commenting and keepin' up with me!!! xoxoxo
Date: Apr 07, 2011 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 49
let him and grace be togther please
Date: Apr 06, 2011 10:53 am Title: Chapter 49
Awwww they have such a cute relationship. And I'm happy she's going to NYC with him.
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2011 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 48
lmao ahahahaha can't wait for next chapter!
Date: Apr 04, 2011 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 48
Ohhh our Michael is getting jealous? maybe a little more possessive? I wonder how Val will react to that.......and can't wait for the moment she'll call him Michael....not Jackson and not daddy!!! He'll leave her back with Grace and the kids......hmmmm I don't like it!!!
Date: Apr 04, 2011 11:54 am Title: Chapter 48
Mike and Val are so cute. Awwww.. Mike is jealous, huh?? Don't want nobody messing with or getting too close to his Valerie. I can't wait until they can put into words what they KNOW is there. Grace is just torturing herself by still being there, it's pathetic. But oh well, no one cares. Team Val all the way.
Date: Apr 04, 2011 07:57 am Title: Chapter 48
Hahahaha...she gave Michael the finger :)) This girl is a show....love it!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2011 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 47
Wow!! she's been through a lot. I hope she realizes that her happiness is in Michael's love and that goes for Michael too.
Date: Mar 29, 2011 02:03 am Title: Chapter 47
WOW! This chapter really broke my heart. Valerie has been through so much. Even though I knew she had awful background I never imagined it was that bad. Poor girl! No wonder she ended up being such a mess...
Now Michael has to man up and be there for her. And they have to admit for once that they are in love with each other.
Date: Mar 28, 2011 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 47
Poor Val.. her and Michael are like kindred spirits. They need healing and love. I think they can get that in each other. I really hope she won't leave that baby behind though.. I soooo hope she has a change of heart. They really are good together.
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2011 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 47
Hells yeah! :)