Date: Apr 10, 2012 12:42 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow Michael you naughty boy trying to kiss Lexi when your married
Lets hope Lisa does not find out
Date: Apr 09, 2012 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh boy i wonder how Lisa will feel when she finds out lexi stayed over.
Date: Apr 09, 2012 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh boy Michael sure is in big trouble. having those nasty thoughts about Lexi wont go down well with Lisa
Date: Apr 09, 2012 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lexi must be something special if Michael has taken a liking to her already.
I wonder will he able to hold back and not do anything.
Date: Apr 09, 2012 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. I am not a big fan of Adele but I have heard the song and think its great.
Date: Apr 09, 2012 11:33 am Title: Chapter 2
To me Lisa seems to be insecure if she thinks Michael will fall one of his dancers. if she continues to be like that there might be trouble ahead
Date: Apr 09, 2012 11:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start so far. I am really interested. Off to read more now
Date: Apr 06, 2012 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like what I have read so far...keep going. Great job. The only advice I would give you is to separate the lines where each character speak so it doesn't get too confusing. I hope you continue this story. :)
Author's Response: Haha! That didn't even dawn on me while I've been writing. Thanks for the advice. Lots of love.
Date: Apr 05, 2012 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
Love it darling <3
Author's Response: Thanks. Lots of love
Date: Apr 04, 2012 10:21 am Title: Chapter 3
Did you make up the song that you used? Just curious. Awesome chapter. XD
Author's Response: No, I used Adeles' Rumour has it. Thank you so much for the review. Lots of love :)
Date: Apr 04, 2012 09:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Hmmm....I sense trouble ahead for Michael and Lisa not that I'm not happy about that. Can't wait to read more XD
Date: Apr 03, 2012 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
:) ♥♥ Hey dear heart! Just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying what I'm reading so far. Much L.O.V.E. dear heart
Author's Response: Awe Thank you so much. This is my first story.
Date: Apr 03, 2012 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think that its very cool how you used the characters from Twlight. I love it , so far XD
Author's Response: I loved the movie and books so it just fits. Thank you so much. :)
Date: Apr 01, 2012 01:17 am Title: Chapter 7
"Her room will be next to mine, so she wouldn't get lost", he ain't slick LOL. Great chapter love <3
Date: Mar 31, 2012 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow, Lisa is too much for me. Great chapter :)