[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2011 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 43
woohooo! you go gurl! this was hot! I was like oh hells yeah a 3way and then i kept reading andwas like awwww. then i was like atleast it was still sexy lmao! I loved it!
Date: Mar 18, 2011 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 43
Yes, Mike definitely has met his match in Val!!! She can handle whatever he throws at her and then some.. I love these two. With their freaky asses. LOL
Date: Mar 18, 2011 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 43
Hot! damn when i first started reading i was so hoping for Mike and Grace to work out. but I seem to fall more in love with Val each chapter. Great writing BOD...
Date: Mar 18, 2011 09:07 am Title: Chapter 43
Excellent...can't wait to see where this's going with Joanna.Michael feels free and happy with Val and their bond is obvious....can't wait for more!!!!
Date: Mar 18, 2011 06:09 am Title: Chapter 43
Uuuhhhuuuu! This was H O T!!!
Author's Response:
thaaaank you! l.o.v.e.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2011 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 42
awsome I can't wait for the next capter i wanna knoe what happens next... omg i can't wait lolz.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2011 09:52 am Title: Chapter 42
Michael's a trip girl.
I bet Grace does wish Michael would dump Valerie, but it sure doesn't look that way.
I don't get Grace even going back to be Michael's nanny. I can understand her love for the kids, but how will she handle Michael and Valerie f**king all day? And what about when Baby Jackson arrives?
I think Grace should turn the job down and just set up a visiting schedule with the children. I know I couldn't stand being around my ex and his new girl. Nope.
Great job with this story girl. Keep em coming.
Author's Response:
but he needs a nanny when baby jackson arrives, doesn't he? ;-)
Date: Mar 15, 2011 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
poor grace. she handled that a lot better than me or my friends would have. from where I come from that ppl scene would have ended way differently And grace a sister too. oh hell no. but she acted just like her name. gracefully. I know this is fiction but in real life what goes around comes around and you expect happiness from hurting someone else.
Author's Response:
well, grace loves him more than life... and she sticks with him, even if she gets hurt! thanks for reviewing and reading, gurl! xoxoxo
Date: Mar 15, 2011 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 42
Grace is such a hater! Ugh. I'm glad Mike ain't with her no more. Ol bitter ass. He has Val now. Just look how possessive he is over her. Even his bodyguards see how close they're getting. Those two are made for each other. Everybody else can back up, it's all about Mike and Val!
Date: Mar 15, 2011 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 42
damn....that chick joanna about to ruin everything. i just know michael is going to fuck with his horny butt. lol first time leaving a review here and i love this story girl.
Date: Mar 15, 2011 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 42
Oh oh Joanna????? I don't like it at all!!!!! I hope Grace isn't right and the end of the night wont find him with Joanna.....it'll hurt Valerie cause she's having feelings for him.Can't wait for your update!!!
Date: Mar 15, 2011 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 17
omg !!!!!!!!
Date: Mar 14, 2011 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
omg
Date: Mar 14, 2011 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
bravo
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2011 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
i am on the edge of my seat now