[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2012 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh no of course this is hard foe mike that shes quincys daughter. i hope they fins a way to be a couple. so cool that kayliah slept in his bed.
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2012 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 7
yaaaay cant wait until they meet again this time at mjs house. theire so sweet
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2012 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
how cute was that aaahhh hes doing her math homework. i dont know why but that was really cute and sexy XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2012 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow this was so romantic i thought for a momENt they would kiss...oh and i never thought kayliah was a virgin. i hope she doesnt start anything with that boy from her school she needs MICHAEL!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Kayliah and Michael...4 chapters i read already and love these 2 together
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
honestky IN LOVE with this story already now. youre such a great author. reading your stories is like whatching a never before seen mj movie. you write his personality so realistic. hes like i imagine him to be in this story
Author's Response:
Wow thank you very much for this amazing and very nice review.
I'm really happy you're reading this story too and that you like it...Hope you'll like the following chapters sweety :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
kayliah seems nice and a good "something else" for michael if you know what i mean. im excited how mikes gonna take the party XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2012 10:43 am Title: Chapter 21
Whoa! Even I was shocked at the fact that Kay is a virgin!
I wonder of they actually will be able to wait or if their wanting for each other will take complete control...
Great chapter! Update soon :)
Author's Response:
I know it can be really surprising lol...
Hmm we'll have to see but it will become hard for them...The temptation will be hard to handle...
Thank you for your nice review as usual :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2012 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 20
ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod!
They've got to be more careful because Quincy is starting to get suspicious... if that relationship with Brooke breaks then Quicny will have more reason to think that Michael and Kay are together!
I have a feeling they won't be able to wait 3 more months...
Anxious for the next update! :)
Author's Response:
Even if they will be in an hurry to do it, they're obliged to wait 3 months cause of the law...But it will be hard, temptations and growing desire will give them hard times lol.
About Quincy, he will become suspicious...A lot of little things will make him doubt several times...Just let's see how our lovebirds will take his doubts away :)
Date: Jul 27, 2012 07:44 am Title: Chapter 20
Luckily Quincy dropped that subject.. I think he woulda found Mike's nervousness really suspicious. Damn Kay needs to hurry up and turn 18! They both want each other in that way.. I have a feeling it's gonna happen soon though. And ugh, everybody thinks Brooke and Mike are a couple for real. Not.
Author's Response:
I think that it will be hard for them both to wait 3 months...There will be temptations but Michael had to keep his mind straight or he will be an outlaw.
Quincy dropped it for the moment....
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2012 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 19
Awwwww...this relationship is so full...of....ROMANCE !
I am so sorry I haven't reviewed lately....I have internet problems,I say the TRUTH !
Right now,I have them too...sometimes my computer simply frozes.
But I want you to know that I will always love your stories and I keep up with them!
You have me !
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Author's Response:
Hey sweety!
I'm glad you like this story aswell. Don't worry for reviewing, I know that if you read my story you always review so there are no problems at all.
L.O.V.E to you girl :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2012 01:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, sorry about that! My review totally got cut off there! That was weird... lol! Good thing I checked! I was like; I wonder if she replied... so I went to check and I just see; Aw! And I'm sitting here like; what the heck??
Anyway, here's what I also said... ahem;
I hope that the whole Brooke thing doesn't get in the way of their relationship, even though they have talked it through. I have a feeling that Brooke is going to pull something on Michael, and that's going to leak to the public and then Kayliah is going to see it and then a huge fight is going to break out! :O
I'm also wondering if Quincy is getting more and more suspicious... haven't heard a lot from him, but I think that we will be soon...
Hopefully they don't cut this one off! Lol! That was weird. :/
Author's Response:
No worry about your review girl even if I have to admit that I didn't understand it at first lol.
About Brooke, we'll see...She's gonna do something which will make Michael think about the two relationships...and take a decision...
About Quincy he will be present as his wife Peggy and they'll become more suspicious of course. I just don't want to make them interfer in every chapter...Just from time to time, showing their doubts and suspicions. Michael and Kayliah's realtionship also need to be build before drama come.
Anyway, I just saw that I was in your favorite author.I'm very proud of this and I really liked the comment you wrote about me.It was very nice and really made me happy.I hope you'll enjoy more stories from in the future.Thank you very much for your support :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2012 10:22 am Title: Chapter 19
Aw!
Author's Response:
OK lol.
Date: Jul 21, 2012 09:18 am Title: Chapter 19
Ehh.. I still don't like it. Kay is playin herself, I'm sorry. This fool can't even say he loves her but can be out smiling and laughing while "pretending" to be with Brooke. No. Kay needs to wise up. She's a pretty girl. I'm sure there are guys that like her as well.
Author's Response:
Don't worry about Kay...Things will be better in the next chapters. About Michael he loves her but needs more time for saying I love you to her.
Date: Jul 12, 2012 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 18
Smh I still don't like it. But maybe Kay should get a pretend "boyfriend" since Mike is gonna be parading around with Brooke. And I also feel like Kay feels more strongly for him than he does for her.. Mm. I don't know about this. Kay needs to wise up. If he can have somebody to parade around, she should too.