Reviewer: Blueprint Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2013 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 47

Ugh she is stupid! -___-

Author's Response:

Really lol

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2013 10:17 am Title: Chapter 47

Wow.. I didn't expect that from Kay. I'm done with her. Michael really did love her and he's shown that. All she's done is cry and act like a big ass baby, and cheat on him too? Yeah I'm done with her ass. Trifling heffa. 

Author's Response:

Yeah what she did is really horrible because Michael was really crazy about her. But Kayliah's behaviour will be explained a little more in the next chapters...

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2013 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 46

I'm glad they didn't break up. Kayliah is so sweet and beautiful and she loves Michael. He won't find a woman to love him the way she does. I hope he remembers that and will remain faithful and good to her. And she'll only be in New York so he can definitely go see her. Quincy will get over it and if he doesn't who cares. Mike and Kay are both adults. And what they have is special. 

Author's Response:

You're so true in all you said but you'll see that their love will put to the test with the distance between them and Kayliah's new life in New York...

Even if they love each other, things won't be easy for them...And not because of Michael but you'll see...

Reviewer: YANAgirl07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2013 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 45

Awww :'( Nooo! This is not what I wanted to happen at all! I don't want them to break up </3 !! I hope Quincy realises how much they love each other soon so that they won't have to do that! It's so sad!! :(

I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm desperate to know what's going to happen!!

Author's Response:

Michael and Kayliah will have to take a decision regarding their relationship...As Michael said, now it will be even harder for them to love and see each other. They don't want to break up but with Kayliah's leaving and Quincy who knows and don't accept their love, it will be hard.

I will update next week :)

Reviewer: Cali_Santana Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2013 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 44

DAMN!!!!! No Michael...No Quincy.....No Kayliah everything is happened so fast I hope they'll eb alright

Reviewer: YANAgirl07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2013 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 44

*applause and praise for Eltoie* :DD I'm glad they didn't takr this story down, because this is one of my favorite stories. Besides, the age difference isn't major anyway, and like what was mentioned, no sexual interaction until she was 18.

Okay, onto the chapter...

I was hopeful. I thought this was going to be a sweet final moment before she left, and when they were alone I really thought it was going to stay that way! But noooooo! Along came Quincy to ruin everything!

I think he overreacted a bit, but I guess I can't blame him. When one of your closest friends go for your daughter how else can you respond? And to know he took her virginity and this had been going on for about a year could be a major shock! I think if he had let them explain that they love each other both equally and it was a healthy relationship things might have been a bit different.

Now that she's leaving and right after this it's going to make things a lot harder.

Author's Response:

You're sooo right applause and praise for Eltoie :DD. I'm glad too cause I worked hard on this one like on all of my stories. The age difference is indeed not major and nothing happened before she's 18. It's a point I wanted to respect...

About the chapter, it would have been good for them to have a last happy moment together but they were quite careless to kiss each other like this, in the kitchen, even with a closed door. I think Quincy did reacted a little too much but he was in complete shock. His daughter is still his little princess and he felt so betrayed by Michael. He had all his trust in him as he said. Michael tried to explain that their love was real and equally shared but Quincy didn't want to listen.

Our couple will have take a decision before her leaving...What will they decide?...You'll see very soon.

Reviewer: nalwenda Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2013 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 44

Ohmygod I hope it's gonna be allright now that Quincy caught them! But he had to find out some day... Can't wait for the next part!

And you're story was about to be deleted because Kayliah wasn't 18 yet? So if you post a story about a girl who's younger than 18, it's gonna be removed?

Author's Response:

Yeah we all hope so but you'll see what will happen to our lovebirds.

Exactly it's the one of the new rules of the board. No incest and no relationship with a girl younger than 18. But Me and amazing Eltoie, we explained the administrators that nothing sexual happened between the characters before Kayliah was 18 and that Kayliah's age was a barrier for Michael to go further with her...In this case, sex wasn't illegual anymore. So they finally kept it on the site :)