[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2013 08:23 am Title: Chapter 62 - The Modelling Job
Woohoohooo
That was incredible, the conNECTION. Woah is right... :D
Love this so so much!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it, But don't forget that troubles are still not over...
Date: Nov 03, 2013 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 62 - The Modelling Job
Oooooooooooooo!!! Keep going!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2013 09:14 am Title: Chapter 62 - The Modelling Job
Yeah cause he kissed her in the short film so i kniw Yanniah will have his head if she found that out lol.
Author's Response:
Well, it's kind of inevitable that she finds out when the short film is filmed then showed on TV...
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2013 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 58 - Boiling Anger, Quick Repentance
Chandlerrrrssss >:(
Hate em. :P
Crazy good chappie, love it!
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2013 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 61 - First Fight
That worked out pretty well. Evan still on his nonsense about that damn script. He acts like Michael owes him something, after all he's (MJ) done for that family already. Greedy bastard. Sorry for my mini-rant, the whole Chandler bs pisses me off beyond reason and then some. *sigh* Btw, what year is this set in; is it '91 or '92?
Author's Response:
We're rolling in 1991 right now :) And don't worry, there will be some retribution for Evan...
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2013 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 61 - First Fight
God, why can't Evan go die in a hole...
Nice shower scene. NICE. beautiful <3
Love this story with all my heart!!
Never stop writing, Please! You are incredible <3
Author's Response:
Evan will be dealt with soon enough. Just be patient, OK?
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2013 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 60 - Yannina Gets a Job
Nope! lol he is probably going to flip on her but oh well. It's harmless right? Or a trap? DUH DUH DUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH O.O
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2013 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 60 - Yannina Gets a Job
HAAAAAAAAAA
I can just picture michael's face xD
lmao anywaysss YAAAYYY... New chapter ^_^ I love this story so much!!
Date: Oct 24, 2013 03:24 am Title: Chapter 60 - Yannina Gets a Job
Lmao I think she'd br great modelling! It'd be good for MJ as well, not having some limp-wristed, dozy female hanging off his arm needing to have all the brightest jewels and whatnot. Yannina is amazing - she's independant.
Author's Response:
Independence is her middle name, indeed :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2013 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 59 - Evan's Move
I cannot put into words how much I love this storyyyy
Cant wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2013 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 59 - Evan's Move
I love how Yannina rubbed her marriage n June's face without really doing anything mean and just being herself. Both June and even are such leeches, Michael should just refused to have anything else to do with them. The kids will be sad but they'll get over it and its their parents fault anyway.
I've been a silent reader until now but I'll try to comment more often cause this my favorite story by you and I don't want you to take it down
Author's Response:
There will be a nasty confrontation with the Chandlers..that's all I'm giving out. You can't be nice and polite with such people for too long...
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2013 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 57 - The Ghost of Jealousy
Gosh though, can you blame her? I would be so jealous too hahah Naomi is gorgeous, and Mike (as we all know) is sexy as HELL in that video. Le drool hah
Author's Response:
Well, yes, but there will be some consequences for poor Michael....
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2013 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 56 - Smelling Danger
Hahah jealous wifey...
Everytime I see Evan Chandlers face, I get the creeps. I know somewhat how Yannina feels, but gosh I hope they resolve this in time... I dont wanna see Mike hurt again :/
Excellent work!! I mean that, I love your fics so much!
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2013 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 56 - Smelling Danger
yes lol she is
Date: Aug 20, 2013 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 56 - Smelling Danger
I'm hoping Yannina sorts out the Chandlers before the RealLife damage is done. It's a pity MJ didn't have someone like her in his life, maybe he'd still be here.
I started a fiction 3 years ago, and I see striking similarities that makes me smile. Yours is so much better though!! Loving your updates, love your work. Please don't ever stop writing x