[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2011 10:57 am Title: Chapter 55
awww...this was so sad...
Date: Apr 23, 2011 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 55
Awwww.... this is soooo sweet. I wish Val wasn't leaving after the baby is born.. sweet lil Blanket.
Author's Response:
thank you so much for commenting! love how you stick to the story!!! xoxoxo BOD
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2011 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 55
That was super sexy and sensitive girl. I loved this update. Girl, I know Valerie has to leave. But what's gonna happen to my Michael, sis? Valerie seems like the one for him and vice versa. It's kinda sad they have to part ways. Oh and bravo on fictionalizing the birth of Blanket. That's way cool girl. I do love this story dawn. Keep it coming.
Author's Response:
thank you so much! so glad you like it and still hang on with me! i know you're worried about mike... but hey, he's a though guy, isn't he??? ;-) so stay tuned to find out...
love ya, xoxoxo BOD
Date: Apr 22, 2011 10:38 am Title: Chapter 54
I think its fuckedup that MJ is finally putting an effort to save a relationship and its not even one cause they refuse to tell the other how they feel.
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2011 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 54
I'm glad Michael didn't do anything with Joanna. These 2 really need to tell eachother how they feel.
Date: Apr 19, 2011 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this story is hot! I'm speechless right now...looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2011 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 54
Smokin girl! But is Val just a little 'too' open? I still think she might leave Michael after the baby is born. I dunno. We'll see. I'm lovin it.
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2011 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 53
Girl, I'm glad Michael stayed strong and faithful. Wow! I'm happy he isn't the dog he once was. Valerie is like a miracle in his life. Cuz I thought zebras never changed their stripes.
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2011 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 52
Muy caliente chica!!
Date: Apr 19, 2011 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 54
Wow.. I'm so glad they made up! Even though he's still fighting with his emotions a bit, I think Mike is starting to realize he's in love with Val. I hope she'll realize that too and vice versa. And I must say, she is one cool ass confident chick. The kind that Michael needs. Team Val!
Date: Apr 18, 2011 12:07 am Title: Chapter 51
Girl, you know this is like one of ma favs. So where's the update sis? Got me all ready to see what's up with Michael and Val. And it's the same chapter as the last time girl. Chamone now! Dang!
Date: Apr 13, 2011 06:43 am Title: Chapter 51
Ok,Val is overreacting...she knows Michael is in love with her and if she wants to be honest with herself she'll realize she's in love too.They have issues with trusting people but they have to work on it.Maybe this fight is an opportunity for them to face and talk about these problems they have.I love this story so much,can't wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2011 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 51
LMAO gurl. This story's ma sh!t!
Date: Apr 12, 2011 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 51
Val needs to stop with the melodramatic shit! She loves him and he loves her. Get over it, grow up and fix this!
Date: Apr 12, 2011 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 51
Michael needs to go after her and bring her back to her sense. Great update!