[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2012 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Turning the Tables
Ugh!! That chick has some nerve disobeying the rules... Wonder what Yannina has in store for her ...
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2012 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Turning the Tables
WOW Tatiana has some nerves. And before their was a knock at the door it looked like Michael and Yannina was going for round 2 lol. I hope Yannina catches Tatiana and the killer soon. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2012 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Only You
Ohhhhhh, that really was incredible !! So sweet and passionate
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2012 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Only You
Aww this was so beautyful im crying tears of joy. Im happy that Yannnia and Michael made love they are really a true definition of a couple. I found it really touching when Michael kissed where Yannia gun shot scar was. Thank You for posting this chapter. Wwhenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Date: Aug 01, 2012 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Only You
This chapter was so sweet..... Loved it :-)
Date: Jul 30, 2012 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 16 - The Two Contenders
I like this story can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2012 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 16 - The Two Contenders
I'm just loving this story. At first I was like 'Ehh, why bother?' but now I'm like 'OMFG!! How could I have been so stupid, this story is freaking amazing!!!! I especially, love Yannina's character.
But, I hope you keep going with this, it is really something special :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2012 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 16 - The Two Contenders
WOW i wonder what will happen next. Im really starting to get scared for Michael and Yannina im afraid that one of them is going to get hurt. But im thinking to much... I hope so. But im thinking postive as well. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2012 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 15 - A Shadow In the Night
WOW that was a very close call Yannina almost had the killer but she will catch him. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2012 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Setting the Trap
YES Tatiana didnt notice anything strange or out of place. I really enjoy reading this story. And i always think of alternet ways for Yannina to get Tatiana away from Michael and keep him safe. Like for example Yannina sneaks up on Tatiana during a dance pratice and she fights her untill she cant up and then Yannina picks up Tatiana and takes her away from Michael and Yannina finishes Tatiana off for good. But anayways that is one of the many examples i have in my head smh lol. Well Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response:
Like you noticed, Yannina still needs Tatiana around to identify the killer once they make contact. Plus she's a prominent part in Michael's show....she can't just disappear, questions will be asked. But have no fear, there will be a judgment day for Tatiana and the whole lot...
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2012 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 13 - The Silent Game
Aww Michael was a trooper helping Yannian out with her wound. Whenever you get a chance can you update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2012 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A Noise In the Night
OMG i cant believe Yannina got hurt. I hope Michael does not get hurt next. I was on the verge of tears when i read that Yannina got hurt. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2012 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The First Encounter with Danger
Wow it looks like Michael almost got hurt. I hope nothing happends to Michael and Yannina
Date: Jun 09, 2012 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The First Encounter with Danger
They are so cute together.I wonder who the killer is and the fat guy. Hope you update soon :-)
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2012 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Truth of Her Heart
OMG i cant believe Yannina's dad took her virginity that dirty a**hole. Im glad Yannina has someone like Micheal in her life he is the perfect boyfriend. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.