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Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2012 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great one girl, sooooooooooHOT!!

Please can't wait for the next part!!!!! a cop!!! great idea!

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2012 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

O.o ohhhhhh mmmmyyyyy gggooooooddddd i really thought this was real co workers but they was roleplaying AMAZING bravo i loved it the fact it was only 2 chaps i want more another fan added : )))

Reviewer: Kenya Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2012 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

damn and lmao loved the ending.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2012 11:27 am Title: Chapter 2

Damn that was hot!!!! You should write more of these. Geez.. *fans self* 

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2012 09:16 am Title: Chapter 2

I loved this!! It was sexy when Michael was talking!! You should do one where he is a cop.!!

Reviewer: BadPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey everybody! I'm so glad that you've all enjoyed it so far, the next part should be up today. Thanks for your reviews!


Love, BadPYT. :D

Reviewer: belovd2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

YESSSS!!! LOL!

Reviewer: wisdom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

DDDDAAYYYUUMMMM!!!! :o

Reviewer: Illusion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

...Jesus... Friggin'... ...Christmas.

YES YOU NEED TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!

This was HHOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTT!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mjloverforever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

JESUS!!!!!!! I NEED SOME NEW DRAWS!!

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh  my gooooooddddd this was beyond hot please continue michael is soo just yess lawddd

Reviewer: Briana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

YES YES YES F*CK YES CONTINUE PLEASEEEEEEEEEE *drools*

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

JESUS CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn...this story is...is...just...WOW!

It's HOT as hell!!

Please,continue!

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 11:27 am Title: Chapter 1

HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!

Please continue!!!

Reviewer: KekeJackson Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 04:00 am Title: Chapter 1

DAYUM!

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