keep up the amazing work!!!!

Girl this story is getting more interesting by the update.  This portion of your story really helped me to understand and empathize with Michael and Val a bit more.  It also clarified in my mind, what actually makes this story good. 

At first I just thought, ugh, Michael's such a dog and Val's such a hoe and poor Grace.  But now that you've weaved Diana Ross into the tale, I find this Michael character more believable and lovable. 

As far as Val, I even like her.  It's like she realizes that she hasn't a snowballs chance in hell of actually having a long-term relationship with Jackson. (Or does she?)  For such a young girl, I like the fact that she is well aware of what she wants (Michael's sexy body) and what she doesn't want (to be a mother and a wife).

And clearly, this update showed that both characters want freedom from whatever ails them.  They are both just enjoying the moment of experiencing their sexuality together with no strings attached.  That's freedom to them it seems.  And I like that.

I also like the fact that even tho Val is much younger than MJ she is able to see clearly her role in his life and vice versa.  You've created a really strong female lead with Val.  And I really like strong female characters.

Thus, I'm hoping you can really build up the tension between the two females vying for Michael's heart, Val and Grace.  I actually am starting to like Val.  As a reader, I'd like you to reveal why Grace should be with Michael instead of Val.  And I'd like to see Val become more interested in Michael than just his sexiness. 

I truly doubt that Val will just give MJ the baby and leave.  How could she?  I really hope MJ and Val get more emotionally connected to each other.  And that this causes conflict with Grace who realizes she can't live without MJ. 

Any way dawn, you got a good story brewing here.  And I'm really interested to see how thing'll turn out. 

Keep it coming sis. 

this was a good chapter. I have a feeling that Valerie might fall in love with Michael later, am I right?

Yeah Val and Mike are definitely getting closer.. Grace should just try and move on with her life. I know she and Mike miss each other but I must admit, it's good seeing him happy with Val. And they're trying to get along and seems like get to know each other for the baby as well. Grace is gonna be devastated when he finds out he got Val pregnant.

Wonder what Katherine said to Michael that made him so pissed. 

Val being pregnant has changed Michael, could he be falling in love with her.   His "love" for Grace is a thing of the past.

Need more, I'm addicted!!!!

I'm so curious about where this story is heading.

And by the way, you keep us going too *hugs*

omg please don't let val leave MJ make them fal inlove please please please make them raise the baby together :) they seem like they're already falling in love :)