[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2012 10:17 am Title: Chapter 18
Aw! Yay! I'm really glad that they've made up now and that Kayliah now understands why Michael did what he did!
I was afraid that someone was going to see them at their dinner! Thank God I was wrong!
Author's Response:
She understood but she will have another hard time later...You'll see...
It would have been an interesting twist but not for now lol.
Thank you for reading and reviewing each time :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2012 12:15 am Title: Chapter 17
Awwwwwww!!! :'( I hope that they're able to make up soon! They were so cute together! I hope Michael dumps Brooke and confesses his relationship with Kayliah. It would just be better that way!
Author's Response:
Well confessing his relationship with Kayliah could bring a lot of troubles to him, for she's a minor...Being 24, he's an outlaw...And without thinking about Quincy.
You'll see what will happen to our cute couple very soon :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2012 12:08 am Title: Chapter 16
:O O....M....J.... Did I actually just read that?!? Ohh dammnn... I think Michael has screwed up this time. Even though he's doing it for all the right reasons, I think Kayliah will only look at the wrong reasons for dating Brooke.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2012 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
Lol at Latoya's comment about calling Branca or Frank sexy! Haha! That made me laugh! Fantastic job! Love this story! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much girl!!!
Date: Jul 05, 2012 10:19 am Title: Chapter 17
Smh I knew she wouldnt like that. Poor Kay. It's only a matter of time before someone else comes along and sweeps her off her feet. Michael is wrong. Period.
Author's Response:
Of course she couldn't like that...And you're right Michael is really wrong....
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2012 09:29 am Title: Chapter 17
Aw, I feel really bad for Kayliah.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2012 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ooooooooooooooh.... I hope Brianna doesn't spill anything! If Quincy finds out they're going to be in trouble. I don't think Quincy is going to like to find out that Michael adn Kayliah are dating. On the other hand in might be better if they just tell Quincy because at least they're being honest, maybe Quincy will prefer the honesty then to have them tryign to hide the relationship from him...
I guess I'll have to keep readign and see :D
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2012 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awwwwwwwwwwwww! YAY!!!! Finally! I've been waiting for that forever!
But now that they're together I wonder what Quincy will say... and Peggy! And I wonder what everyone else will say abouth the age difference!
Great job! Love this chapter! So sweet!
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2012 12:34 am Title: Chapter 12
Aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww! It's so sad reading this because they would be so perfect together!
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2012 12:27 am Title: Chapter 11
Aww! :( Poor Kayliah and Michael! They totally love each other but Michael is just too afraid of what Quincy will say and the fact that Kayliah is only 17! I hope that they can figure it out!
Date: Jun 28, 2012 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 16
Smh wrong move. Kayliah is gonna leave him. He should not be parading around nor kissing giraffe ass Brooke! That's not cool. He's gonna lose Kay to someone who isn't afraid of being out with her.
Author's Response:
giraafe ass Brooke lol...I love it lol...Well you'll see next week what will happen for our sweet couple :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2012 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
Aww Michael is too adorable in this chapter even though he kissed Brooke..I wonder is he going to tell Kayliah
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2012 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 16
Drama up ahead!
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2012 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 16
SMDH bad move mike. hopefully kaliyah will understand. janet was right, she is gonna be so hurt.
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2012 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 14
aWWW...THEY'RE KISSING.......
Awwww.....
romance....yuo're full of romance...
And I adore that!
I hope you will make manyyyyy stories in the near future!
Maybe Michael will be in trouble,bur remember ,,HE WILL be" ..not NOW....so he MUST enjoy the present with his love.
MUCH L-O-V-E!
rating : 10 OF course!