Date: Mar 04, 2017 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Turning Point
This is really well written, are you ever going to post more??
Date: Apr 30, 2014 12:22 am Title: Chapter 3 - Turning Point
Is there gonna be more? I just found this and I really like it.
Date: May 24, 2012 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Turning Point
Wow im speechless. But dont get me wrong this is a great story. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E
Date: Apr 22, 2012 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Sneak Peek
Hi!! You have a new reader. :)
This is great, keep it up!!
~Grace
Date: Apr 19, 2012 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected
This is very simular to 'Under his clothes' if you haven't read it you should! Hopefully this one ends better! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: Apr 19, 2012 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Sneak Peek
Mikes being rude and seductive at the same time XD loving it!!!! More pleaseeeeee :D MUCH LOVE
Date: Apr 19, 2012 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Sneak Peek
Oh, man! Why did you have to end the chapter there? I can't wait to read the rest! I love this aggressive, domineering version of Michael.
Date: Mar 14, 2012 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Just A Bad Day
its beauitful and i enjoy it very much. i read the first chapter and the sneak peak of chapter 2 on another site enchantressstories.com and i love reading ur story. i enjoy the second chapter too. cant wait for the next part of ur story.
Date: Mar 11, 2012 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected
Loving the story so far x Please continue xx
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Date: Mar 08, 2012 10:27 am Title: Chapter 2 - Sneak Peek
I LOVE it!
I think it's a lovely start !
aND i 'M the kind of person who speaks the truth!
I only say it!
I'm NOT going to lie to you..why should i? i have to be a sincere person...
So...
I lov ethe ideea so far..
WHY is Michael SO ....you know...MEAN?
:))
IT'S INTERESTING!
( want to know something? (giggling) ...when you mentioned on the second chapter that the date was ,,february, 8" , a light went on in my head :)) ..because it's my birthday then! ) :))
MUCH L-O-V-E!
waiting for the NEXT chapters!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad that you've enjoyed it so far. Michael is so... mean... well for a reason I'm sure, but we'll just have to wait and see why that is. ;)
P.S. Happy belated birthday!!
Date: Mar 07, 2012 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected
I am absolutely loving what I've read of this story. You are a very gifted writer. Enough with the torture.....please update soon LOL.
Author's Response:
I hope you will enjoy chapter 2 just as much. ;) Thank you for your lovely comment.
Date: Feb 27, 2012 02:46 am Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected
I love the way you began the story, its very unique and HOT! lol! Your writing is so professional & mesmerizing!!! you should definitely continue! Much Love, Monisha :P
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much. I'm glad that you liked the beginning. I hoped it would grab some attention. ;)
Date: Feb 26, 2012 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected
Love the story please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks! Happy to hear you like it. :)
Date: Feb 26, 2012 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Not What I Expected
wow i like this i hope you update somemore.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :)