Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2012 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 53

Wow this chapter has seriously left me speechless but I'll still give an over all review. I love the relationship that mickey & dee have. It is honestly the cutest thing in the world. It was also so cute when dee dee met michael for the first time and he was asking her to be his new girlfriend. That was just so adorable. Haha another passionate evening of love making, you can never get tired of that. I loved the fact that mickey took over at that point and was like I give it good hahha that was perfect. I'm so really happy that Alex & checkers like each other, I hope they stop beating around the bush and getting together. It was really nice when Alex & mick opened up to each other, because they are both having strong feelings for two guys who are basically brothers so thats amazing if they become really good friends and stuff. Wow I just knew something bad was going to happen when it came to this walk, at first it was just them fighting then cryus shows up. Man was that a shocker. I couldn't believe mickey stepped up and really wanted to "save" michael in a sense even though cryus had a gun in his hand. I also can't believe that michael had the nerve to be cussing at him and stuff when he has a gun pointed in his direction. Michael's got balls hah no lie. I really hope this is the point when he realizes hes in a dangerous business gets out and cleans up his act. Pleaseeeee don't kill him! I'm begging! I can't bare to think Mickeys final conversation with him wouldve been them fighting over a broken promise! I can't handle it. :( pleasee just let him wake up and clean up his act. Ahh Im so scared to see what the future chapters hold. I'm going to cross my fingers for speedy updates -crosses fingers- I wonder what will happen with checkers also, he got arrested since cryus's dead body was there but I'm almost certain he can claim self-defense because come on, your best friend got shot. I think thats a reason explanation, ahh beautifully written chapter. Please update soon. The suspense will be the death of me!

Author's Response:

Hehehe, Michael and Dee are going to be the next new couple in this story. Goodbye Michaela! Hahaha. Lool Michaela noticed what kind of game Michael was trying to play, so she decided to step-up. Michael just couldn't resist, lool. I'm glad Checkers found Michaela too, he deserves a girl just like Michael does. I hope Michaela and Alexx become close friends. Michael's fate is unknown for now. Whether he lives or dies is a mystery that can only be solved by reading the next chapter, muhaha! Lool, thanks for the review, love! :D <3

Reviewer: LoveU4ever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2012 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 53

girl don't you fucking dare!!!!!!! he can't just die like this! god i was crying so freaking bad!!  i need the next part asap!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Awww, well I'm glad I was able to make you feel so strongly with my words. It means a lot to hear that. The update is here for you! Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2012 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 53

Aye, Dee Dee a lil pimp yo, haha. I give her props cuz I woulda did da same thang dat lil thug did. Haha bt at 1st I was lost cuz I ain't knw y Sean was hand cuffed. Bt I c y.

Author's Response:

Loool, yeah DeeDee's a sneaky little girl. I guess she goes after what she wants, hahaha. Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2012 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 52

Totally hooked!! Please continue!!

Author's Response:

Yay, I'm so happy to hear that! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2012 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 52

There love session was hot and that was so funny when Michael thought he almost got her preggo's. Haha

I'm so glad they made it this far in there relationship. And Michael was smart on waiting to have sex with her most guys can't wait on the girlfriends half the time. So more power to you Mike. Lol

Continue please whenever you can.

Author's Response:

Hahaha, Michael was really stressing himself out. I'm glad that they made it this far too, they're good together. The newest update is here, so I hope you enjoy it. :) Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2012 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 52

If there's one story I absoultly adore its this one right here. My gosh you do an amazing job at really creating a plot and putting a lot of little but very important themes into the story.
Chief Keef lookin' hoe fuck up my girl's face," Check scoffed.
That was soooo funny! Haha because chief keef isnt the most handsome looking fellow hahahaha I love the fact that all of them are starting to become seriously involved in relationships! Its nice to see them changing snd growing up:) the part at josiahs house was really funny I liked how mj & checks were going back and forth with the leah thing and with mickey making mj hold out so long. I found a lot of humor in that haha. I love that checks is always such a good loyal friend to michael, you could tell he wasn't that upset at first when him & d were about to scrap but once he said that about michael it really got him upset. So its nice that hes a ride or die no matter what. & also I hope the topic of marriage becomes a real deal for them because that would be perfectttttttt!!!!!!! Oh man I noticed that when they were starting to get it on, I was like waitttttttt he didn't wear a condom! Oh lordy lord but thankfully mickeys on the pill so that was an obstacle avoided. Another amazing chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all of your amazing and heart-warming compliments. They mean so much. I'm glad that the boys sare starting to settle down and find some girls that are good for them. Now they just need to work on getting out of the crime business. And yes, Checkers is Michael's ride or die homie. Brothers since grade school, lool. It's always good to have a friend like that, one that you can depend on. Oh gosh, yes Michael sure gave himself a scare and worked himself up. Lool lucky Michaela's on the pill or else he would've had a heart attack. I'm so glad you're still reviewing and enjyoing what I have to give you. Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: skipper Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2012 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 52

LOved it.I hope Michael dosent ruin things with the idea of marriage. I hope he asks her to marry him ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you! Hopefully Michael doens't put so much thought into things and ruin their relationship. Thanks for the review! :D <3

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2012 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 51

This story is just so freakin cute. Please update! I miss this story sooo much

Author's Response:

I'm back hunny! Sorry for keeping you waiting so long, but I hope you enjoy this chapter! Thanks for the review! :D <3