Reviewer: Remember the Time Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2010 03:49 pm Title: Prelude

This story is so creative!  Even though there's a science fiction element, I love how you're keeping time periods straight!  Also, way to go with describing how she looks out of place with her 2009 clothes.

I understand you have a plan going with your short chapters, but they're killing me!  I want to know what happens next!

I really like this story; post more soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the feedback! It really means a lot to me! I am so happy you like it so far, and I promise there's more to come ASAP!!  The chapters will get a bit longer soon! I promise!