[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2012 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael talks so gangster. I wonder what michael's parents do if they found that hes a gangster
Author's Response:
Hmm, I wonder too what Michaela's parents would do. Would they accept him? I hope so! Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2012 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 43
That was...made me cry...I have no words, it was so emotional...But we need a happy chapter now, please make a happy chapter all this pain was just...overwhelming!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry it made you cry. :( But I'm glad I was able to extract such strong emotions from you. Don't worry, I don't think we could take anymore sadness after that. :P Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2012 10:11 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww michael is such an gentleman and caring,sweet and nice. I love ur story and its beautiful and neatly written
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! That really puts a smile on my face when I read that. Thank you! And yeaah, Michael's a little sweetiepie though he tries to hide it. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2012 09:46 am Title: Chapter 2
Michael is funny. Aww michael and michaela met i wonder if they are in love. Beautiful story by the way :D
Author's Response:
Hehehe, yeaah Michael is a trip! I wonder if they're in love too, hmm. What do you think? Thanks for your kind words! Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2012 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1
I just started readin' ur story and i enjoyed already. Checkers is a weird name for a black man lol but hey they all have unique nicknames in the hood lol no offense its my opinion. XD
Author's Response:
Lool, I respect your opinion. :P But Checkers has a reason why that's his nickname. :) Thank you for reading my story, I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Jul 25, 2012 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 43
I cried!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry! I don't want to say that I don't want you to cry, because I'm happy that my writing gets across to you so strongly. Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Jul 25, 2012 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 42
I love Checkers <3
Author's Response:
We all do hehehe. :$ Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2012 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 43
Wow!! When Joseph walked in I thought trouble was going to start. Then we he told Michael good job I was like Joe isn't as bad as we all thought but once him and Mike started talkin and all the stuff he was saying about Mickey and when he hit Michael my feelings totally changed. Now I think I understand Michael's dream and in the beginning of the last chapter. This Lawrence character is disgusting. So it Joe for letting all of this happen. I mean who sits their and watches their own son get molested.? Saying stop isn't enough. I was shocked at this chapter. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Yes, Joseph's 'nice' side at first was a little suspicious to all of them. But yeaah when he hit Michael, that was not cool! It was really upsetting and yes, the dream in the beginning of the last chapter was one of Michael's past memories of his molestations. :( Yeah, Lawrence is disgusting! A sorry excuse for a family member or human being for that matter, I agree so is Joe. You don't watch that happen to your child. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2012 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 43
OhmyGosh.. This chapter.. Made me cry, smile, laugh, feel warm inside. Omg. It's indescribable, I mean wow. <3
I should slap Joseph upside his head, what a fucking UGH. I dislike him strongly..
But besides that, the rest of the Jackson family was so sweet to Michaela especially Katherine that made my heart skip beats. What a true bond. <3
Great chapter :')
xoxo
Author's Response:
Gosh, thank you! I'm so glad I could get those feelings out of you, it means so much to me! Yes, Joseph doesn't have the biggest fanclub, not that he deserves one. Him and Lawrence are the only members. Yeah, the Jackson family was real nice and warm the way they accpeted her so easily. Katherine was adorable, OMJ! Thank you for your kinds words. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2012 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 43
Wow just wow. What a great chapter
Author's Response:
Wow just wow. What a great person for reviewing. XD Thank you so much for your words. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2012 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 43
Aaww, I loved that chapter. My heart broke for Michael towards the end. Great chapter doll. Update soon. Lots of love.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Your words really get to me in the best way, goodness. I know, poor Michael I felt my heart breaking into two. :'( Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Jul 25, 2012 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 43
Omg. That was so heartbreaking. I'm in tires. I can't belive Joesph would do something that damn evil. That was just disgustin he is going straight to hell right along his brother. Smh. I hope Mickey can heal Mike of his pain. Great job.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you're in tears! But thank you for responding to my story so well. :) I know, I hope Michaela can get through to him and make him feel better. Fingers crossed! Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Jul 25, 2012 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 43
Omg guh I love this chapter and its long haha thank gurl I love long chapters, and dang I feel for ya Mikey cuz (excuse my language) DATZZ SUM FUCKED UP SHIT !!!!! Joe is so WRONG, like 4real some is wrong wit dat dude...smfh ! Dat aint really happen right?
Author's Response:
Hehehe, I like long chapters too, I'm going to aim to write them as long as possible without filling them with nonsense and irrelevant things. And yes, in those exact words, THAT IS SOME FUCKED UP SHIT! Joseph shouldn't even consider himself a father with the way he allowed that. And no, to the best of my knowledge that didn't actually happen to Michael in real life. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2012 11:14 am Title: Chapter 42
LOOOL omg Checkers and Michael have too much swag. They were singing Mercy, I love that song. <3
I hope everything goes well with Michaela meeting the Jackson family.. especially Joseph.
Another good chapter!
(: <3
Author's Response:
Loool, yeaah they are pretty swagged out, huh? And let's all pray for the best!! Thanks for the review ! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2012 05:59 am Title: Chapter 42
Joseph is goin to start trouble. Everybody is going to welcome Mickey but Joe is going to start trouble. Knowing Joe he'll probably saw something about her being white.
Author's Response:
Hahaha, everyone always assumes the worst of Joe. But I guess he's earned it, huh? I hope he doesn't cause too much trouble for them. Fingers crossed! Thanks for the review ! :D <3