Date: Aug 15, 2012 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 45
I feel so bad for Michael, I mean he was so young and to get himself wrapped up in that. It would have been funny if Michaela would have said something to the little bitch while she was standing there. Michael, man, just tell her you love her. It is quite obvious. Michaela, just give it up already. You want him to fuck you just as much as he does. Great chapter doll. Update soon. Lots of love.
Author's Response:
I know, poor Mike's been on the wrong path for so long now. And lmmfaoo wouldn't it have? I'm sure we'd all like to see Michaela get into a good fight! Yes, they both should just give in! Michael should just say it and Michaela should just do it! Loool. Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Aug 15, 2012 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 45
First off don't even trip about taking a while to update, though I adore this story you still have a life and other commitments so i'm not going to go crazy on you for taking a bit or anything so don't even worry about it love bug:)! I just love that you even write this story because its amazing & also you're a really nice person! I remeber i posted "please update" in the pervious chapter and you said how that pushes you to update and stuff, thats rly swee because all i said was two words hah so im happy they motiviated you in some way. :D Onto this chapter:) lordy lord these are my fave chapters like ive said before. I love chapters were its just them devoted to each other and just messing around and stuff. Throwing checkers into the mix was a good new idea because he hasnt rly hung out with just them in a while. I rly like the little q&a they had in his room because its always nice when michael breaks his barriers just for a moment and rly talks to mickey and lets her know the real him because its sad that hes always has a sheild around him. I wish he wouldve also asked her questions because it was kind of one sided just getting to know him. Ya know? But its cool im sure in more chapters we'll learn more about mickey and such so no big deal. Haha i noticed to that she does that often, after moments of like intense kissing and stuff she seems to get awkward and more reserved. I can see why though since her body feelings and mine feelings are conflicting because god knows she wants to get it on with michael but she doesn't see it as the logical thing to do at the moment ya know? Hah I like how they were doing that salt ice challenge that thing is soo funny, ive seen a lot of youtube videos on ppl doing it and god does it look painful ha i could only imagine the laughter mickey was getting out of watching that haha. Them playing basketball was also cute haha this story is just stupid cute. Honestly half the time when i read stuff im like smiling or laughing or like "awww" haha but dang nicole let michael have it kicking him dead in his manhood haha & im rly interested to know what mickeys going to do for michaels birthday:) i cnt wait for more idc if you had writers block u did an outstanding job on this chapter! Don't doubt yourself, ur an excellent writer.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all of your beautiful words and reviews. They really mean so much to me, thank you for your compliments. And hahaha, yeaah that salt and ice challenge is something else. I had my brother do it and he threw the ice to the ground and screamed, hehehe. Yeah, them playing basketball I guess it gave Mickey a chance to see Michael doing what he normally would and all of them just having fun. Oh Lord, Nicole...Michael, Michael, Michael, tsk, tsk, tsk...loool. I'm also interested to see what she's planning for Michael's birthday, though I have an idea I don't have my mind set yet. I guess we'll see when the time comes! Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Aug 15, 2012 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 45
Damn smh Mike is something else. The story about the girls was sad.
Author's Response:
I know, I guess we understand why he's so screwed up. I feel terrible for those poor little girls. Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Aug 15, 2012 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 45
Mwahaha first review again! Thanks for the update sweety
Author's Response:
Hahahaha, thanks girly!! :D <33
Date: Aug 09, 2012 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 44
Im glad that michael and michaela can't stay mad at each other long. When is he gonna admit that he's loves her? Yay im finally caught up on ur story and i can't wait for the next update. Continue? :) well i enjoy ur story and like i said before ur story is da bomb. I continue to encourage u and support u. :D
Author's Response:
I know, when is he going to say it? Hopefully it doesn't take him too long! And yaaay! You're caught up! XD Thank you so much for your support, encouragement and kind words. They truly touch my heart. Next chapter is soon! Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Aug 09, 2012 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 44
Pleaseee update!
Author's Response:
Awww, baby! Don't worry, it's coming soon! But thank you for these few words, they truly mean a lot and truthfully, they pushed me to write the next chapter. Thank you for this! <33
Date: Aug 09, 2012 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 43
What the hell that's so shocking and disgusting that his uncle lawrence do that to him. His uncle is sick. Joseph is fucking stupid for letting his brother do that to his son let alone any child he did to he shouldn't do that to any child. That sick bastard needs help.
Author's Response:
I totally agree with everything you've said. Joseph is a sorry excuse for a father and poor Michael had to endure that for so long. Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Aug 09, 2012 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 42
Haha that's funny that michaela told checkers off. Im anxious to see what happens next.
Date: Aug 09, 2012 06:06 am Title: Chapter 41
Im so glad checkers and michael shooks hands and i been friends again. :D michael and michaela are an cute couple
Date: Aug 09, 2012 05:34 am Title: Chapter 40
Michael is somethin else i bet one day he gonna confessed his love and make love to her.
Date: Aug 09, 2012 05:00 am Title: Chapter 39
Im so damn relieved that she believe him. Im so happy :D
Date: Aug 09, 2012 04:39 am Title: Chapter 38
Aww poor mikey and michaela broke up. Good thing he didn't sleep with that hoe talia. Im so pissed off at her for breaking them up. Im so relieved that michael stopped when michaela walked before he cheated. Taila retarted as hell. Michael ain't retarted she is. Im sorry about the last review i thought he gonna cheat but he didn't. Whew lol im sad now for michaela and michael :(
Date: Aug 09, 2012 04:16 am Title: Chapter 37
Is michael retarted? Michael pushed that bitch off and run like hell. Ugh dammit he needs to push her off before he cheats lol he is stubborn ass
Date: Aug 09, 2012 03:52 am Title: Chapter 36
Michael is so damn stubborn headed. Can't he see that michaela is trying to help him instead he's he blinded by rage. Poor michaela he made her cry and that's fucking wrong for him to do.
Date: Aug 09, 2012 03:05 am Title: Chapter 35
Noooo oh shit michael. I didn't see that coming. I hope he's okay. Poor mikey