Reviewer: belovd2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2011 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1

I too am torn like some of the other readers.  I'd love to see Grace and MJ back together since they have such history and love between them.  It would be nice to see Grace get a man (maybe Bill) and see some jealousy and true feelings rise up in Mike.  And on the other hand, it would be nice for Valerie to find some happiness too - but not necessarily in MJ - how about Garcia??? Decisions, decisions...

Reviewer: lulu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2011 06:51 am Title: Chapter 59

They both need time,their hearts're deeply wounded,they love each other but they need time to themselves.One complete the other,but they're too scared now to realize this.I hope they will some day and be together....can't wait to see what happens now!!!

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2011 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 59

Awwww I hope they can both get over there demons and see if they just might work out together. But they both need to heal and come to terms with their hearts and how they feel.

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2011 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 58

Dawn, Michael is a mess.   What's he so afraid of anyhow? 

I mean, He couldn't commit to Grace cuz obviously the poonanny wasn't that good.  Now he's got a hot youngun and he's afraid to commit to her.  I can understand Valerie's fear, but wtf is Michael's damn problem girl?  He's tripping.

Great update tho sis.  I almost feel sorry for Grace's poor, pitiful a$$. 

Cuz if I was her, girl you best believe I'd be getting my man back.  She should just slow her roll and wait until Val is out the picture, if she really wants MJ that bad. 

Clearly she can't win him over with her pu$$y power, so she should just wait it out.  And then act like a friend and sh!t when Val leaves.  Next thang you know, she'll get some of Michael's sweetsexystuff.  Guaranteed.  The man's gotta have it.

So until then, Grace sit ya old ass down.  Watch a porno or something and learn a few tricks so you can get ya man back girl.  LMAO.  For real tho.  She gotta put it on him like a pro when she gets the chance.  Let him know what he's missing.  She's acting too soft and weepy and sh!t.

Woman up Grace!  You can win girl.  Start doing you some kegel exercises girl.  And just wait ya turn.  Then put it on him like never before girl.  F*ck that man like never before.  LMAO.  For real.

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2011 09:20 am Title: Chapter 58

Fuck Jackson!! UGHHHHHH why the hell did he just freaking run away..Stupid stupid stupid.. NOW she is gonna let go of all her emotions and just push him away.. Now she is gonna completely shut everything out and not give a fuck about it.. she is just gonna fuck him cold without feelings and after just leave him with the kid...UGHHH STUPID!!! Anyways AMAZING chapter!! and STUPID Michael!!

Still mad GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2011 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 58

I know damn well he did not just do that. I really don't believe this shit. I read it 5 times and I was waiting for the words to change. WTF is going on I can't believe he finally had the chance to see if they would work out and this nigga runs. Awwweee mane smh I really don't believe this shit.

Reviewer: motownmjdevotee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2011 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 58

Girl, this update was da bomb.  I hope Michael doesn't mess up what he may be able to have with Valerie.  And poor Grace.  I feel sorry for her.  And I also feel kinda sorry for Michael and Valerie not having the courage to love one another fully; despite their problems.  Many people don't find real love in relationships.  And here they have a chance at love, but are too damaged emotionally to receive it.  Great job dawn.