Date: Feb 24, 2011 01:51 am Title: Chapter 35
Awwww...the care Valerie has for Michael is so sweet. And calling him baby...:) I am starting to like Val very much.
Date: Feb 23, 2011 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 35
Grace got out of her bed to do something for MJ...WOW! She is really going to flip out to find out about Valerie and the baby. Good story.
Date: Feb 23, 2011 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 35
Awwww.. She wants to take care of him. I'm really rooting for Mike and Val.
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2011 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 35
oh poor Michael,I wonder wat will happen when he see's grace again will she give him another chance but what about Val can't wait till next update :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2011 07:59 am Title: Chapter 35
wow. i love the way you write so much . . . the intensity, the detail. it's fantastic
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awww... thank you so much! can't believe you think so... i really feel honored... xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2011 07:59 am Title: Chapter 35
wow. i love the way you write so much . . . the intensity, the detail. it's fantastic
Date: Feb 23, 2011 05:53 am Title: Chapter 35
Things are getting serious...I wonder when they'll admit themselves their feelings for each other...can't wait to see how Michael'll react when he gets better and realizes Val have been by his side all the time.I'm curious how it'll be with Grace....update soon please,can hardly wait!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2011 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 34
Yay! lols I love this! and I love serious! lols keep 'em come'in can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: Feb 21, 2011 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 34
This story is getting even better with every chapter!!! I love how their feelings are growing and Michael looks so much better,more calm,more at ease with Val...maybe cause she doesn't want anything from him,she doesn't make him feel guilty.Can't wait for your next update!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2011 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 34
For some reason I'm very happy they are falling in love, they are a good cure to their bad ways.
Date: Feb 21, 2011 11:15 am Title: Chapter 34
i'm not always able to access a computer, so most of the time i'm reading mobile. so usually i rarely get a chance to leave you feed back....but i want you to know...that i...LOVE...your work! i love valarie and michael! i love how he's so edgy around her, and i ESPECIALLY love how he's transforming and their relationship is going to the next level and she's starting to act more mature! i love how michael is finally showing val how a woman should be treated, i hope that michael can break through that wall val has put up...gosh i love this story...and you update so quick and often :D
Date: Feb 21, 2011 10:55 am Title: Chapter 34
Emotions are definitely changing! Can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2011 08:23 am Title: Chapter 34
Girl, ain't nothing wrong with the dirty stuff. LOL. I loved the update. Michael and Valerie rock sis. I can't wait for some drama to jump off with Grace though. Ooo. So chamone with yo chamone dawn. I'll be waiting.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2011 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 33
"she's like therapy for me" that's my favorite line in this chapter. When are they going to start to tell eachother how they feel?
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2011 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 33
Yay! but I hope tthey get serious :)