[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2012 02:29 am Title: Chapter 39
Updaaaattee! this was a good chapter, I'm glad Katherine knows :) just Quincy to go.. damn :P
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Yeah only Quincy to go but it's not the easiest part...
[Report This]Date: Dec 14, 2012 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 38
Continue :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2012 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 38
Phew! I'm glad this chapter endedd on a high note! I was afraid things were just going to fall apart!
I have a feeling this isn't the last of Ola...
I hope what Michael said was true, that all he did was flirting, and he never felt anything more than that.
Author's Response:
And I feel you have a good feeling lol...I let Michael did this with Ola in his trailer, because I maybe have something else planned with her...I don't know yet ;)
Yeah he only flirted...He was very attracted to Ola that's why it went a little out of control in his trailer...But he doesn't have a real crush for her, not enough to leave Kayliah.
Date: Dec 13, 2012 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 38
Michael is a liar! Acting just like his trifling ass brothers! Smh he should've told Kay the truth, but he's too much of a coward cuz he knows damn well she will leave his narrow ass. Smh I hope Kay finds out he kissed Ola's bony ass!
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2012 11:52 am Title: Chapter 38
I felt it coming when Mike said his door was open... I knew it! Lucky guy he is, getting to almost make love with two girls on the same day...! Naughty boy! ...smh...
Anyway, he should be careful with Ola, eventhough Quincy wants them to be together. Oh, crap! Quincy doesn't even know that it will break his daughters heart!
Plz continue, I loved this chapter! <3
Author's Response:
Yeah he could have been a lucky gut but he didn't want to be unfaithul to Kay...Well not completely...I think that flirting with her and stuff, made him feel like he was attracted to her...
I will continue, don't worry :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2012 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 37
Awww! No! :'( I knew that when Ola was brought into this she'd create tension between Kayliah and Michael ! >:( But Michael shouldn't have eyed her up like that! He should be more aware!! I feel so bad for Kayliah who just has to sit back and watch it happen because she can't let their secret out... :(
This is really good as always! This chapter especially had me craving for more! I want to know what happens between Michael, Kayliah and Ola...
Author's Response:
More about Michael, Kayliah and Ola in the next chapter...Ola won't stop what she's doing and we'll see how Michael will react...
Why Michael was eyeing her up like this in front of Kay?...Answer in the next chapter...
Thank you very much sweety!
Date: Dec 07, 2012 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 37
Smh Michael knows better. Let Kay be eying a guy and being flirtatious in his face and see how he likes it. And she definitely can because she's GORGEOUS.. Much more so than Ola. Kay is angry and I don't blame her at all. She needs to give his ass the silent treatment.
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2012 09:21 am Title: Chapter 37
smh... Ola! Well, we can't blame her, she doesn't know anything. It's Michael who should be more distant to her. Poor Kay... and I had the feeling that Quincy was gonna find out this chapter, luckily he didn't! ;)
Great chapter, keep going! <3
Author's Response:
No we can't blame Ola...She has to play with a sexy man and she doesn't know about Kayliah...And she won't stop there...
About Michael, you'll find out in the next chapter why he's acting like this...Quincy doesn't suspect anything for now, that's why he tried to hook Michael with Ola...
Thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2012 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 36
Yay! I'm glad Michael's reaction was good!
What Janet said was so true, Kayliah is like Quincy's little princess. It's even like that in my family, so I could totally relate to that! lol!
Telling Michael's mum wouldn't be too bad... I mean, Kayliah probably wouldn't mind since her mum knows, but the last sentence when it said that it could be dangerous is totally true. The more people that know the higher chance that the secret might get out before they want it to..
Author's Response:
Yeah it's good but he didn't have the choice...And to see that someone close to Kayliah took the news well was a relief for him...
Yeah I know what is it, being the only girl in the family...1 brother, 2 cousins and me...I'm the little princess lol
I didn't write the chapter yet about Michael telling his mother, but I think that more persons will be involved...You'll see...
[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2012 11:47 am Title: Chapter 36
I don't think Katherine would tell anyone about Mike and Kay's relationship. But maybe, just maybe, she gets so excited and tells everyone she meets. >.<
Janet is very wise in this chapter, and she gave Michael really good advice. *Go, Donk!*
Anyway, this chapter was great (as always)! <3
Author's Response:
I don't think Katherine will tell it...But finally, the secret will be reveal to more persons than it was planned...
Yeah I often put Janet in my stories and she's always the one who try to advise Michael in a good way...
Thank you very much for your review <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2012 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 35
I was like 'Oh no' when Peggy saw the book and the message at the end from Michael, but her reaction in the end wasn't as bad as I had expected! Quincy's reaction is the one that scares me. His reaction could totally flip this story around!
Michael's reaction could be interesting too, I wonder if he'll be in a more calm state when he reads the message from Kayliah, or if he'll freak out...
I can't wait for the next chapter!! :DD I love this story soo much!!!
I want to give it a million stars!!
Author's Response:
Quincy's reaction will be different for sure but will come later in the story...I want to scatter Quincy's appearances in the story for let the tension climb, until he will know...Some things may happen that will make his reaction...well you'll see lol
Michael's reaction will be in the next chapter and I hope to be able to post it soon, but I'm so busy.
Thank you so so much for loving this story so much!!!
I'm working on other stories too including a slash story...Hope you'll like them too!
Date: Nov 24, 2012 08:33 am Title: Chapter 35
Wow. Well I really hope Peggy will keep her word and not tell Quincy! Kay and Mike are the only ones who need to do that. And she's right, Michael is a good man and a gentlemen. The kind most women would want for their daughters, his age is not even a factor. I'm really glad she accepts them though. Yay for Kay and Mike!
Author's Response:
Yeah Michael is definitively the kind of man every mother wants for their daughter.
Peggy will keep her word and will help our lovers but I don't want to say too much.
Thanks for your review :-)
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2012 08:12 am Title: Chapter 35
In some way I'm glad Peggy knows, and at least she learned it first instead of Quincy. Hihi, I can't help imagining what Peggy must think: My daughter went to bed with Michael Jackson... OMG
This was a great chapter! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Yeah just imagine the reaction of your own mother lol...I can't imagine the reaction of mine lol...It's true that more than knowing about us dating, knowing they're sleeping together was a lot to handle for Peggy.
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2012 07:42 am Title: Chapter 35
Phew, close call. Haha
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2012 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aliyah is pretty. I wish she was still alive. Honestly this is an good first chapter. I enjoyed ur other stories as well this one too.
Author's Response:
It's true that she was really pretty and it's very sad she died so young.
I hope you will read more of this story and you'll like the following chapters :)