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Reviewer: sholamjj4life Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2012 01:28 pm Title: Who are you!?

It's a bit confusing at the beginning but i like the concept of it ! please continue!xx



Author's Response:

sorry for the confusion i will try my best to not do that again and thanks <3

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2012 12:37 pm Title: Who are you!?

this story is so different i would have never thought it would go like this cant wait for more please update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks so much <3

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2012 02:05 am Title: Who are you!?

Wow what a revelation!

I really liked this chapter and Ican't wait to see how the things go...



Author's Response:

Thanks! <3

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2012 09:18 am Title: The Truth

I like this story so far. Good plot!

Mia really don't love Michael?!...Interesting...

Let's see what whappen next.



Author's Response:

Why thank you

Reviewer: Moonwalker girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2012 08:51 am Title: The Truth

I love that game of monopoly who won????<br />Mia may not love Michael but I do!!!! <br />So the story could sound more realistic is better if MJ says less bad words<br />becuase he started saying bad words around the Dangerous era which he looks so dang hot in but<br />less get back to the story before I go any farther lol.<br />Is a very good and unique story I like it so far



Author's Response:

Yeah i know but my mouth is filthy and i curse like a sailor so i will try my hardest to have Michael stop cursing and thank you

Reviewer: Moonwalker girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2012 08:51 am Title: The Truth

I love that game of monopoly who won????<br />Mia may not love Michael but I do!!!! <br />So the story could sound more realistic is better if MJ says less bad words<br />becuase he started saying bad words around the Dangerous era which he looks so dang hot in but<br />less get back to the story before I go any farther lol.<br />Is a very good and unique story I like it so far



Author's Response:

Lol! Thank you and my mom won we felt ashamed and thanks I will take that into consideration <3

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2012 03:26 am Title: The Truth

OH EM GEE !!!
*dramatically back sound*


What? She doesn't love him?

Author's Response:

LOL!

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2012 03:19 pm Title: Rules!! (Just a Fill in)

please hurry i cant wait i love a freaky michael :))))) #teammjperv



Author's Response:

Lol everyone loves a freaky Mike

Reviewer: Moonwalker girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2012 07:53 am Title: Rules!! (Just a Fill in)

This story is great and unique but it would be a lot more better if you changed the characters like instead of Michael wanting would be Mia and it could be a lot more interesting. Just a little idea that's all :D

Author's Response:

Ah!! I get where your coming from I surely will switch that up thanks very much <3

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