Date: Jan 20, 2011 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 22
My goodness,i didn't see this coming....now this is a mess!!!! What Michael will do????? And his life.....he can't go on like this...for how long???? Val has a very bad influence on him.Can't wait to see what happens now....i'm so anxious!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'll try to keep updating as often as possible! Thank your for reviewing and reading! stay tuned! xoxoxo
Date: Jan 20, 2011 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 22
Wow she's pregnant!!! Am I surprised? NO!!!
They were high and careless!!! Now what Mikey?
Need an update, this is soooo good!
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 22
Oh Jesus, i knew something like this would happen... Damn i saw it coming.. I wonder whats gonna happen now? Damn these chapters are amazing sooo hooked on them.. they just get better and better.. but dang i wonder what Michael is gonna do now that she is preggo, i wonder what SHE is gonna DO..
Thank you for your frequent updates!!
Author's Response:
thank you for staying tuned! i really appreciate your reviews and the keep me going!
thank you so much! xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 22
Oh Jesus, i knew something like this would happen... Damn i saw it coming.. I wonder whats gonna happen now? Damn these chapters are amazing sooo hooked on them.. they just get better and better.. but dang i wonder what Michael is gonna do now that she is preggo, i wonder what SHE is gonna DO..
Thank you for your frequent updates!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 21
Loving it girl.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 20
Michael is such a dog. Girl. I'm glad valarie realizes she doesn't have the capacity to take Graces place. I hope Michael realizes this too with his f**ked up a$$. He's a mess girl. I dig ya story tho so ima keep reading. Keep it coming.
Date: Jan 20, 2011 10:37 am Title: Chapter 21
Awesome story.....he's so messed up,living on the edge.I'm anxious to see what it's gonna happen next.I love your writing very much!!!
Date: Jan 20, 2011 10:00 am Title: Chapter 21
Wow... Mike is a wreck it sounds like. But unfortunately, I think Grace needs to harden her heart and move on. He's no good for her.
Date: Jan 20, 2011 09:28 am Title: Chapter 21
Who's going to save Mike from himself, if Grace is going to build walls again?
This story gets better and better....
Date: Jan 19, 2011 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 20
I'm so intrigued to know what's gonna happen with these two.. Mike's head is still in the clouds it seems but I think there may be some real feelings developing there.. But Val doesn't seem too motherly. Idk, guess we'll see. But the sex between her and Mike is hot! lol
Date: Jan 19, 2011 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 20
Ooooh this is getting serious.....
I thought he would feel bad that Grace was gone. I guess not.
Keep it coming girlfriend.
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2011 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 19
Girl this Michael is a fool and a clown. A dirty, nasty boy who got what he had coming. How come he can't be faithful? Wasn't Grace giving into his sexual desires? I mean, How did he get to be such a bow wow. I mean, I read the whole story and I just don't get his nasty a$$. I still love him tho cuz that's my boo. But girl, Is this Michael ever gonna be sane? Cuz this boy is crazeeeeee. Loving this story girl. Keep it coming.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for keeping up reviewing! i'm really humbled, girl and so happy you love the story! Yes, Mike is crazy... but hey, his life never has been easy. Sometimes you have to see beyond the acting to get what is driving him to behave like he does.
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2011 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 18
Dang girl. Michael's clowning. LOL. So much drama for this dirty, nasty boy. He's lucky all Grace did was smack and spit on his a$$. Then he had the nerve to throw a chair at her? Boy, you lucky that wasn't me. Cuz I woulda gone Loraina Bobbit on yo a$$. Or waited till yo a$$ passed out and gave ya an Al Green special; extra hot and buttery. Girl, this Michael is a mess. And I'm loving it.
Date: Jan 19, 2011 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 19
Wow... so now Val is like some type of security blanket for him, huh? This is gettin real interesting. Poor Mike.
Date: Jan 19, 2011 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 19
HMMMM.....How will he feel when he wakes up later in the morning in Valerie's bed. Any regrets? Will he miss Grace? The kids will.
Now what???