Date: Jun 28, 2012 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 15
O la la !
LOVE IS IN THE AIIIIIR! ( starts singing)
Aren't they such cuties? ( as the author's soul)
Much emotion,love,smiles are going on in here!
LOVE ,LOVE,LOVE!
,,Good night princess...." love it!
WHAT can I say more than I LOVE IT?!
MUCH L-O-O-O-O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2012 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 16
God...they're already making such a sweeeeeeet couple!
LOV EIT! LOVE IT ! LOVEEEE IT!
Please don't make me cry AL LEAST one this one!
You put such emotion through it...poor Michael...ha had to pursue the girl so many times!
VIVE LA FRANCE! Because I want to go there and because it is a loooovely country!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Author's Response:
I'm happy you're reading this story and that you like this one too.
I'll try not to make you cry but I can be sure of this lol...
LOVE to you sweety :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2012 09:14 am Title: Chapter 16
Oh Michael.... :/
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2012 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 10
Noooo! They were so close! I was like "oh my god yes! Yes! They're gunna kiss!" And then they didn't. Michael is so worried about her being too young and what Quincy will think he isn't able to tell Kayliah how he feels :(
And I love how you add pictures into your story, it makes it easier to visualise everything. LOVE Michael's shirt! XD
Author's Response:
Yeah they were so close...But you have to wait a little lol.
I think adding pictures in some situations can help too, I love to put some when I think it's needed...Michael's shirt is priceless, yes and right in the theme lol.
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2012 11:52 am Title: Chapter 9
Ooh he's starting to admit it! And lol if his brothers try to hit on Kayliah... oh God.
I hope they get together soon! They're so cute!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2012 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oooooooooooohhh! Same bed. C'mon something has to happen! They're totally going to get together soon! I can feel it! (hopefully my feeling is right)
You're French? Ca c'est bon. Haha, I speak French but I'm not francophone or anything. But I'm going on a French Exchange to France for 3 months next year and I'm getting a French exchange student coming here in a month and a half. I'm going to be like, 20 minutes away from Grenoble when I go there. SO stoked!
And yeah, your writing is really good considering that you are French! I honestly wouldn't have guessed, I would have thought that you were english if you hadn't mentionned it.
Good story! Can't wait to read more when I get the time! I've been slacking a bit :/ But I'm determined to catch up. I sha'll! >:D
Author's Response:
Oh it's really great that you're going in France...I hope you'll love your stay here.
Thank you so much about your compliment on my writing.I'm happy to see that I don't do too much mistakes in English.
Take your time to read sweety, I'm gonna read your update of Gay Factor right now :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2012 11:57 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh my God! Every chapter I keep thinking that they're going to get together!! They always seem to get close but neither of them take that extra step to admit it completely!
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2012 11:51 am Title: Chapter 6
Ooh I thought that Quincy was going to get pissed at Michael because he let Kayliah kiss him...
Great story! Really well written too!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews you left me, I appreciated :)
You know as long as it will be on the cheek, Quincy will be ok with this lol. I'm happy you find I'm writing well, it's important to me as I'm French :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2012 11:45 am Title: Chapter 5
Oooh they're gunna get together aren't they? I bet they are but they're gunna hide it from Quincy!! Excuse me while I read the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2012 09:30 am Title: Chapter 4
Haha I love Kayliah! She's so funny! Janet too "Pick up some girls on your way home!!"
Okay, I think that the two of them are going to continue hanging out and stuff, but I wonder what Quincy will think because there's definitely an age difference between the two of them!
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2012 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I like it already! I'm definitely going to try and catch up so I'll be ready for the next update :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much girl!! :)...I hope you'll like the following chapters :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2012 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yay they finally kissed! I soooo can't wait for the next part! I freaking love this story girl <3
Author's Response:
Yes it was about time lol...Thank you for loving my story and for reviewing :)
Date: May 31, 2012 09:42 am Title: Chapter 12
Just move on Kay! For good.
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2012 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This sounds good so far!
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2012 10:23 am Title: Chapter 11
Its so awkward between them now and thats only because they know they have strong feelings though Michael knows it would be wrong Update soon please i cant wait!!! :)
Author's Response:
It will be more awkward though in the next chapters...Oh I said too much lol.
Thank you for reading and commenting :)...Stay tuned!