Date: Mar 14, 2011 06:09 am Title: Chapter 41
Oh God, I can't even begin to imagine how being dumped by Michael must feel. I felt so sorry for Grace in this chapter, even though she is not my favorite person in the world :P
Anyway, keep them coming, I am in love with ur story :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2011 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 41
I loved it! can't wait for the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2011 01:17 am Title: Chapter 41
I might as well comment here too I love it girl getting good and intense can't wait for more :) you rock
Author's Response:
thank you, hun! love you take your time! happy you like it! xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2011 12:31 am Title: Chapter 41
It's time to move on, Grace. As sad as that may seem.
Like I said before Valerie and Michael are good for eachother they just don't know it yet. They are going to teach each other things and maybe to let go of their wounds.
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2011 12:29 am Title: Chapter 41
Bravo dawn. I loved this update. Very dramatic and well written sis. You portrayed the characters vividly.
I'm glad Grace showed poise and maturity when meeting with Michael for the first time since the pool incident. It was also good to hear Michael express and show his happiness with Valerie.
You've created a tense situation with this story. And since you've painted both women in a way that makes me want them both to have a chance to be with Michael--I really dont know who he should be with.
In the long run, I think Grace is the best choice for Michael. But for the short term, I think Michael needs rejuvenation and Grace can't provide that for him. Grace confines Michael, it seems; while Valerie sets him free.
Yet Valerie still is what she is. Right? So who do I route for? The hoe or the housewife? LOL. I dunno. Valerie or Grace?
Keep the tension coming girl.
Author's Response:
thank you motown! i really appreciate how you always take your time to review and reflect on the situation... big mjhug for you, gurl!!! xoxoxo
Date: Mar 11, 2011 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was waiting for this day to come. It's not what I was hoping, but if Michael is happy, it's ok.
Poor Grace, I guess it's time to move on
Date: Mar 11, 2011 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 41
It's good he talked to Grace and made things clear....now he has to search deep down his heart to see what he feels for Val....and of course Val has to do the same.So amazing story,,,,can't wait for your next update
Date: Mar 11, 2011 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 41
Well that didn't go so bad.. Grace doesn't know shit about Val so she can keep her mouth shut on that. I'm happy Mike took up for her too. And yes, Mike and Val make a great pair. Peace out Grace! Go Mike and Val!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2011 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 41
I love Michael & Val more then Michael & grace lol & I'm so happy Val is having Michael's baby! I wish Michael would realize that his in love with Val before its too late! Great job
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2011 02:09 am Title: Chapter 40
Oh Gosh I am crying here I really like Val I feel so sorry for her ,she does need a break fron it all ,I wonder what Michael will do with val not probably run to Grace ,I hope he realizes what he has in Val and doesn't make a mistake and lose her can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2011 01:26 am Title: Chapter 40
I'm growing in to Val, Michael is going to end up hurting her as well. What a mess!
Date: Mar 10, 2011 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 39
hope they get back together
Date: Mar 10, 2011 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 38
i
think
the baby need to die
Author's Response:
you really mean that? you want val to lose mike's baby? ... wow, that's though, wasn't prepared for a comment like this to be honest.
Date: Mar 10, 2011 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 40
Maybe Grace will see that he has real.feelings for Val and will leave him be. She aint the woman for him, Val is! Team Val!
Date: Mar 10, 2011 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 40
Valerie is so good for Michael,she doesn't make him feel guilty,he can be himself with her....they're soulmates.I hope they can make it together and nothing ruins their bond....I'm in love with this couple....can't wait to see how his meeting with Grace is gonna be!!!!