Date: Feb 16, 2011 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 31
Mike and Val should really think about a relationship. And it seems that Katherine likes her.. More than Grace too. I just wonder when Grace will find out that Val is having Mike's baby.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2011 11:19 am Title: Chapter 31
Loved the update dawn. Poor, heartbroken Grace. I don't know why she can't just let Michael go. He's no good for her, it seems. Valerie seems more suited for him, but she's afraid of letting her guard down. I predict the gathering at Hayvenhurst is going to be drama-filled with Grace coming back to claim her man and Valerie refusing to give him up. I know she's going to be really shocked about MJ having a baby on the way. I'm loving this dramatic story girl. Keep it coming.
Date: Feb 15, 2011 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 30
awww dang...this was a cool chapter! Keep on...;)
Date: Feb 12, 2011 06:40 am Title: Chapter 30
Breathtaking chapter,they slowly fall in love to each other,can't wait to see where this journey will take them from here.Your description of their emotions is amazing!!!!
Date: Feb 12, 2011 02:50 am Title: Chapter 30
Yeah.. I'm definitely warming up to Mike and Val being a couple.. They could really be good for each other. Val is in love with him and afraid of that.. and I think Mike is the same way.
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2011 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 30
woohooo love this :)
Date: Feb 11, 2011 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 30
I think that Valerie could be the best thing that has ever happened to Michael. Maybe she could help him give in to a woman with out pushing them away. And Michael will be amazing to Valerie, he could show the love she has never known. I really like this chapter.
Date: Feb 08, 2011 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very good story! I'm so torn...on one hand I want Grace and MJ to get back together because the true love and family is there but on the other hand, I like the chemistry between him and Val - although that sometimes doesn't last the test of time though. And would he be able to be faithful to Grace this time around if they did get back together??? Hmmm...looking forward to reading more!
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2011 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 29
please keep Val and MJ together they belong together and they understand eachother so much...plus the child is another resone :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2011 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 29
Awww the ending is so sweet :) “An extra big bucket for my gurl…” lmao I loved this one I can't wait for chapter 30! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2011 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 28
woohoo I love this keep em commin :)
Date: Feb 07, 2011 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 29
I have to admit.. Val and Mike are growing on me. I know he misses Grace and hates what happened, but everything does happen for a reason and.. Val is gonna be the mother of his child. Maybe they should give the relationship thing a shot.. Maybe.
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2011 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 29
An extra big bucket...LOL girl. I know Michael's grateful for Val causing a steamy break from his meeting. Hot update dawn. One minute Michael's longing for Grace. The next minute he's having phone sex with his baby momma. Nice tension sis. This story keeps getting better. I know it's building to some major drama. And I'm looking forward to it girl. Keep it coming.
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2011 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 28
Thanks for helping me understand what motivates Michael a bit more dawn. You did a great job here of describing why Michael loves Grace. And doing so helped build the conflict a bit more as well as gave me some empathy for Michael's doggish a$$.
Date: Feb 07, 2011 06:06 am Title: Chapter 28
Oh how sweet! He still loved Grace dearly. I hope everything will work up for them.