[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2012 01:24 am Title: Chapter 16
AHHHHHH Omg I was not expecting this at all girl. This was a complet twist to the story, but please make her strong and not beg him to come back, cuz what he did was like so messed up. He sorta did treat her like a whore. Shit he was the one who took her there and asked to MAKE LOVE, like it was all him...
Cant wait for the update
Author's Response: Thanks! I want this story to not be like the usual Michael meets girl, and falls in love story:) I want it kind of realistic haha and of course I'm going to make her strong but I want her to still feel those human feelings such as depression, heart broken etc... But she still going to maintain to be strong, even though inside shes deeply hurt.
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2012 01:08 am Title: Chapter 15
Ohhhh okay now I get it.. Thanks for explaining hon!
Author's Response: No problem! I'm glad I cleared it for you :)
Date: Apr 24, 2012 12:38 am Title: Chapter 16
I kinda figured that would happen. Cassie needs to just move on with her life. Shut Michael completely out, let him feel his own medicine. That was pretty cold of him but I'd be lying if I said I didn't expect it. Cassie, just move on girl. It's not worth it to pursue a man who doesn't feel the same as you.
Author's Response: Great advice! Might incorporat what you said into the story! We will see and if I do, you will deff be seeing a shouting from me ;) thanks for the review and enjoy the new chapter
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2012 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
That was so tremendously sad! I had tears in my eyes! I could feel Cassie's pain! I could truly feel it and wanted to jump down his throat. lol That's how real it was to me! I love, love, love your story! It's a fairytale, yet so realistic! I'm actually glad you brought that in! It adds a little twist and suspension to the story! I love your way of writing! I love this story! Yes. I've said this before. lol It has made it on my favorites list from the very beginning! I guess, I speak for all I of us when I say tho that we want Michael and Cassie together after he's discovered that he's lied to her and above all to himself. Michael can't be a jerk like that. He's different. He's beautiful and I know, he'll come running after her. haha He will, won't he? *puppy eyes* haha Hey! I know, it's your story but I can't wait to read more...10 stars! :-)
Author's Response: Aw! I'm glad you felt he pain because when I wrote it, I got a little teary eyed too! Yeah he could be a jerk somewhat but I don't think he means too be one.... We will see if he comes running after her.... Keep checking in lol the puppy eyes :) and thanks for the 10 stars that's amazing! Enjoy the new chapter )
Date: Apr 23, 2012 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 16
OMG i was not expecting it. I thought Michael was going to say"I love you too" I cant wait for next chapter .I want to know what will happen next
Author's Response: I don't think no one was expecting that haha! Thanks for the review, and enjoy the new chapter !
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2012 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 16
oh my god michael broke her heart poor cassie now if she get pregnant uh oh i cant wait for more continue update
Author's Response: Wow... Pregnancy ! I didn't even think of that. Haha... Glad you enjoyed !
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2012 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
I HOPE SHE CUTS HIM DOWN A FEW SIZES WHEN HE DOES CONTACT HER! Ugh! lol good chapter girly!
Author's Response: LmfaO your too funny! Well she's a strong girl so when they do see each other, all hell is going to break loose haha enjoy the new chapter
Date: Apr 23, 2012 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 16
Michael.. What the FUCK!?!
Author's Response: Haha... Yup, he did lol thanks for the review and enjoy the new chapter
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2012 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 16
Well...Well...what we have here...A woman who fell in love with a man that seem to have afraid of fall in love with someone else. Yes. I think Michael love her or doesnt know yet.
But Michael is hiding something...idk!
The way he treated her...the way he made love with Cassie...Suddenly he's avoiding her...Strange.
If I was on her shoes I would care less to him. I would make him beg for me. Suffer?Yes...
Cuz I'm BAD girl...hehehehe
Thanks!
ps:btw...I'm from Brasil!I loved to see my beloved country on your story...You can see...My English IS TERRIBLE!|o|*.*
Author's Response: Your English is fine! Big ups to brazil! I'm honored to have a Brazilian read my story :) he might be hiding something mwahahaha enjoy the new chapter :) we will see what happens between these two!
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2012 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
This story is really awesome! I love it, really well written, This chapter was so unexpected That was kinda cruel of michael I think he loves her too he's just afraid I hope he tries to get her back! PLEASE update soon I can't wait for a new chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very thankful for all your compliments! It's makes me beyond happy <3 we will see if he tries to get her back ! Tha is for the review your the best ! Muahz! And enjoy the new chapter
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2012 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 16
Aaww. Poor Cassie. Hopefully Michael will realize he fucked up and it not be too late. Hang in there Cass, Michael is a male, it takes him a little longer to northern brain to override his southern brain and his heart to take effect. Great chapter. Lots of love.
Author's Response: Haha thats fucking funny haha and Yeah I know! We will see what happens! Enjoy the new chapter :) And thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2012 02:06 am Title: Chapter 15
When did she say it?
Author's Response: She said it the exact same time Michael and her had their orgasms together. so when he called out cassie's name,( she didnt realize she said she was in love with him) she called out that she was in love with him and Michael heard. Hope that makes since and sorry for the confusion!
Date: Apr 23, 2012 01:34 am Title: Chapter 15
WOW ...what is going to happen now?????
Author's Response: Your going to have to wait and see (:
Date: Apr 22, 2012 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 15
ooooo myyyy gooodddd u have to update soon girls asap pkk =)
Author's Response: I will be updating as soon as I can(: possibly today (:
Date: Apr 22, 2012 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh she said it!!!! I wonder what he'll say. I hope he feels the same..
Author's Response: We will see............. (: