Date: Oct 13, 2012 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hope you update soon :)Miss this story
Author's Response:
The update is here! Sorry for keeping you waiting babe. Thanks for this! :) <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2012 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 49
Awww I just love them! Best couple ever! *Sigh* I'm in love with this story. I just hope nothing happens to Michael.
Keep up the great work! Love you! <3
~Maary
Author's Response:
Hahaha, thank you so much baby! Hopefully Michael stays safe and takes Michaela's advice into consideration. I love you too! So much. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2012 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 49
Awww I just love them! Best couple ever! *Sigh* I'm in love with this story. I just hope nothing happens to Michael.
Keep up the great work! Love you! <3
~Maary
Author's Response:
I love you! Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2012 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 49
Heyyyy time doe me ro review!
Haha lovely chapter my dear:)! I really love that michaels getting comfortable with saying he loves her. Its reallyyyy cute:)! Hahah now they can be all vuglar with each other and do something to fix it if you know what I mean ;) haha it sucks that michael & checkers were doing drugs and stuff :/ they got in a fight after to and mickey called while he was about to fight and stuff :( its always sad when they return back to the fight of michael getting out of the business of hustling he really needs to because its not safe and it'll never be safe and he needs to relaize that. Its always the thing of he'll regert it once somethin bad happens or its to late. Can't wait for more because this story is amazing
Author's Response:
Michael finally getting used to saying 'I love you' ugh, thank heavens! That fight/argument of Michael getting out of the thug life will never end until Michael finally listens to Michaela. He needs to realize she's not nagging it's cause she cares about him. He can be so dense. Hopefull what Mickey says about his shit catching up with him isn't true, 'cause Michael doesn't really deserve that and Mickey doesn't deserve that stress. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2012 08:22 am Title: Chapter 49
I love these two! (Me &Check) just kidding..M&M of course. lol I get a lil giddy too when Mikes says I love you, they have come so far in their relationship. One thing that Michaela said has me worried though.."one day your shit is going to catch up with you" That sounds like some foreshadowing. Im worried for Mike and Check. Sean checkuhs need to calm the fuck down, I never seen a nigga so hyped cause his boy got laid. Lol its ok Sean I forgive you. But shooting up that Morphine anit cute or cool. Fuck this juhrelle character why does he have my boys doing drugs to do a job? Shit doesnt sound right. I love how Mikes personality is written, hes im already a fuck up so why change attitude is so real. A lot of young men feel this way. Something drastic usually happens to change their ways around. My cousin got a girl pregnant, my friend lost his brother, my other friend got tired of being tired. I cant wait until Michaels story unfolds .
Author's Response:
Hahaha, Checkers is your boo thang. Michael and Michaela really have come far in their relationship, huh? Michael finally saying I love you, Michaela finally letting him get it in...;) But yeah, Michaela's little saying should tell Michael something. Hopefully it doesn't come true because Michael's already gone through enough in his life. And lool Sean getting all excited 'cause Michael finally got laid is hilarious. They're so close. Thank you so much for saying that this is real to you, you have no idea how much that means to me. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2012 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 49
Im like half asleep so ill leave u a good review tomorrow I promise!
Author's Response:
Awww, you're too sweet honey! <33
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2012 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG....you updated.Im so happy :)I loved the chapter.Michael saying I LOVE YOU all the time.I wonder how the birthday party will go ;) you are such a great writer and I cant wait for another update
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I'm so glad you liked it! The new update is here hun, hope you enjoy that one too. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2012 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 49
Ughh god!! I LOVE these 2!! My heart swoons everytime I hear theme say "I love you". One of ny favorite couples on this site!!
Author's Response:
Oh gosh, you have no idea what that means to me. That just put a hug smile on my face. Thank you. <3 Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2012 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 49
Him saying I love you is just the first step in the right direction! That man is so fucking stubborn. I get the feeling, he's gonna get hurt very bad soon, but he'll survive and work to change his life, because being real, he doesn't wanna die and leave his baby alone. Heaven can wait! :-D
Author's Response:
He is so stubborn! He needs to leave his pride at the door and realize what's best for him and Michaela. Ooh, I like your idea and I love what you did with the 'Heaven Can Wait' thing. That's so cute! Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Oct 01, 2012 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 49
Michael is mean man.... but aye fo real I was tripping wen dude was tlking 2 Mickey saying afta he beat Mikey he was gne get her...I was like "Aww shiddd he dne f*cked up now".
Author's Response:
Lool, no one talks shit about Mickey when Michael is around! That's his girl, hahaha. Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Sep 23, 2012 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was hoping so much for an update this weekend. Hope you update soon
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry for taking so long, I hope you enjoy this next chapter. :) <3
Date: Sep 15, 2012 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please,please,please,please update soon pppplllleeeeaaaassseee....
Author's Response:
It's here darling!! Thanks for this little push. :) <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2012 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 48
Ohhh..myyy..guhh...
Wonderful! Oh my Mike! Michael you put it down boy. A evening of firsts! The I love you and the loving. It was perfect.
So Michaela girl it was the best night of your life cause he said I love you? It had Nothing to do with him making you cum all night huh girl? Ok. You sweet and all but you anit that sweet.
Author's Response:
Loool! Girl, you had me dying over here of laughter. And an evening of firsts for sure! I'm sure Mike will show her what he really is later on. ;) Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2012 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 48
OMG! I've been waiting for this for soooo long! It was perfect! My favourite part was the ending. "And I can honestly say that it was one of the best nights of my life. Because Michael had finally told me that, he loved me. " That brought tears to my eyes! <3
I don't usually leave reviews, I just rate the chapters, lol. But in all honesty, I love this story so much. I literally jumped up and down when I logged in and saw that you updated today. You are an incredible writer! You never cease to amaze me!
This is, hands down, one of my all-time favourite stories on this site. I absolutely adore Michael's bad ass personality, including all the crimes (I know it's not right, but I find it soo sexy lol). Oh and what I always find soo entertaining are Michael and Sean's conversations. They're hilarious and always put a smile on my face.
I have been following this story since chapter one and I love it more with each passing day. I'm sorry that I don't always leave reviews, but I promise from now on to leave one for each chapter! I will no longer be a silent reader (well at least for this story) and I'm proud to say that I am a HUGE fan of yours! Always was and always will be!
I love you so much! Thank you for all the time you put into this! You are AMAZING! Don't you forget it! Much love <3
~Maary
Author's Response:
Honestly, this brought tears to me eyes. This was so sweet of you to say. To take your time out and compliment me and my story like this. This means so much to me, it really warmed my heart. Thank you so much. I love you too!! Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Sep 12, 2012 08:16 am Title: Chapter 47
Omg you used my song lol. I am so happy!! I think they are about to get down. Michaela, please don't chicken out. I feel Michael to the fullest now lol. Great update like always
Author's Response:
Of course I used your song! It was amazing, thank you so so much for pointing it out to me. I loved it so much! You were right, it described Michael perfectly! Hahaha, Michaela's put Michael through some torture. Hope she doesn't chicken out like always. Thanks for the review! :D <3