Date: Mar 04, 2011 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 38
Am I imagining it....Are they both realizing how much they meant to each other and don't want to be apart? Especially after the baby is born just as they used to plan before....? They are both falling in love an still scared out of their wits......
But they are really connected ...as Mj thought....Val can reach and read his deepest soul always.....I think VAL is the one for him.......and Mj really understand Val's fears and where she's coming from......oh this two really needs each other........they deserve to be happy together......
BTW, like Mike I was really really touched of Val's gift to MJ....What kind of girl ever think of giving him that......No ONE...that's right......and it touches his heart and soul as well.....
thanks for a very sweet chapter in their life....
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2011 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 35
I really hate Val with passion. sorry for val and mike lovers. Who can forget about Grace. Mike is this story kind of remindes me of Charlie Sheen.
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2011 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 38
awwww this was soooo passionate I love this! please make the next part soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
i'm working on it, gurl! ;-)
Date: Mar 04, 2011 03:08 am Title: Chapter 37
wow great update hun I loved it ,Hmmmmm...... wonder what it is he is going to say to her is he going to let her go and go back Grace ,I guess time will tell can't wait for more I love this story :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2011 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 37
oh snap! I'm lovin this! keep em commin hun! :)
Date: Mar 03, 2011 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 37
I wish they would let their pasts go and start fresh together. Its obvious their are some deep feelings emerging and they're afraid and don't know how to go about it. They could really be good for.each other.
Date: Mar 03, 2011 10:54 am Title: Chapter 37
Oh God,their emotions are going deeper and deeper by the day....they're already in love but they're too scared to admit it!!!! Geez,I want so bad for them to stay together..they're so good one for the other!!! I'm anxiously waiting for more!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2011 09:18 am Title: Chapter 37
OMG! This was good!! I really liked this chapter. :)
Author's Response:
thank you , gurl! ;-)
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2011 01:19 am Title: Chapter 36
I love this story ,poor Val I feel sorry for her,can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2011 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 35
Dawn girl, you did it again.
I loved how you used Michael's episode with lupus to build up the tension for Grace and Valerie to have a showdown. Soon I hope.
I know Grace is all worried about MJ and PP&B. I can't wait to see how Grace is gonna react when she finds out everything.
And girl, Valerie gets major kudos for comforting Michael while he's suffering. That's my girl. But you can't turn a ho3 into a housewife, so I'm hoping she don't end up hurting my baby.
Regardless tho, I like Val and hope Michael don't end up dissing Valerie for Grace in the long run. Cuz I haven't forgot Michael's a dog in this story girl.
Good job sis. Keep it coming.
Author's Response:
hey gurl, i truly love your comments! send you tons of mj hugs! keep reading gurl... you can't imagine how hard i'm fighting with mike and val! they always drag me in another direction than i intended... LOL
Date: Feb 28, 2011 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel like I'm the only one rooting for Grace and Michael, lol.
He and Val are getting closer though, so I wonder what will happen when Grace comes back around.
Date: Feb 28, 2011 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 36
Oh WOW,things are getting definately serious for both of them.They have feelings and they have to face them....pretending they're indifferent doesn't make them go away!!!!Can't wait to see when Val is coming back from rehearsals and see the flowers and the dinner.I'm sooooo addicted to this story!!!
Date: Feb 28, 2011 11:12 am Title: Chapter 36
Yeah he needs to make it up to her. Val really wants to be there for him. She cares for him a lot. And I don't want her to leave the baby when she has it!
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2011 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 35
I love it. I hope Val can make Mj feel better :) thaks keep up the good work i'm dying to read the next chapter :)
Date: Feb 24, 2011 08:30 am Title: Chapter 35
OMG I hope he gets better soon....cancelling the shows hmm not good either.
I have this weird feeling abt Grace and Val rite now but I'm just gunna wait and see LOL...
Author's Response:
tell me bout that feeling towards Grace and Val... that sounds interessting. thanks for reading and reviewing, gurl!