Date: Feb 18, 2011 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story and I absolutely love Michael and Val's chemistry! They seem to fit together well.
Date: Feb 18, 2011 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 33
Loving it girl. Short is better than nothing. This is one of my favs, so thanks for staying consistent. Keep it coming dawn.
Date: Feb 18, 2011 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 33
Go Mike and Val! They owe it to themselves to explore what's there. And I think something is there. Seems like they accept each other and can be themselves around each other.
Date: Feb 18, 2011 10:59 am Title: Chapter 33
Wonderful chapter!!! Val is indeed some kind of therapy for him....he's relaxed and free around her,she doesn't make him feel guilty,she doesn't have any expectations from him....they just enjoy each other.Can't wait for your next update!!
Date: Feb 18, 2011 02:20 am Title: Chapter 32
your welcome you deserve it this is a great story and your a great writer,I love this story,I think that Val is falling for him,which is sad cause he loves grace,I fell sorry for grace too,I wonder if Val will really leave her baby behind when it's born?,can't wait for more :)
Date: Feb 17, 2011 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 32
Love you more! lols thanks for righting this story :) I love it :)
Date: Feb 17, 2011 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 31
omg woohooo I love it :) yay! I hope they stay together Val and MJ need eachother :)
Date: Feb 17, 2011 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 32
Girl, thanks for the unexpected update. This update was short but was super sexy sis. I'm loving Michael and Valerie. Keep it coming girl. L.O.V.E. you more!!
Date: Feb 17, 2011 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 32
Val needs to stop fighting her feelings and so does Mike. I see more than sex between them and I think she's gonna get attached to that baby. I'm rooting for them to make it official. And I hope Val will help raise the baby too.
Date: Feb 17, 2011 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 32
OMG I'm so addicted to this story!!!! I check everyday for a new update!!! I love how they're slowly falling for each other,their connection,their steamy love making,how sweet,loving and caring Michael is with Val,how they begun to break their rules...can't wait for Val to finally call him Michael instead of Jackson!!!! I'm waiting to see what happens next!!!
Author's Response:
awww, thank you so much, gurl! believe me, it's hard for me to keep her mouth shut ;-) LOL... you know what it would mean saying his name...
xoxoxo
Date: Feb 17, 2011 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 32
i really love this story. so deep and realistic. it's one of my favourites
Date: Feb 17, 2011 01:25 am Title: Chapter 31
This was so sweet. I am really in love with ur story dear. Keep it coming :D
Date: Feb 17, 2011 12:23 am Title: Chapter 31
I love this story,your a great writer :),can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
thank you so much! can't believe you think i'm a great writer... sometimes i really get into trouble with grammar. but i'm really really glad you like it!
xoxoxo
Date: Feb 16, 2011 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 31
Your story is getting really good. So Val is falling in love and Michael is sending gifts to Grace. Michael, when are you going to learn?
Date: Feb 16, 2011 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
My heart still breaks for Grace. It's good that she's staying away...
Can't imagine what will happen when she finds out about the baby.