[Report This]Date: May 05, 2011 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 58
My,my,my what a mess these three have made.
Date: May 02, 2011 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 57
OMG I bet you that was Grace that was peaking at them. At first I was on Grace side, bt i like Val now & Grace really needs to just move on. cant she see that Michael is more happier with Val then he was with her?? He dont take medication when Val is there, he doesnt sleep around with other women, he open up to her & tells her things im sure he hasnt told grace & he's falling in love with her and its nothimg Grace can do about it but accept it or get out of his life! I really think she should jus go on a vacation or something to clear out her mind because she isnt ready to work with him again & see him all over Val when it use to be her he did that too. Bt goodjob & I love this story & cant wait for the next chapter, hopefully it will be tomorrow :+ingers crossed* ;)
Date: May 02, 2011 10:30 am Title: Chapter 57
Val saves the day!!! I don't like what Grace does to Michael, he's self destructive with her. She needs to beat it. Dammit I want Val to stay with him or his ass needs to fire Grace.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2011 09:22 am Title: Chapter 57
Girl. Way to go on this Monday morning. What a nice way to start the day. I'm about to get my coffee now. And for real girl?
Grace was standing at the door watching Michael and Valerie f**k? Wtf?
Grace!! Michael doesn't want you girl. Give it a break. At first I thought Grace was about to rape him. LMAO. For real, I did. Then when Val came on the scene, I was like, Okay.
And sis your writing is improving immensely as this story progresses. I sometimes have to remind myself English is not your first language.
Great job on this story sis. I honestly look forward to reading it. Keep it coming dawn.
Date: May 02, 2011 08:12 am Title: Chapter 57
I'm sure it was Grace at the door....she took the kids back,although they were sleeping,to continue what she started at the party!!! She's so desperate,she annoys me,she knows he's in love with another woman but she's insisting.On the other hand,the relationship between Val and Michael,has him constantly on the edge,he's desperate that their time together soon will come to an end,so Grace's taking advantage of his insecurities.This looks like selfish to me,it doesn't sound like love,she isn't helping him,she's confusing him for her own purposes.I'm glad she found them together in bed,although this doesn't seem enough to stop her.Can't wait for the next chapter...I'm addicted to this story LOL!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2011 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 56
What did you do, Mike? And Grace needs to really move on!
Date: Apr 28, 2011 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 55
let grace michael be together. sad face.
Date: Apr 28, 2011 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 56
stop hating on grace she went thought alot that bicth got michael nobodys on grace side. michael and grace all day. but good story girl!!!!!
Date: Apr 27, 2011 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 56
Grace is desperate as hell. She can't force Michael to want her ass. I don't want him with her. I don't like Grace. She needs to fall back. Mike has Valerie embedded in him, even if he won't admit it out loud. Grace needs to get the hell on. He don't belong with her stale ass.
Date: Apr 27, 2011 08:57 am Title: Chapter 56
Oh....no...what was this???? Not with Grace again!!!!! He never felt with her the way he feels with Val.....please update soon!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2011 04:24 am Title: Chapter 56
WTF just happened? O____O ohhh hell naw..Pliz update soon! omg i i i OMGGGG
Date: Apr 27, 2011 04:13 am Title: Chapter 56
Oh God, it gets more painful with every chapter. Sometimes I get angry on Valerie for hurting Michael so much, other times I get upset on Michael for being selfish and weak, then I start feeling sorry for both of them and Grace too...
Anyway, this story is an emotional rollercoster and as I said before, I love it.
I hope you had a nice Easter! Kisses
Date: Apr 27, 2011 02:58 am Title: Chapter 56
uh ohh i feel some drama might be startiing i love this
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2011 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 13
“You really know how to work that thing.” Her finger traced slowly over his crotch.
lmfaooo that was so funny cause i just pictured it in my head i should have read this story WAY earlier but now i cant stop. Mj seems like an sex addict lol, greattt story
Author's Response:
hey, girl! welcome to my story and thanks for leaving me your comments! i really appreciate it and hope you stay tuned! xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2011 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
WOW!!! (Mouth dropped open)