[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2012 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 27
One word: DAMN!
And the rest: WHY?!?! It was so good why?!?! S.o.h smh. -_- he know he was wrong for that one
Author's Response: Lol enjoy the new update. But I wanted to add more drama... Spice up the story :)
Date: May 29, 2012 11:10 am Title: Chapter 26
Aww.. Poor Michael. He's been so psychologically abused, he's pushing somebody who really loves him away. I really hope she can get through to him and they can work past this. And RIP Donna Summer.
Author's Response: You will find when you rea the new chapter. Enjoy :) and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2012 06:55 am Title: Chapter 11
Hahaha i love it! Great job
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 26
I love the shower scene... I like how she Holds him and tells him how beautiful he is.. But now I am waiting to see why he reacted the way he did..
Author's Response: Thanks! And you'll find out if you read the new chapter :) thanks for the review :)
Date: May 28, 2012 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 26
I am still saddened by her death cause she was a very close family friend so it was of a personal thing when she passed. Great chapter doll. Funny thing, when i was younger i useto imagine her and michael hooking up and having a child (lol) and my mom told her and she just laughed lol. I would go to her house a lot. I truly miss her and yu just cheered me up with this chapter. Thank you very much
Author's Response: You are so lucky you got to just be in her presense! I could tell you admired and loved her and so do I! She was an amazing individual and I'm honored that you wrote this little paragraph of your experience with her. Ill treasure that in my heart <3
She was an amazing woman (: and she would've looked good with Michael on her side haha
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was quite perfect start... gonna check out the next chapters!!
Author's Response: Lol thanks oh! and have fun.... It's a bumpy ride lol
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2012 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 26
Aw...I knew that was going to happen.
Author's Response: I'm glad you knew it was going to happen lmfaO (:
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2012 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 25
I read this chapter more than once and this is by far the best chapter!!! GURL it's amazing so well put together and I am just loving the idea of what Michael did, how he did it and...... it's just AMAZING. Love how they didn't break the bet and made REAL LOVE.. This means a lot if it was ya know a "real" experience lol LOOOOOVE IT!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! And I'm very happy that you kept reading the chapter over and over again haha lol
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2012 12:03 am Title: Chapter 25
Awww
Author's Response: I knowwwwwwwww <3
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2012 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 25
Awww
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2012 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 25
Aww,he called it "love" that was sweet. Looks like they can have a serious relationship without sex, good for them! Great chapter, btw :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) ! I'm glad you enjoyed it ! And yes 'love' I came up with that last minute lol
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2012 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 25
I love yur stories...! Email me if yur interested in cowritting with me! Queenadreana@yahoo.com
Author's Response: Cool! Will do and thanks, I'm glad you like my writing :)
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2012 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Lol this is really good!
Author's Response: Thank you <3
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2012 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
Whoa, that was actually really scary. I hope he doesn't find her or thatll be really scary!
Author's Response: We will see in future chapters ...... (: thanks for the review !
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2012 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh gosh, things are so good right now I hole they don't turn sour soon :(
Author's Response: Keep reading to find out lol :)