Date: Jun 04, 2012 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Truth of Her Heart
Aww they are a couple. I loved the update . Great job :-)
Date: May 30, 2012 10:04 am Title: Chapter 9 - Kiss and Tell
Love MIchael&Yannina and loved this update
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2012 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 8 - What's In A Name...
Wow this was EPIC im so glad that Jane is opening up a little bit to Michael. I like Jane's name its beautiful(sorry for my spelling). Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E
Date: May 20, 2012 04:07 am Title: Chapter 8 - What's In A Name...
Aww ...Michael is so sweet and they are getting close.
Date: May 12, 2012 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 7 - It's The Falling In Love
This story is interesting reminds me a bit of tomb radier. Update soon
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2012 02:47 am Title: Chapter 7 - It's The Falling In Love
are you kidding dear????
THIS STORY IS G-R-E-A-T ! G.R.E.A.T.
NO more,no less.
W.O.W.
IT got me captivated from the introduction!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
we're waiting for the neeext update!
rating : 100000000
Author's Response:
Thanks for your words, they mean such a lot to me. I wish I had to have the guts to be like Jane...so I am living out my personal fantasy about myself in this story, too!
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2012 10:04 am Title: Chapter 6 - Keeping Secrets
God,this story is completely A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
and I'm NOT kidding!
I've been reading it since it first appeared.And I am extremely mesmerized about it!
You have such a lovely style of writing dear!
Don't get sad because you don't have many reviews,PLEASE DON'T!
because when we write a story,we write it because we WANT ,because that's what we FEEL,not because we want REVIEWS or anything like it...
You KNOW that MANYYYYY people on here READ this with excitement!
I am sorry I haven't reviewed until now...but I PROMISE I WILL from now on!
I LOVE YOU AND YOUR USER-NAME!
( I am telling you not to get upset over reviews because I know how it is like to not have someones opinnion on your sotries..I have stories too..but I write becasuse I LOVE TO! )
MUCH L-O-V-E!
P.S. : DON'T keep us WAITING PLEASE SWEETIE!
i'm kidding,just write when you feel and have time to..
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind comment, and stay tuned! Action and drama follow, and Jane will soon have the chance to show how good she is in her chosen line of activity!
Date: May 01, 2012 01:37 am Title: Chapter 6 - Keeping Secrets
I wonder who wants to kill Michael !?!?!?!
Author's Response:
Stay tuned and follow the thread of lies and deceptions...no one is who they pretend they are and Jane is about to get involved into much more than she bargained for....
Date: Apr 06, 2012 12:19 am Title: Chapter 4 - Let's Play a Love Game
WOW love your story.Hope you update soon:-)
Date: Mar 29, 2012 01:50 am Title: Chapter 2 - ...Then We Trust
Bubbles its funny...cant wait to read more of this..
Date: Mar 29, 2012 01:45 am Title: Chapter 1B - First We Try...
I love this girl...
Date: Mar 29, 2012 01:41 am Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Ohhhhhhhhh go for the other part...
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2012 03:08 am Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Interesting story. Hope u keep writing I would really like to know who wants Michael dead and why.
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2012 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue
This sounds like a great idea!! :))