




Date: Jun 30, 2024 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
first time reading this and I’m intrigued by the concept!
Date: Apr 03, 2019 02:55 am Title: Chapter 69 - Confrontation
Love it
Date: Apr 03, 2019 01:09 am Title: Chapter 40 - Battle of Wills
Aww michael's okay again :)
Date: Apr 02, 2019 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Big Toys for Bad Girls
Love your story




Date: Feb 28, 2016 11:04 am Title: EPILOGUE
Reviewing after fully reading this in one go. Loved the idea and concept.





Date: Nov 16, 2014 05:49 pm Title: EPILOGUE
OH MY GOD FEMALIEEENNNN GIRRRRL!!! I'm so sad this story is over, it was such an incredible, wonderfuk adventure. I cant say enough good things about it. I'm speechless! This story was... Incredible. If Michael were with me now, and I ha to read one story off the whole MJfiction site to him, it'd be this, I feel Mike himself would adore this story.
I feel like its my baby, I'm so sad its over, and thank you sooooo much for the adventure femalien. Love ya girl! :)
Author's Response:
All good things come to an end, but it is not the end of my stories here. I have a new one published - The Music Lovers - and two more in the planning phase...so you won't get bored if you stick around.





Date: Oct 29, 2014 04:35 pm Title: EPILOGUE
Super story! Loved it.
Date: Oct 29, 2014 04:15 pm Title: EPILOGUE
Wow! Over two years of you writing this story and me as well as others reading it. I have to say that this will forever be one of my favorite stories with "Monster" and "Give into Me" being right beside it lol😄 Thank you for sharing this fantasy with us😀!!!





Date: Jul 03, 2014 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 74 - Becoming Famous and Other Bad News
EEEEE this was fantastic!
A part of me is glad her father is dead... I had no use for him ever since he came into this story >:(
I really loved this, cant wait for more :) :)
Date: Jul 02, 2014 11:38 am Title: Chapter 74 - Becoming Famous and Other Bad News
I really enjoy reading this! update soon please



Date: Jun 19, 2014 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 73 - The Dance of Love
wow...just wow...i love this story so much!
Date: Jun 13, 2014 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 73 - The Dance of Love
I love this story





Date: Jun 03, 2014 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 72 - Back in Paris
HAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA OMFG HAHAHAHAHHA JIMMY IS SUCH A CUTIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE he wont let daddy get mommy in bed XDDDDDD Ahhahahahaha I'm dying XD
This was incredible!!!! They named him jimmyyyyy awuawww
Annnnnnnnnd the tour begins!!! I love this story so so much!!!!!!!!!!! girl you're incredible!!
Date: Apr 17, 2014 07:45 am Title: Chapter 72 - Back in Paris
Aww they had the baby.... So cute! Can't wait till the next chapter
Update soon please
Date: Mar 27, 2014 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 71 - Oh Baby!
Aewwww they're having a baby!!!