[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2012 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 10 : Empire State Of Mind ---part3
I'm kinda confused. Are they tim traveling or something?
Author's Response: Hello PiperJackson4eva, Yeah, this is a confusing chapter, I must admit. So, Michael and his friends once trapped in a quicksand, but that quicksand it's not like the other quicksand. It sends them to skip the time and brings them to the future, when (actually) Michael and Zloavavic are married and have kids. It's really freaking Michael, Zloa, Logan, Xavier, and Syajeena out. Cause obviously, they don't believe to that kind of magic. And the reason why did I have to do this confusing chapter cause I need 'the older Michael Jackson and Zloavavic' —who are married in the future, for the next mystery case in this chapter. That's all I could explain to you. I hope you understand and stay tune for the case. Thanks for reviewing, Piper. With love :) x
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2012 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 9 : Empire State of Mind ---part 2
Lol! Lol! Lol! That must be a dream or something! And the part where we started singing cause he thought he was in heaven was hilarious.
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2012 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 8 : Empire State of Mind
Lol! "I don't want to sit in the front of the class and see your ugly face in HD." CRACKED ME UP!!! Sorry if I didn't review right away, I get distracted easily. And I wish u the best and pray that u will get through anorexia.
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2012 08:37 am Title: Chapter 7 : Zloa's Brother ---part4
Lol, this is confusing me A LOT. but I like it. I can't wait to see who's the murder.
Author's Response: Hahaha I'm sorry :). I wrote this by phone, in the midnight, I was pretty sleepy at the time. Thanks for your review :) stay tune x
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2012 11:20 am Title: just a note
Yes u should continue! I'm hungry 4 more! What makes u think u should stop this?!
Author's Response: You think so?!? Thanks so much..okay, ill continue this :')
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2012 08:17 am Title: just a note
Hey i just read through your story and its really good!! Please dont give up, i totally think you should continue. :))
Author's Response: Thanks ! It means a lot for me. I'll try :D
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2012 09:31 am Title: Chapter 4 : Zloa's Brother
Mikey got a crush! And I don't like that Vannesa chick ^-^
Author's Response: And he's so cute when jealous. Thanks for review ! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2012 03:22 pm Title: COMING SOON
Lol!!! I screamed "MICHAEL! YOU'RE THE BOMB!!!!!" that was an excellent case. I'm loving this! K
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2012 09:53 am Title: Chapter 2 : We Hate The Pie
Oooooo. Kkkkkk. I like this, keep on going.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2012 06:55 am Title: Chapter 1 : The Hell Class
Wow, a tux?? And Michael is the new kid!!! That's awesome! Keep on going
Author's Response: I'm speechless. Thank you :) . The case is on progress
Date: Feb 17, 2012 08:10 pm Title: COMING SOON
I like the idea alot. Please continue
Author's Response: Thanks :). Imma planning the first case now.
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2012 07:42 pm Title: COMING SOON
I like it. Can't wait :)